1251190 Okay, I lied. I took my damn sweet time reading it. And it was worth it. You've outdone yourself, my friend. The build-up was excellent, the dinner scene was absolutely inspired, and the emotional aspect was spectacular. The clop was one of your best yet. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter of this when it comes out.
I..... actually enjoyed this. I may have read it the entire time with my head cocked to one side, but I liked it. Very well written. Well done, good sir/madame.
This was nice. I actually noticed a more distinct difference between us; you're more direct and kinky while I'm more sensual and sweet. It's a nice break from my marathon writing, and this was also a nice continuation from the story. It's nice to see that we're not done yet, though. Grand work. I hadn't expected an update so soon after the last one, though.
1252100>>1252078 Louisian... Crap. Just checked it and it is indeed 21. Makes me sad. Oh well. Fact of the matter is, I'm 22. Either way, sign me up for Cancun. Or you guys could just come to Texas. I'll buy.
I'm out of words for this one. Though I had some problemns picturing how did Rarity looked like on the dinner part, overall the chapter was... Near perfect. The detail, the drama, the sex then turned into love making. I was really happy that you made that scene where Rarity confirms that the events of this weekend ar not just some goma, but a way to show her true feelings for Spike. And it may be late to ask this but... Are you using humanized characters or not? I know I should probably take the hint for the picture of Rarity, but still there are some parts I can't help but keep switching between humanized characters and the ones from the series.
In any case this story just keeps getting better and better. You have a lot of talent.
:golf clap: Well done, well done good sir. I must say that i was pleasantly surprised. To be honest, I expected the clop to go much like all your others but no, you just had to turn the clop setting to 11 didn't you?
1252256 This ones anthro. I find myself doing that from time to time in humanized or anthro fics, just because when I see the name, I already have a image in my mind.
That scene is a really great example of natural progression. It wasn't planned, but as I wrote the story and followed the characters, I realized that it was a necessary scene because it would matter heavily to Spike.
1252403 Reminds me of raiding in WoW back when I was in high school.
1252567 It will be quite a challenge. One I look forward to meeting head one, and inevitably, delaying for a unfeasible amount of time.
1252932 Must be the incoming release of Borderlands 2 affecting me.
And everything starts falling into place.
Angelic music started playing when I saw this update. Brb. Gonna read it real quick.
HALA FUCKING LULEA!!!!
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picture is how much i am happy that this updated. Screw writing, im reading shit tongiht!
1251190 Okay, I lied. I took my damn sweet time reading it. And it was worth it. You've outdone yourself, my friend. The build-up was excellent, the dinner scene was absolutely inspired, and the emotional aspect was spectacular. The clop was one of your best yet. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter of this when it comes out.
1251391 This may get me mauled by your angry readers.
1251403
grats on getting featured. you earned it this fic is one of the best i've ever read
What took you? *starts reading*
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This was angelic man!
This is... dude. I can never write as good as this. So awesome.
...I need a cold shower.
1251495 HOW CAN YOU BE UNSURE IF WANT?!
Gods dammit. Fine. Faved, you happy? Now I need to do pushups and then take a shower. Again.
HALLELUJAH SOMBODY SAY IT WITH ME NOW.
I'll read it in the morning. I'm really tired and it's late here.
1251434>>1251558>>1251564 Thank you
1251448 So many things...
1251568 Spike feels for you
1251589 I'm with you.
1251650 Yes!
1251655 Hallelujah.
1251748 Now this, I'd of never expected.
Win. You, good sir, are full of win.
1251835
1251655 2.bp.blogspot.com/_C6IGywhc1NY/TNrH9Cf4z8I/AAAAAAAAAfI/gU2_VQCGapo/s1600/hallelujah.jpg
Just got off the phone with the women I love find out I'm forever friendzoned. I need a drink. CRAP i can't get one ok what's on FiM
FUCK YEAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! GET SOME SPIKE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Oh and that pic from FlimFlam sounds like a story to me.
1251216
Found some music
1251416 i would do it myself but i haven't read any of his, her, their? work.... to the batcave!!!
1251972 That earned a chuckle from me.
FUCK YEAH PATH I OWE YOU A DRINK lets just hope where you live 18 is the drinking age if not you might have to wait a year ...or three
1251987 It's 18 in Canada. Maybe a few states too...
1251968 That... Is very appropriate. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Twilight_Sparkle_lolface.png
1251976 Yes!!! oh and i almost forgot, Octavia approves
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1252010 OK road trip to the Great North
I..... actually enjoyed this.
I may have read it the entire time with my head cocked to one side, but I liked it. Very well written. Well done, good sir/madame.
1252016 i aim to please and not in the dirty way
1252062 Thank you. I appluade your abillity to read with your head cocked to one side that long. My neck would get sore, I imagine.
1252061 Or mexico where the drinking age is 16ish... it's 16 in Germany as well.
1252078 MEXICO! I speak spanish and what better to take your mind of women then with TOPLESS WOMEN
TO CANCUN
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Oh yeah I'm so going
This was nice. I actually noticed a more distinct difference between us; you're more direct and kinky while I'm more sensual and sweet. It's a nice break from my marathon writing, and this was also a nice continuation from the story. It's nice to see that we're not done yet, though. Grand work. I hadn't expected an update so soon after the last one, though.
1252100>>1252078 Louisian... Crap. Just checked it and it is indeed 21. Makes me sad. Oh well. Fact of the matter is, I'm 22. Either way, sign me up for Cancun. Or you guys could just come to Texas. I'll buy.
1252132 CANCUN ROAD TRIP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
1252175 Now... I just need enough time to go on said trip. With college. And work. *depressed sigh*
And I just realized that I have to be up at 7:30, and it is now 1:42.
I'm out of words for this one. Though I had some problemns picturing how did Rarity looked like on the dinner part, overall the chapter was... Near perfect. The detail, the drama, the sex then turned into love making. I was really happy that you made that scene where Rarity confirms that the events of this weekend ar not just some goma, but a way to show her true feelings for Spike.
And it may be late to ask this but... Are you using humanized characters or not? I know I should probably take the hint for the picture of Rarity, but still there are some parts I can't help but keep switching between humanized characters and the ones from the series.
In any case this story just keeps getting better and better. You have a lot of talent.
When I saw this I was like "FUCK SCHOOL TOMORROW its 1 am and I'm reading this fucker!"
My Celestial the build up...the overall chapter was just just.... Beautiful!!
No words can truly describe the awesomeness of this chapter update.
You outdone yourself this time around and I can't wait to read how you'll top this chapter as I don't think nothing can top this one.
Do keep up the good work.
:golf clap: Well done, well done good sir. I must say that i was pleasantly surprised. To be honest, I expected the clop to go much like all your others but no, you just had to turn the clop setting to 11 didn't you?
1252256 This ones anthro. I find myself doing that from time to time in humanized or anthro fics, just because when I see the name, I already have a image in my mind.
That scene is a really great example of natural progression. It wasn't planned, but as I wrote the story and followed the characters, I realized that it was a necessary scene because it would matter heavily to Spike.
1252403 Reminds me of raiding in WoW back when I was in high school.
1252567 It will be quite a challenge. One I look forward to meeting head one, and inevitably, delaying for a unfeasible amount of time.
1252932 Must be the incoming release of Borderlands 2 affecting me.
1251784 Sorry, but school work and work itself kind of makes you weary.
1252103 It was supposed to take me a few days not 2ish weeks Fair enough!!
1252239 lolwut?
1253251 I understand. I was jsut surprised with how amped you usually are.
1251190Plz let ther be a Sunday and Monday
1253299 Indeed there shall.
1253317 (fluttershy yay) i hope your working on them right now