The dance scene is actually rather symbolic for their relationship. It's regal and romantic, but then it gets spicy. The Waltz and Samba are what the moves are based off. I suggest Beauty and the Beast if you need a visualization for the first part.
The thing I hate about writing anthro, especially Rarity, I have to come up with unique and beautiful sounding clothing designs. It requires a lot of research.
And then there was Monday; after that, well, I think I dropped plenty of hints.
why why whyyy you had to update this now? whyyy I was heading to bed, finally at a decent hour but now... i just can't without reading this before xDDD
While I originally came here for pure (untainted, not innocent) Sparity, this development was quite enjoyable. The bit with Fluttershy caught me COMPLETELY off guard, but was also quite...interesting and enjoyable. The scene in the restaraunt was also wonderfully done, and the emotions behind everything beautiful. This story easily could have been pure clop, but you've managed to make it a beautiful adult romance story. All my applause.
Ohh man, this story. You definitely need to do a Celestia x Twilight x Luna side story and a Vinyl x Octavia x Spike x Rarity chapter. Keep up the awesome work.
EDIT: I hope we get to see the other Elements of Harmony later.
Alright, alright, sorry, I've got to do this. *clears throat* It seems that this story has... *puts on sunglasses* reached its climax. YEEEEEAAAAAAAAHHHH!!!!
Sorry.
So much love, so kinky, so romantic. This story is beautiful! But now, I suddenly want to see what Twilight, Luna, Celestia, Octavia, Vinyl and Fluttershy will be doing ...
oh my... to be honest, this was maybe too much for me. That... um how to call it... fun sharing with third parties is not my thing, regardless I still enjoyed most of this chapter, you're amazing (maybe the best?) writing hot ronmance after all. Now i wonder 2 things: 1. Are we having a kind of harmony elements orgy or sort of in the future??? 2. Are we getting further than just monday then?
You don't have to respond number one, and is not necessary to say, I would be totally pleased if n2 response is afirmative I can forgive you if n1 is, too
tjhat's my ricuolously conservative thoughts in a clop fic, am I a weird one? maybe heh I really want to make another drawing but still can't sort the scene I'd like to draw...
Well then Path another work of art coming to a close. What can I say but congrats on the story. I would go on a big speech, but I'm feeling lone wolf like.
1913591 No, hair color and flesh color aren't the same. I actually decided on Rarity's skin color based on the blue in her Cutie Mark (That's also how they do unicorn magic color.)
1913247 Thanks. Thought I caught all of those, apparently not.
1914178 I don't think they're will be a orgy, per say. Depends on your definition of a orgy I guess. It does look like we have to advance further now. Also, that would be amazing.
1914223 Poor Soarin' will never be the same. Thanks for pointing that out. Sadly, I can't stop imagining it now.
I'm looking forward to Twilight Sparkle as well, especially now that the cat is partially out of the bag about why Twilight spent the weekend with the Princesses, knowin that Spike would get it right with Rarity once the awkardness was removed...
I wouldn't be surprised that somehow, those three (Celestia, Luna, and Twilight) got ahead and made a way to see what happened the entire weekend...makes for one hell of a monday morning and night.....
I bet that Twilight swings both ways as well...take a look at the second edition of hoof beat, that I could actually see, especially at the end...
1914854 it's your story after all, and i still love it and orgy well maybe i exagerated a bit xDD I mean... um sharing these intimate moments in a sort of group? well i guess i can handle it always they don't decide to swing pairings too
1914989 The only part that bothered me about that was that Spike doesn't actually get laid at any point. We assume he gets some off screen, but he got cock-blocked at the start.
1914834 Don't get me wrong the story is spectacular. Like.....New york's best time seller spectacular. I just have a very keen eye for mistakes. -Which is why I hate all of my earlier fanfictions but I don't have the heart to delete them-
Oh god I loved this chapter The date was definitely one of the greatest parts of this chapter. Both of them talking about their love for each other and then the dance that started out as formal to something more exciting. All the love that I cannot show through text. Also, didn't not see dat Fluttershy or Twilight coming Great work as always.
1915134 That really did piss me off as well, that it became a fish market despite having Spike (or Spyke) obviously becoming one of the main characters of the show...I mean really!! Definitely not quite up to the standards of the first issue...hell, I would have wanted Big Mac, Shining Armor, or Fancy pants showing up. Derpy showing up was cool, as well as having the princesses and cadence, but they did miss the mark on such opportunities....
I'll with you, Spike as just a cameo was complete bovine wastings...
Oh my... That was epic. I won't say it cured my hangover, but it certainly took my mind off of it. (BTW, the card game Munchkin is a great drinking game, but don't instate the rule of 'go up a level, take a shot' until late in the game. Won't finish it otherwise.)
So, the chapter. Very well done. I'm surprised, and quite happy that you went there with the Princesses and Twilight. Also, speaking of things not going smoothly, I REALLY want to see Twilight walk in on Rarity and Spike. That would be awesome. Wednesday sounds fun as well.
I have to admit this chapter was truly a great mixture of sexy and romantic all in one. Still, it was great as it shows that a variety of their friends seem to take the news pretty well.
It does make me wonder how Twilight will take it when she get back to pick Spike up...
Still overall it was a nice update and a great way of exploring how sex can be exploited in various ways.
Do keep up the good work as i cannot wait to see how this tale will come to an end.
Another update within a few weeks? That's a new acadamy record!
Fantastic chapter as always, I can see the set up for a couple of 'Bonus chapters!' some Fluttershy action? No one, man or woman, is strong enough to resist that!
1918502 At least give me some direction as to what part of my comment that was to? That could go to any of it... Oh, and did I forget to mention that you should write a story focusing on Twi and the princesses? Cause that would be hot as hell.
Fun times.
The dance scene is actually rather symbolic for their relationship. It's regal and romantic, but then it gets spicy. The Waltz and Samba are what the moves are based off. I suggest Beauty and the Beast if you need a visualization for the first part.
The thing I hate about writing anthro, especially Rarity, I have to come up with unique and beautiful sounding clothing designs. It requires a lot of research.
And then there was Monday; after that, well, I think I dropped plenty of hints.
1912723 Updated!
why why whyyy you had to update this now? whyyy
I was heading to bed, finally at a decent hour but now... i just can't without reading this before xDDD
Commence read.
That voyeur Fluttershy.
Kinky Octavia/Vinyl + Spike/Rarity ?
While I originally came here for pure (untainted, not innocent) Sparity, this development was quite enjoyable. The bit with Fluttershy caught me COMPLETELY off guard, but was also quite...interesting and enjoyable.
The scene in the restaraunt was also wonderfully done, and the emotions behind everything beautiful.
This story easily could have been pure clop, but you've managed to make it a beautiful adult romance story. All my applause.
1912883 I aim to please
Guess I'll be joining the devil after this. Can anyone tell what his favorite drink is?
By the way, you never disappoint me, Cloud!
Typo?
1913009 Indeed.
Ohh man, this story. You definitely need to do a Celestia x Twilight x Luna side story and a Vinyl x Octavia x Spike x Rarity chapter. Keep up the awesome work.
EDIT: I hope we get to see the other Elements of Harmony later.
This was amazing. Besides a few small typo's. Keep at it.
1913226 You mean the Helements of Armory
I would have called them the elements of arousal but that's just me.
I enjoyed it but I couldn't help wondering: lady orders a salad and the waiter recommends a red? Does he not want her to taste her meal?
Spike and Rarity when attitude when Fluttershy comes in, it reminded me if this!!!
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Alright, alright, sorry, I've got to do this. *clears throat* It seems that this story has... *puts on sunglasses* reached its climax. YEEEEEAAAAAAAAHHHH!!!!
Sorry.
So much love, so kinky, so romantic. This story is beautiful! But now, I suddenly want to see what Twilight, Luna, Celestia, Octavia, Vinyl and Fluttershy will be doing ...
awesome^^ i would like to read about the mane6 panty collection....XD
oh my... to be honest, this was maybe too much for me. That... um how to call it... fun sharing with third parties is not my thing, regardless I still enjoyed most of this chapter, you're amazing (maybe the best?) writing hot ronmance after all. Now i wonder 2 things:
1. Are we having a kind of harmony elements orgy or sort of in the future???
2. Are we getting further than just monday then?
You don't have to respond number one, and is not necessary to say, I would be totally pleased if n2 response is afirmative I can forgive you if n1 is, too
tjhat's my ricuolously conservative thoughts in a clop fic, am I a weird one? maybe heh I really want to make another drawing but still can't sort the scene I'd like to draw...
So, Rainbow Dash was just dragging around an unconscious man that she painted rainbow? Did they catch her in the middle of pranking a Wonderbolt?
>a rainbow colored man
:o
> of ear shoot, he
>loves dessert was matching the vibrations still stimulating her.
Should be "love's" since it's possessive.
Best thing ever to read right after waking up...
1913226 Much fun is to be had.
Well then Path another work of art coming to a close. What can I say but congrats on the story. I would go on a big speech, but I'm feeling lone wolf like.
I'm off
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1913591 No, hair color and flesh color aren't the same. I actually decided on Rarity's skin color based on the blue in her Cutie Mark (That's also how they do unicorn magic color.)
1913247 Thanks. Thought I caught all of those, apparently not.
1913707
1913764 I don't think he enjoys his job enough to care. Spike did have to ask for a recomendation. Dude didn't even suggest a course.
1914046 I know, reading books, what's wrong with her?
1914129 Dun, dun, dun!
1914168
1914178 I don't think they're will be a orgy, per say. Depends on your definition of a orgy I guess. It does look like we have to advance further now. Also, that would be amazing.
1914223 Poor Soarin' will never be the same. Thanks for pointing that out. Sadly, I can't stop imagining it now.
1914264 I'm on it!
1914707 Only because you haven't woken up with a newspaper and the winning lottery ticket
Another chapter to one of my favorite stories. I'll crack this one open soon, put on my analysis glasses, and enjoy some classy writing.
1914854
No, well....
FFFFFFffffffffffffuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu......
Alright, you win, second best thing to wake up and read...
1914749 We still have another day, mate. And then some.
1914856
1914854 Note: There were several other things, but these were the ones that really stuck out to me. :o
1912542
I'm looking forward to Twilight Sparkle as well, especially now that the cat is partially out of the bag about why Twilight spent the weekend with the Princesses, knowin that Spike would get it right with Rarity once the awkardness was removed...
I wouldn't be surprised that somehow, those three (Celestia, Luna, and Twilight) got ahead and made a way to see what happened the entire weekend...makes for one hell of a monday morning and night.....
I bet that Twilight swings both ways as well...take a look at the second edition of hoof beat, that I could actually see, especially at the end...
1914854
it's your story after all, and i still love it
and orgy well maybe i exagerated a bit xDD I mean... um sharing these intimate moments in a sort of group? well i guess i can handle it always they don't decide to swing pairings too
1914989 The only part that bothered me about that was that Spike doesn't actually get laid at any point. We assume he gets some off screen, but he got cock-blocked at the start.
1914834 Don't get me wrong the story is spectacular. Like.....New york's best time seller spectacular. I just have a very keen eye for mistakes. -Which is why I hate all of my earlier fanfictions but I don't have the heart to delete them-
Oh god I loved this chapter The date was definitely one of the greatest parts of this chapter. Both of them talking about their love for each other and then the dance that started out as formal to something more exciting. All the love that I cannot show through text. Also, didn't not see dat Fluttershy or Twilight coming Great work as always.
1915248 Most definitely.
1915345
I just realized something......The story's only going to get better isn't it?
1915398 I hope so.
1915298 Can't have things go too smoothly now
1915134
That really did piss me off as well, that it became a fish market despite having Spike (or Spyke) obviously becoming one of the main characters of the show...I mean really!! Definitely not quite up to the standards of the first issue...hell, I would have wanted Big Mac, Shining Armor, or Fancy pants showing up.
Derpy showing up was cool, as well as having the princesses and cadence, but they did miss the mark on such opportunities....
I'll with you, Spike as just a cameo was complete bovine wastings...
Oh my... That was epic. I won't say it cured my hangover, but it certainly took my mind off of it. (BTW, the card game Munchkin is a great drinking game, but don't instate the rule of 'go up a level, take a shot' until late in the game. Won't finish it otherwise.)
So, the chapter. Very well done. I'm surprised, and quite happy that you went there with the Princesses and Twilight. Also, speaking of things not going smoothly, I REALLY want to see Twilight walk in on Rarity and Spike. That would be awesome. Wednesday sounds fun as well.
I have to admit this chapter was truly a great mixture of sexy and romantic all in one. Still, it was great as it shows that a variety of their friends seem to take the news pretty well.
It does make me wonder how Twilight will take it when she get back to pick Spike up...
Still overall it was a nice update and a great way of exploring how sex can be exploited in various ways.
Do keep up the good work as i cannot wait to see how this tale will come to an end.
Another update within a few weeks? That's a new acadamy record!
Fantastic chapter as always, I can see the set up for a couple of 'Bonus chapters!' some Fluttershy action? No one, man or woman, is strong enough to resist that!
Keep up the pace of chapters!
1916532 I enjoyed the Appleshy bondage
1916684
1916931 Indeed.
1917904 I updated Saturday Morning to Saturday Night faster.
1918502 At least give me some direction as to what part of my comment that was to? That could go to any of it... Oh, and did I forget to mention that you should write a story focusing on Twi and the princesses? Cause that would be hot as hell.
1918621 Bottom part
1918778 MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! This is gonna be good!
1915529 As do I.
1918502 couldn't let me have my joke...
: hey Spike, mind if you repay me for saving your life
All that needs to be said is "PERFECT".