“Bring every last one of them to our doorstep, then drag them to hell with us!” That was the plan. We know nothing of peace. Equestria knows nothing of war. With the monsters we brought to their kingdom, we must now both adapt or become extinct.
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I love a good battle-planning chapter. :D
Looks like things just got serious! I love Celestia stepping up to the fight!
This is exciting to see Raiden, Emeris and...actually it doesn't say who the third one is. Possibly Cy or Lucretia I assume.
I can tell this is about to get even more awesome now that an air force has been mentioned...
HAH YES. Talk about tactics!
This is formatted in such a way that confused me a bit at who was talking. Perhaps it could be formatted like the following:
Celestia looks a bit surprised. “I wish I had thought of that. They are also capable of making minor tornadoes as well.”
Emeris chuckles. “Now you’re talking, princess!” She smiles a bit.
I love it! :D
Quick-thinking on Raiden's part saved them when their ride could have ended horribly.
Oh dang. That was unexpected. I expect he'll be relieved of duty very soon...
Awesome visual!
I often forget about their coordinated efforts. Nice going putting that in there! It really is a key trait of the Wonderbolts. :)
QUIT HOT-DOGGING IT, EMERIS. :P He got too into the moment. It was a pretty awesome moment, to his credit, where the Wonderbolts saved him.
YES SPITFIRE IS HERE. I love how you strategically introduce the major fan-loved characters at different points in the story, never doing it too quickly.
Nerd moment: Are they civilians? I thought they were military. It is an awesome tactic though. :)
FOURTH WALL'D! kinda :P
I love the implications of lightning in a bottle
Oh, kinda like smoke signals or fire signals, but in aerial pony form! NICE! The intelligence of these characters constantly intrigues me and makes me keep coming back for more :)
YES
ALL OF MY YES
Gosh, this story just keeps getting better and better! :D
The Wonderbolts !
Yeah, there’s really not.