2860021 I'll try to be open about it. I've already had my say back in "Rarity's Punishment"; and while I had to fight against my dislike for the setup quite a bit during this chapter, I'll keep trying.
Look, I know you like SparityLight and all but dropping it like a deus-ex-machima-threesome (like Rarity's punishment) really puts me off. "Hey Spike, I see you two finally hooked up. I love you. Let's have sex."
I'm also a fan of Spikeharem but when it's not about loving them but needing to love them, it just feels forced. I would've liked this fic more if it just stayed Sparity. It's more special that way. (Though occasional threesomes are always allowed :) )
I'm totally fie with Spike having a harem of course. After reading this you really need to do a side story of everything that happened to twilight up in Canterlot over the weekend.
2860021 It sort of did for me. While I'm not completely against harems (especially with mutual consent from ALL members), I find it easier to take in and more powerful when focused on just a particular pair. It makes what they do all the more special. At least here it is justified in some way.
28605572860478 I expected a few of these, obviously. What you guys are going to like about the sequel is that it will focus heavily on each female with Spike on a one on one level, with the occasional push from others. Twilight is by far the fastest rush into this, but it serves a purpose, as she explains. The rest are going to be built up like Rarity has been, with varying degrees of success and some very unexpected events. Let's just say there's going to be two characters who are almost never shipped with Spike, and I have never written before. The parts I've got for them in my head are just, um; it's so right.
I'll admit, I was hoping for a one-on-one relationship but the fic certainly isn't ruined by any stretch of the imagination.
I love the draconic lore you've built up and the nice way it seems to fit in with the little bit we know about dragons from the show. I'm very much looking forward to the sequel epecially the part where Spike tells AJ the situation:
: So... AJ... ummm it turns out I need a harem of at least six to keep my lust in check. Any less and I'll go into a rampage worse than when I got greedy. The upshot is that it has to be true love or it won't work. Oh, and I only have a few weeks before this happens! Wanna go on a date? Then after, maybe you can help me figure out how to seduce Rainbow!
:What.
---
Also, I do hope the sequel answers one major question: Pregnancy. If Spike can knock them up, I hope we see kids.
2860943 Well, I believe that you hinted at them being in a relationship with eachother so it would make sense that they'd be happy with just eachother and not looking for another partner.
Also, two other mares that are barely shipped with Spike added to the mix still gives the minimum of 6
And now that I'm done reading, I must say this was enjoyable. I also like how you've hit all points I've made in my fanfics, except this is pure clop. In one of my stories, I already expressed that Dragon's show extreme emotion in my stories and such. Nice to see that we're on similar levels.
Sorta. I dunno, I'm gonna stop comparing myself. May or may not read the sequel. I enjoy harems but I would like it if Sparity was exclusive... oh well, wait and see.
2861015 Dragon's Notebook and Bahamut both deal with Wrath, with DN reaching more extremes, and Marshmallow Lighter is supposed to get to Lust at some point (although it'll be handled differently than here for obvious reasons), but it's nice to see that people are exploring the Seven Deadly Sins for dragons. :3
Yes! You included my sarcasm lines! It's probably silly to be happy about that considering you threw in more than a few of my side notes, but I loved that one so much more than most.
2861148 Damn, now I'm interested. Any chance for a PM with possible details about them? (not that it'll influence the 100% chance that I'll read the sequel)
Okay. Normally, this kind of setup would be something I wouldn't like, especially if it's dropped out of nowhere. However, this wasn't. While Twilight's actions right at first seemed out of the blue, her explanations made a lot of sense, and you've been salting the story with the clues regarding a dragon's complicated emotional nature every time we get Spike's perspective. And the basis for Twilight and Spike fits as well. Now, given the emotional nature of dragons - for which hoarding makes a great deal of sense - it also makes sense that Spike will discover long overlooked feelings of 'more than friendship' for the others, and he now has a reason - biological and emotional - to pursue them. Besides that, looked at another way this will make their group bond as friends stronger, and I've always been of the opinion that there are actually SEVEN Elements of Harmony (seven colors in a Rainbow, after all) and that Spike is the seventh Bearer if they ever find the Element.
Very well written, the sex was very hot, and I'm looking forward to how each of the other mares joins the hoard/herd. Although the reasons almost make me think that - if it happens - the orgy scene chapter (SpikexMane 6 all at once) should be called "Taming the Beast".
2861179 You, you, yes! Not only have you been paying attention, catching the foreshadowing, taking in the characterization, but you put it all together. This was always, always the plan. It's the whole reason I gave Twilight a sexual relationship with the princess, had her come up multiple times throughout the story, and built a concern around her finding out. There were a number of people who figured it out beforehand, rather because of the reasons above or they just wanted it because it would be hot, and that was the idea! Twilight's appearance is sudden and at the moment where Rarity is so hot and bothered that rejecting the idea of a three-way is really low. Everything played into that moment, and the sex was build up to the dialogue instead of the other way around as is the usual case. TAKE THE MUSTACHE; YOU EARNED IT!
2861235 Yeah, it even made sense for Twilight to present herself at point of least resistance. It actually happening was too important to risk Spike trying to be a gentledrake and say no, so she had to get in when Rarity would be wanting it. Once it happened, her reasons for why - she did it because she loves Spike so much - made it feel real. ...admittedly, I think Twilight really needs to learn to stop talking during sex. It can be a real mood breaker. Beyond that, Spike and Rarity's thoughts regarding Fluttershy - and the thoughts Spike has had regarding the other mares, like when Pinkie groped him - are indicative of his feelings being more than just friendship. And now that he knows his natural state will push him to have more lovers and those involved are okay with it, he will pursue it. And, being the gentle drake he is, he will make sure any mare going in knows what they're getting into and are okay with it.
Given what Spike said about Celestia treating him less like a son and more like a young stud, I could actually see Celestia and Luna getting into the mix, too.
Edit: Given that you used 'Twilight' icon and not 'Alicorn Twilight' icon, am I to assume that this takes place before "Magical Mystery Cure"?
2860021 As long as you write a side story about Twi's anal adventures with the Princesses then I don't care what the hell you do with the main story! Have Spike claim all of Ponyville as his own! Turn Fluttershy into a BDSM freak! Have Spike enslave all the mare in Equestria! As long as that side story is written I don't care
2861259 Yeah, the whole Newtons law thing, so very Twilight. You are so getting the idea, and I love it!
Well, at this point it's more AU because Twilicorn didn't happen. Not that I have anything against it, but it would have created a few issues ands trange add ins at this point in the story.
Can't believe we're at the end. Well, not the end, since the all important sequel with many twists and turns and sexy funy times is to come.
Hopefully, this chapter doesn't ruin the story for anyone who was infatuated with the one on one relationship.
Like seeing the updates and all the reviews upon such a great and well thought out story.......
2860230 I know. Where would I even find such a story?
Wait a minute, did this get reviewed by someone? I think I actually did miss that if it happened.
2860021 Nope doesnt ruin it
As much as I'd like the one on one relationship, we got a good reason for it, instead of 'hey, why don't you fuck all my friends as well?'
Can't wait to read the sequel!
2860318 Goal Achieved!
2860021
I for one am looking forward to the next story in your series. I got a taste with the third story, now satiate my attentions with the second!
2860325 Well, there's only one way to know when you get around to it!
And.....click!
2860021
I'll try to be open about it. I've already had my say back in "Rarity's Punishment"; and while I had to fight against my dislike for the setup quite a bit during this chapter, I'll keep trying.
hey will he also get Luna too?
Look, I know you like SparityLight and all but dropping it like a deus-ex-machima-threesome (like Rarity's punishment) really puts me off.
"Hey Spike, I see you two finally hooked up. I love you. Let's have sex."
I'm also a fan of Spikeharem but when it's not about loving them but needing to love them, it just feels forced.
I would've liked this fic more if it just stayed Sparity. It's more special that way. (Though occasional threesomes are always allowed :) )
That was glorious and slightly hilarious! Way to set up for the next story too.
2860021
Sequel?
I will watch for it.
I'm totally fie with Spike having a harem of course. After reading this you really need to do a side story of everything that happened to twilight up in Canterlot over the weekend.
2860021 It sort of did for me. While I'm not completely against harems (especially with mutual consent from ALL members), I find it easier to take in and more powerful when focused on just a particular pair. It makes what they do all the more special. At least here it is justified in some way.
2860557 2860478 I expected a few of these, obviously. What you guys are going to like about the sequel is that it will focus heavily on each female with Spike on a one on one level, with the occasional push from others. Twilight is by far the fastest rush into this, but it serves a purpose, as she explains. The rest are going to be built up like Rarity has been, with varying degrees of success and some very unexpected events. Let's just say there's going to be two characters who are almost never shipped with Spike, and I have never written before. The parts I've got for them in my head are just, um; it's so right.
just as good as the previous ones
2860672
Two characters that are barely shipped with spike?
would those be substitutes for a certain cowpony and weather mare?
2860021
I'll admit, I was hoping for a one-on-one relationship but the fic certainly isn't ruined by any stretch of the imagination.
I love the draconic lore you've built up and the nice way it seems to fit in with the little bit we know about dragons from the show. I'm very much looking forward to the sequel epecially the part where Spike tells AJ the situation:
: So... AJ... ummm it turns out I need a harem of at least six to keep my lust in check. Any less and I'll go into a rampage worse than when I got greedy. The upshot is that it has to be true love or it won't work. Oh, and I only have a few weeks before this happens! Wanna go on a date? Then after, maybe you can help me figure out how to seduce Rainbow!
:What.
---
Also, I do hope the sequel answers one major question: Pregnancy. If Spike can knock them up, I hope we see kids.
>Drooling was trickling down Rarity’s chin as she felt
r u fckn srs??? cmon
And so it ends. Good job sir. You earned it.
And a side story of what happened to Twilight in Canterlot?
2860708 Not quite. Remember, at least six But I will say this, one of them comes from Dash's part.
2860806 Yeah, playing with what's there and keeping it viable to the show is one of my fun fortes.
It will be quite the amusing conversation, and also very deep into something heavily hinted on.
2860891 I have no idea what you're talking about
2860276>>2860554>>2860933 Good to hear. And jeez, you guys are never letting that go... good.
2860943
Well, I believe that you hinted at them being in a relationship with eachother so it would make sense that they'd be happy with just eachother and not looking for another partner.
Also, two other mares that are barely shipped with Spike added to the mix still gives the minimum of 6
2860342 Yeah, you were supposed to be tagged into this comment 2860672
Also, I love my build up for the sequel!
2860964 It does, but minimum. Things with them are complicated, which I also hinted at, but right idea.
And now that I'm done reading, I must say this was enjoyable. I also like how you've hit all points I've made in my fanfics, except this is pure clop. In one of my stories, I already expressed that Dragon's show extreme emotion in my stories and such. Nice to see that we're on similar levels.
Sorta. I dunno, I'm gonna stop comparing myself. May or may not read the sequel. I enjoy harems but I would like it if Sparity was exclusive... oh well, wait and see.
Also needs more cowbell.
2860996
I'm a lesser man for being somewhat disappointed that it's not gonna have AppleDash
2861005 Yeah, one day I'm going to read Castle and finish Dragon's Notebook... one day.
2861009 I never said that.
2861015 Dragon's Notebook and Bahamut both deal with Wrath, with DN reaching more extremes, and Marshmallow Lighter is supposed to get to Lust at some point (although it'll be handled differently than here for obvious reasons), but it's nice to see that people are exploring the Seven Deadly Sins for dragons. :3
2861023
Let me clarify: for not having (lasting) AppleDash (since them getting in a harem is not as special as a plain relationship)
Yes! You included my sarcasm lines! It's probably silly to be happy about that considering you threw in more than a few of my side notes, but I loved that one so much more than most.
2861085 "Sarcasm isn't an emotion; its a way of like" - Weekenders
2861030 Again, complicated.
I'm going cuckoo for sequels!!!!!!
2861148
Damn, now I'm interested.
Any chance for a PM with possible details about them? (not that it'll influence the 100% chance that I'll read the sequel)
Okay. Normally, this kind of setup would be something I wouldn't like, especially if it's dropped out of nowhere.
However, this wasn't. While Twilight's actions right at first seemed out of the blue, her explanations made a lot of sense, and you've been salting the story with the clues regarding a dragon's complicated emotional nature every time we get Spike's perspective. And the basis for Twilight and Spike fits as well.
Now, given the emotional nature of dragons - for which hoarding makes a great deal of sense - it also makes sense that Spike will discover long overlooked feelings of 'more than friendship' for the others, and he now has a reason - biological and emotional - to pursue them. Besides that, looked at another way this will make their group bond as friends stronger, and I've always been of the opinion that there are actually SEVEN Elements of Harmony (seven colors in a Rainbow, after all) and that Spike is the seventh Bearer if they ever find the Element.
Very well written, the sex was very hot, and I'm looking forward to how each of the other mares joins the hoard/herd. Although the reasons almost make me think that - if it happens - the orgy scene chapter (SpikexMane 6 all at once) should be called "Taming the Beast".
2861148 so if this is done are you goin back to conquests?
2861150 http://www.fimfiction.net/story/105053/the-conquests-of-a-dragon
He already started it
2861179 You, you, yes! Not only have you been paying attention, catching the foreshadowing, taking in the characterization, but you put it all together. This was always, always the plan. It's the whole reason I gave Twilight a sexual relationship with the princess, had her come up multiple times throughout the story, and built a concern around her finding out. There were a number of people who figured it out beforehand, rather because of the reasons above or they just wanted it because it would be hot, and that was the idea! Twilight's appearance is sudden and at the moment where Rarity is so hot and bothered that rejecting the idea of a three-way is really low. Everything played into that moment, and the sex was build up to the dialogue instead of the other way around as is the usual case. TAKE THE MUSTACHE; YOU EARNED IT!
2861222 No! Conquest is the third part, and until I start and get into the second part, Building A Dragon's Hoard, I can't continue Conquest.
2861227>>2861150 That is indeed one of them
2861248 you sir have made me very sad
2861235
Yeah, it even made sense for Twilight to present herself at point of least resistance. It actually happening was too important to risk Spike trying to be a gentledrake and say no, so she had to get in when Rarity would be wanting it. Once it happened, her reasons for why - she did it because she loves Spike so much - made it feel real. ...admittedly, I think Twilight really needs to learn to stop talking during sex. It can be a real mood breaker.
Beyond that, Spike and Rarity's thoughts regarding Fluttershy - and the thoughts Spike has had regarding the other mares, like when Pinkie groped him - are indicative of his feelings being more than just friendship. And now that he knows his natural state will push him to have more lovers and those involved are okay with it, he will pursue it. And, being the gentle drake he is, he will make sure any mare going in knows what they're getting into and are okay with it.
Given what Spike said about Celestia treating him less like a son and more like a young stud, I could actually see Celestia and Luna getting into the mix, too.
Edit: Given that you used 'Twilight' icon and not 'Alicorn Twilight' icon, am I to assume that this takes place before "Magical Mystery Cure"?
2860021 As long as you write a side story about Twi's anal adventures with the Princesses then I don't care what the hell you do with the main story! Have Spike claim all of Ponyville as his own! Turn Fluttershy into a BDSM freak! Have Spike enslave all the mare in Equestria! As long as that side story is written I don't care
...seriously, write that side story
2861259 Yeah, the whole Newtons law thing, so very Twilight. You are so getting the idea, and I love it!
Well, at this point it's more AU because Twilicorn didn't happen. Not that I have anything against it, but it would have created a few issues ands trange add ins at this point in the story.
2861252 Well, you still get updates in the series.
2861307 Okay, I just need, a sec to stop, laughing. Simply too great.