“Bring every last one of them to our doorstep, then drag them to hell with us!” That was the plan. We know nothing of peace. Equestria knows nothing of war. With the monsters we brought to their kingdom, we must now both adapt or become extinct.
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7253478 Basically King Hurrand ordered a bunch of cosmetic adjustments to the armor that the soldiers hate but they can't do anything about because, well, he's the friggin king lol
7288176 Ya that's back when I had honestly just started writing seriously. I kept meaning to proofread all of it but I got so sick of reading the chapters at the time lol
Lol, Hurrand is a king alright! The king of all dicks ;p
to be honest the king is kinda right money is the most important thing in war
That's a crazy way of beginning the chapter, but makes sense because of the horrors he experienced when his head was chopped off, among other horrific deaths he experienced.
Oh Lucretia. She's always there when needed. <3
What a powerful moment. She can only be there, but that is often enough.
This says a lot about her and how methodical she is when dealing with her own emotions. It's also very sweet that she became a sort of den mother for the others. After all they've been through, they really do need one.
That image...so powerful. Especially when juxtaposed with the soft moments at night.
That is one of the most terrifying things you've ever written. It shows everything about the battle without having to say it. Heck, you could write explanations like this and have not described the battle and I'd still get the horrific implications of what had happened.
That last line shows how much he really cares about Lucretia. If Luna had never been a part of the picture, I wonder if maybe they'd ever have been together, though I honestly see their relationship as more of a professional/honor-bound one than anything.
Aww that's sweet, but also sad. There's so much pain here...
that "jittery movements" and messy appearance coupled with the "waiting to be ambushed" look is perfect for describing everything I needed to know about this scene. it's phenomenally well done in such short sentences. You have a skill with that :)
I thought "Maybe you should stay there Celestia. They really need you..."
Heck of a question. She understands the trauma they face.
Sad but true...in some situations. But especially in their lives. Thought Celestia has a better point at this very moment.
Such a sad moment. To see a potential breakthrough and have it ruptured. But considering what they've been through, there was never an easy solution to begin with.
This is the first time I recognized a visual description of Raiden, cause honestly I didn't really feel it was needed before.
hehe :D
AWWWWW so cute! I love that their finery is like...just a shawl. :)
Oh...oh great.
From this first moment the king started doing this I just felt he wouldn't escape justice this time. Too much tension building up...Also that donkey and bowel movement line is amazing :)
Oh hey! Twilight Sparkle is finally mentioned by name! Also happy to see Luna sticking up for Raiden, cause she's already had it with this bozo.
What a noble act even when placed there by such horrid means.
The king's reaction to this part makes me so upset, I had to stop reading and get up for a bit.
I'm glad Raiden points out the truth within his story so the others can know it.
I like to see Raiden fighting back here.
I feel so bad for Raiden...
What a clever bunch of bastards....
I remember helping with this description (and the longer 3 paragraphs that accompany the crown description). It worked out well! Very intricate. You can tell the crown was of great importance and all the little details about it.
;_;
Aw that' sad, but also endearing that he loves her so much he couldn't correct her.
Aw. Luna parallel.
Need a question mark at the end. Also, good contrast of titles there.
AWWWWW so cute their flirting! :D
This was such a charming description. easy to imagine how he loves her because of it :)
TOO SOON, RAIDEN. TOO SOON. :P
It's so fulfilling to see him finally be appreciated after everything that's happened. :)
I want some honey and sugar now. And I still want those pancakes I mentioned a few chapter reviews back.
Awww she's twitching! She's not used to being petted with HANDSSSSS :D
BOUT
FRICKIN
TIME
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AWHAHAHAH SO FRIGGIN CUTE AND FLIRTY (Oh so fab, Raiden <3 )
It's so wonderful to see how her scarf is much more meaningful than a crown. :)
This was an amazing grouping of chapters. My gosh
You did good, Raider...you did good.
And that's another sweet/sad moment for Raiden, and the Mane 6 are mentioned again - when are they going to appear, and where's Spike, and the element's families (specifically Applejack and Rarity, and Scootaloo - even though she's not family, RD and Scoots are close)