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I must admit...going for the schnoz was not the first thing I expected Spartan to do to Luna.
Entertaining none-the-less.
oh god MOAR
And I say Luna lost. Seriously, Celestia gets her flank kicked by Chrysalis and now, in this story, Luna gets a bloody nose from a 1000 year old Spartan. I you so much.
And Celestia becomes a bitch who automatically agrees with her sister, even if it's a terrible idea. GLORIOUS!
Just like Duel Nature, now that I think about it. Playing favorites much, Tia?
Edit: FOURTH!
You know, for a ruler that has had at least 1000 years of experience, Celestia was an idiot
823192 She also
~Only sent two tickets
~Showed up to the Grand Galloping Gala NAKED
~Lost to the Changling Queen
the list goes on an on, poor thing...
Well that panned out pretty much the way I expected.
Except for the pan.
Great chapter! Look forward to more!
damit, this is so good, i always want more after reading each chapter.
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I SEE WHAT YOU DID THERE!!!!
.....confound you my good sir. you drive me to throw money at my computer screen while now coming up with ideas for a story of my own.
Updated already?!
“He’s gentle with you, huhm?” she smiled wryly on one side of her mouth. “It’s not what it sounds like…” Twilight said weakly, in a very small voice. The sentence was a glass shield and she knew it. Her ears turned back, hot with embarrassment.
^^lol sure its not what it sound like Twilight.
Even at the wee hours of the morning, I am watching you
LOOOOOOOVED it!
>That cliffhanger
I hate you. WHY MUST YOU TAUNT ME WITH YOUR WIT AND CLEVER PLOT PROGRESSION!?
“He’s gentle with you, huhm?” she smiled wryly on one side of her mouth. “It’s not what it sounds like…” Twilight said weakly, in a very small voice. The sentence was a glass shield and she knew it. Her ears turned back, hot with embarrassment.
Oh, i thought you meant he was nice to you, but if you put it that way.....
I knew either something violent or hilarious would occur. I see violence won out but you managed some comedy in the aftermath at least.
It's not that she didn't thin about it this was all PLANED FROM THE START MUAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAH
Good thing I don't sleep! Glad that I was able to lurk enough to read this. Keep it up.
I'd do the same thing in his position.
OH COME ON! She clearly knew Spartan was gonna flip!
And HOOF TO THE BALLS! Priceless!
Well...that was expected. And hilarious.
Captain America style!
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PAN TO THE FACE!
Oh buck up, Luna, 'tis but a flesh wound.
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I know, right?
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And Spartan was banished to the moon for a few hours as punishment for assault against royalty. And there was much rejoicing.
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YES! It was all planned! It's a conspiracy, I tell you!
1v4, like a boss.
I don't see how that was a test...NO mention was made that Luna had reformed/been purified/whatever the hell it was the Elements of Harmony did for her but not for Discord or Chrysalis. That's like knowingly introducing a soldier who fought in World War II to HITLER alive and well mere weeks after it was all over. The fuck did she expect to happen?
"Oh hello there my greatest enemy who I fought in a war against. I'm going to be completely out of character, character that is WELL KNOWN to Celestia, who I might add surely couldn't have thought this was a good idea. And be unsurprised and peaceful toward you, the greatest evil I have ever seen in my life."
Considering he's a GOD DAMN SPARTAN. And that Celestia was still quite obviously the ruler at that time, you'd think she'd know he wouldn't be peaceful...
I smell conspiracy. Celestia turned him to stone once he was no longer needed. Is my guess.
Excellent chapter.
Go on, make your next move, I'm looking forward to it. Mainly because I read way too quickly for my own good.
Had nopony even *mentioned* Luna's return to Spartan Shield, then? I'm loving this fic in general, but in this one specific regard my suspension of disbelief is a little too severely strained. There's just no reason I can think of why this would still be a surprise by now. Ah well, the rest is certainly good enough to overcome this speedbump.
great now i can't wait for the next chapter
i have read all of the lunas stories
i have seen how stalwart and aegis fight
spartan is BAD ASS
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1000 years old and he still whuped luna's moon, if he hadn't been subdued by Twilight then every freaking lunar stallion in Equestria would be sterile.
Every country has a warrio who is above all else, but once said warrior reaches a thousand years old... he becomes a Yoda.
The entire chapter, one thought just kept going through my head.
"Celestia...you bitch."
HOOF TO THE BALLS!
Excellent
Eh, this chapter wasn't so great. It had a general feeling of "Meh" about it, I just couldn't get involved in the story.
Gentle?
OH GOD! Thats so fuckin hilarious!!!!!!
Moar
Thou hath teased us with thy clever plot progression! More! We demand our curious thoughts be satisfied!
Ok so ur telling me that an immortal being that has more than enough power to move one of the most important celestial bodies in equestria get a nose bleed from a pan? Seem legit.
Really Celestia, Really.
Spartan attacking was so obvious I was expecting her to be expecting it and grab him before the fighting started so they could talk things over, but this was supremely stupid on her part which makes it stand out in sharp contrast to the rest of the story which is fantastic.
823205 I saw most of that as her intentionally messing with others to amuse herself (hence the whole trollestia thing) and her not having as much raw power as people tend to think she has (note that all her past victories were made possible by the Elements of Harmony).
823427 This part at least does not really surprise me. He has only been back for two weeks and has spent most of that time studying so it is really not hard to believe he never heard about it from the general population. I would have expected Twilight to mention it at some point, but I can see it slipping her mind with all the other insanity that has been going on lately.
Silver Serving Pan to the nouse, the ultimate weapon there is, BUYAH!!!
That was scummy what Celestia did, to not only expect him to forgive luna for killing his comrades, but to know that she no longer was a threat? How the hell was he supposed to know that Luna had been redeemed who the fuck forgot to mention that little detail.....
This one --> <--
that is all
823438 But... he was "subdued" by Twilight.
luna is being a bitch. i would have smirked if twilight said to her.
"i just killed all of your royal guards, half of canterlot, and stabbed celestia in the neck so you could watch her bleed out, you have two weeks to forgive me"
and it's celestia's fault too. she doesn't get off the hook
cant...stop...laughing...
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OH-Ho-HOH Very gentle eh twilight?
Twilight my dear, just admit you like the muscular, beefed up, oil slicked, battle pony and get it over with
And I wonder what punishment Luna has in mind for out Spartan... I know! He has such trouble with the whole naked thing... he has to walk around naked and surrender his shield and spear
“You are right, Twilight Sparkle. I was too hasty to think he could handle seeing Luna face-to-face so soon.”
Hasty.
You. Were. Hasty...
Miss Celestia. You didn't act hasty. You acted like AN IDIOT!!!
AT WHICHT POINT DID SHOWING AN SPARTAN HIS ENEMY WITH NO WARNING WHAT SO EVER LOOK LIKE A GOOD IDEA? DID YOU HONESTLY THINK TWO WEEKS IS NEARELLY ENOUGH FOR ANYONE TO FORGET A LIFE OF WAR? WHAT THE FUCK!
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See what this guy said? That's called "logic". You should try it some day.
How the hell does somepony like you rule a country without destroying everything? Jesus!
I have a little bit of a hard time believing that Twi wouldn't at least have mentioned Luna's return after she received the invitation to dinner with Celestia.
Invite a trained, unstable soldier over for dinner. Check.
Put a variety of sharp implements that can kill other ponies in front of him. Check.
Don't tell him that the enemy he died fighting is a good pony now. Check.
Say you're dissapointed when he does what he's trained to do. Check.