“Bring every last one of them to our doorstep, then drag them to hell with us!” That was the plan. We know nothing of peace. Equestria knows nothing of war. With the monsters we brought to their kingdom, we must now both adapt or become extinct.
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Simple. Nuke 'em from orbit!
7173354 Only way to be sure.
flametrhowers
Even knowing that he would fight Luna, he still has trouble with it.
Sneaky changeling! I knew it was a changeling when the color was green, well...I suspected it :P YOu leave all this wonderful little clues for the observing reader
TEAM LUCRETIA 2k16
I actually thought (because I kept going back and forth wondering if it was Zaran or a changeling) that this was Zaran possessing her. If that's what you meant, Nice throw-off! Even if not, it's still good!
CHANGINGS ARE ATTACKING (I knew it :P )
any way ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
I can repay you ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
I love these bits of unexpected comedy. They really lighten the mood and appear at JUST The right moments in the story :) I feel like Cadance is perfect for this.
I think it's both honorable and sweet how he looks away, being a gentleman about it while also caring so much about Luna.
OH I would be terrified of a possessed Lucretia. However, storywise, that sounds amazing! I'm glad you keep bringing this stuff up. The reader has to know what they could be in for, and if you keep letting them know possibilities, you lead them down expected paths...and then BOOM. SUBVERSION of expectations!
Whoa. Before this chapter, I did not expect changelings to be working with Zaran. That is...wow, good side-step of expectation! Like I was saying, ya know!
Oh no. That is not good. O.o Nightmare Moon levels...
Glad you pointed out the key problem they're going to be facing. Geez, this is getting INTENSE. :D
This is what I can understand from this chapter:
Zaran has the changelings working for him
Zaran either can possess other beings but how is still unclear
Discord (and some guards) are kidnapped by Zaran
And Zaran feeds on misery...
Why do I feel like this is a mutated version of the Tantabus?
By who?!