“Bring every last one of them to our doorstep, then drag them to hell with us!” That was the plan. We know nothing of peace. Equestria knows nothing of war. With the monsters we brought to their kingdom, we must now both adapt or become extinct.
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Good tense start to show Lucretia freaked out by the new information on Zaran, at least speculation-wise. I also like how Raiden is just sitting, letting Lucretia do the freaking out for him.
Definitely all hypotheses they are unsure of, but good ones.
How they might be manufactured is a horrifying thought.
Lucretia that's...that's not one question. That's SIX questions. :P All part of a very good line of thinking though. Lucretia is quite the analyzer. She feels distinctly different in how you write about her versus Raiden and Emeris.
That is an interesting connection...
That is very grim, but I'm glad he's honest with her so she knows the stakes. No time to take it easy on anyone in this situation. Not revealing the truth would be very dangerous.
BEST LUCRETIA QUOTE EVER...so far. :)
Definitely a challenge, but Zaran might not know that, and even if he did, he would be weary of what unknown reinforcements Cadance would bring.
Aww he's still nervous around her. That's adorable <3
AWWWW. A flirtatious flap, if you will. A feminine flit. A feisty flicker. A...okay that's enough :P
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I want some pancakes now.
AWWW she saw that coming a mile away that sneak! :P This is wonderfully hilarious. I wonder if any guards saw
This is all an intriguing way to connect the fight back to Zaran from Luna's interactions with Raiden. he had an epiphany through her flirting, which is a great double-purpose for the scene that builds character relationships.
Wow, this is so COOL!
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God dammit he looked pathetic when he refuse to attack the fake Luna twice, but I guess it made sense