Well, this should appease those disappointed with the lead-in to the sequel... that I foreshadowed the hell out of.

Anywho, glad I did this, some of the scenes in this one were just fun. If you didn't like this ending either... too damn bad!

Those last four lines of text would make a great comic

3035065 So does that mean there's no sequel then?

3035211 There will be a sequel, again, Alternative Ending is Alternative.

I like it. Better satisfies the fans of just Sparity. Good job.

good alt ending, but I still like the one you originally did. why? because SEQUEL!

>Just when I thought I had it figured ou

c'mon, brah. u fawgawt abot da T

EDIT: This was satisfactory, but I enjoyed both endings.

You know, I'd actually like it if you could combine the two endings. Have this happen first, and then Spike becomes aware of
a) Several mares look at him as something more than a friend.
b) Rarity is turned on by other mares lusting for the both of them.
c) He sees several of the mares who are his friends as more than just friends.
And as his draconic nature begins to awaken more, as he seeks to expand his 'hoard', he discovers that Rarity is alright with sharing him with their friends, and it expands from there. While his 'life mate' is certainly Rarity, he also loves the others in a similar way, and Rarity talks him into expanding the relationship. Rather than draconic nature compelling the seeking of multiple mates, it merely amplifies his lust, and the fact that his mind/body are attuned for an eternity, he's adapted to seek multiple partners over the course of his life. Not 'have a hoard of partners', but instinctive awareness that those you love likely won't live as long as you, and so the heart prepares itself to seek others' and it just so happens to happen all at once for him.

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That is a brilliant theory! But I think Path's already started with the sequel and it basically is all about what you said. Sometimes I wonder if the two of you are related IRL. Apparently you both have relatively the same style, or at the very least the same mindset.

I love this story overall, but I think the scene in the bedroom just now is my favorite.

Yeah, I like this ending a bit more, but I'll read your next entry.

Also Spike blowing smoke shapes is good and dandy, but he still can't compete with Tom.
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I can't believe it's now over. Thanks mate for the fun ride!

so there will be a sequel to this where spike has sex with the other mane 6 and maybe other ponies as well

3035610 Pffftahahaha

3035387 Holy shit lol

Very nice! Looking forwards to the sequel(s)

Only thing I caught that bugged me:
"reveling in the diea"

3035630 Idea! DAMN YOU KEYBOARD!

3035261 I blame Canada!

3035685 Is it because of our beady little eyes, or our flapping heads so full of lies?

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3035260 Sequel indeed.

3035301 Or... my way! Very nice concept work though. Much fun to be had in the future.

3035327 My mind is my own

3035349 It's very, spicy! I would say its the most passionate, fierce of them. I really did quite enjoy it.

3035387 Damn Jerry.

3035405 The ride is never ever. It'l like Hotel California, you can never leave/get off.

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3035688 No one is that friendly... It's against human nature.

3035744 I'm not your friend, buddy!

3035738 well i cant wait for spike get 4 more mares added to his harem. and maybe others like Trixie or cheerilee

I honestly preferred the first ending

epic as always but there is a distinct difference between you group sex ch and the one on one ch of clop you wright the1 on 1 tends to be more pashenit and caring like a fine erotic art but you group ones tend to be less so but tend to be hotter so and food for thought

Like always, good chapter!
Still liked the original more though.

For the record, I'll read the final chapter as an "Alternate Ending added late" rather than "The Ending of the Story": Chapter 7 is, what I consider to be, the official ending. As a result, my proofreading and especially my review of Chapter 7 will be insanely long, as it will also be a review of the story as a whole.

And you DID foreshadow Chapter 7, but consider the base-theme of the story: It was a RarityxSpike story, and really, until "Sunday Night", it appeared to be "exactly as it says on the tin", so to speak.

The reason for frustration isn't without understanding, but yeah, I'll be reaching Chapter 8 after I review 7.

3035883>>3036505 The lore in the first ending is awesome!

3035888 *shrug*

3036513 Well, that is indeed as it should be! Plus, chapter 7 is quite large. Well, in some fairness, if you had the story favorited before the end, I had been quite vocal about the direction things were going to go. They had just hoped it wouldn't hit here.

I await eagerly.

I liked that chapter way more than the orginal!

3036863 Hey, if it ain't broke don't fix it.

3035738 I completely agree with that :3

Well, I do prefer this ending to the original one, neatly circumventing as it is my problems with a Spike Harem^^

Oh by the way, I went and looked at "Man about Town". Turns out I read parts of that a long time ago. It didn't go too well^^

Wonderful ending! Just as good as the canon one! I'd have to say I like the ending ending of this much better, but in reality they're both quite good.

Wonderful job as always!

3037821 Can't beat the lore.

3038176 I look at that... and I'm crying a little on the inside.

3038216 Not as much as I'm crying: I didn't see the response because you responded on the main page, which now responds to comments in Chapter 8, not 7.

Nnggghhhhhh...

3038345 Oh right.

3038368 Don't be discouraged, though. It was a massive chapter with a lot of work put into that, and I can see that you worked hard developing the chapter. You're a great author! P-Please keep writing...

3038383 Far from it. Oh no, I'm just inspired to do better! Every error will be a lesson taken to heart.

3038564 Imagine the splinters.

And now I have the Pokemon theme song stuck in my head... I have a feelings your excited about the new Pokemon game and mega-evolutions!

It seems you hit a number of points quite nicely here. I'm surprised I miss envy. As for the roar, definitely the most primal part, which is why it was excluded here. With this part, he's sated/sating that instinct, so it goes back down the ladder a couple notches,

I'm glad those two are the ones you mentioned... foreshadowing everywhere, and having them brought up like this means I did a pretty good job doing what I intended with all of that.

3039776 What, Me? Pokemon? Psh, no, no... *hides his 3DS currently with over 700 hours on Black 2*

Tch... no. Actually, I'm keeping the spoilers of the upcoming technical aspects of Gen VI away this time, trying to keep it as much of a surprise as I can: I pre-ordered it, now it's just the wait. Heh...

Again, I can present a half-competent analysis I suppose, though I LOVE really getting into the technical aspects of a story because it makes the reader (me) all the more immersed in the experience that the author put time and effort into getting the readers immersed into. Mission: Accomplished, and I'm more than happy to be able to read a story that can truly immerse me into its world.

Also, I didn't recieve a notification for this comment (responded to a Chapter 7 comment on the main page, which responds to chapter 8), but I'll excuse it because I recieved a notification for the OTHER comment.

3040464 ... Damn, forgot about that...

I saw that, but I've never heard of it being specific

3040435 I see that 3ds!

It's not my fault! *blames Knighty*

3040631 Hence my complaints about "toe", though I didn't think I had to point out the inconsistency. S-Sorry, I should have made it more clear.

But yeah, I supposed "fingers to trace along her marehood" might work.

Once I complete the final chapter, I'll officially be going through my final proofreading & review, then make my request. Buuuut I'll certainly be enjoying this final proofreading, reading, and review: It'll be a wonderful second-conclusion to the story.

For some strange reason, the word draconic bugs me. I keep mentally replacing it with draconian.

I loved this ending a lot! although i can feel you kind of left it open so the ones that like these wrong theories of dragons being polygamus then they can think later happened the redt of your stories anyays, and people with bad taste such as me, can thing greed and generosity are perfect so they don't need third parties to be happy and hot!

thanks a lot for doing this, even though I didn't deserve it and probably you didn't do it just for me anyways but still, I mean for my harsh words I told you, but considere I really liked this story that's why i got so pissed about it.

Now, I can rest in peace

BTW, personally i loved this part the most:

As he reached her room, he opened the door with his tail and unceremoniously flopped Rarity down on the bed.

“Woah! Master!”

He tried to keep a serious face but failed miserably as he burst into laughter. “Sorry, Rarity, but it seemed too funny not to do.”

“So childish,” she rolled her eyes playfully, “but I do love that about you.”

so sad no sequel for bad taste people like me

3044344 Both would be interchangeable. They mean of dragon.

3045262 Well, you were certainly a very big part of the reason Glad you enjoyed it.

I'm surprised, I thought the part where Rarity asked Spike to move in with her would be your favorite. Although, the part you choose is horribly amusing.

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well now i changed my mind
that part you said it's my first favourite, and the other is the most hilarious one

3045483

Those last four lines of text would make a great comic

Can't say I was being subtle thinking of you there.

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which ones? could you quote them pls dear?