“Bring every last one of them to our doorstep, then drag them to hell with us!” That was the plan. We know nothing of peace. Equestria knows nothing of war. With the monsters we brought to their kingdom, we must now both adapt or become extinct.
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Will the Princesses be badass in this story?
7016059 I'm glad you're still alive. Are you still working on your stories?
7021673 all three princesses get their chance to shine. I also give Luna and Celestia their equal shares of ups and downs.
Nice. Actually really enjoyable. I'm looking forward to the continuation.
7029228 they're in the middle of a war that goes balls to the walls brutal so good timing for youlol
7029874 Yeahp! Let the carnage begin!
wrong decision my friend
Excellent way of setting up the stakes at the very beginning of this intense chapter. I LOVE IT! You have a way with grabbing the reader from the get-go. An enviable skill, by all means. :)
Yes! An awesome tactic you've mentioned in a previous chapter.
"morale" instead of "moral" :P
Harsh, but he needed to hear that. It's also a good throwback to a previous battle to let the reader know that some things occurred which they were unaware of.
I love this consideration towards morale. Important to keep the troop attitude up so they won't falter in a fight. Good focus!
Dang, their stupidity is a danger in a way I never considered! Never underestimate the power of stupid enemies in large numbers.
This is so endearing to know how much they matter to him. He's their brother in a very close bonded sort of way and to consider that they might die is painful to him. It shows he has a good heart. <3
That's both really sweet and really sad. They could only do so much, but they tried what they could before they were killed. :/
Lucretia just keeps getting more and more amazing as time goes by. I think I remember you saying you wanted to make a side story with her, unless it already happened.
It's sweet to see them interact like this :) It's also sad to see that Luna is so capable but isn't really given the chance to show it.
Another awesome set of traps that's unique and simple. :)
I had a feeling you were hinting that this would happen to someone...good foreshadowing!
NICE! Good mention of something relevant within the MLP world, and the nameless mention of Zecora as well. :)
It's endearing to see this caring grow in Raiden's heart. It shows growth as a character as well, and makes the stakes that much more important.
Aww that's sweet. :) Emeris is great. He's like the voice that explains what other think about Raiden sometimes. :P
Instant complication which makes the scene that much more tense and frantic.
That's pretty awesome! Not sure why it's happening, but I have my suspicions. :P
I love this loyalty resorting in some very great tension internally. It's a good example of how Raiden won't fall to military training if he's trying to save a friend.
Gosh, this is so TENSE I LOVE IT
OUCH! Geez that reads so painfully...
This scene works so much better after you set up the Emeris scene earlier. It helps establish that something is happening within the characters which is now to be expected. Good setup!
This is pretty epic! It's awesome to see Celestia get back into the fight after having been so caught up in her own emotions earlier thanks to some heavy losses. Helps re-establish reader trust in her.
Aw, love magic <3 :P I had thought Cadance was buffing Emeris and Raiden, but perhaps not...or Luna, but I didn't see her take credit though...
This is an amazing speech which displays all of his emotion at once. Absolutely fantastic. :)
Yep. Expected that info and expected that reaction. Good ending to a chapter!
THIS IS SO GOOD
"morale" instead of "moral" :P
Celestia for deity's sake please don't explode into fury... Go and do that to King Harrand instead
As somepony who was once feared both before and after becoming Nightmare Moon...I can believe that.
Crap!
I thought that because of the tittle he would have some sort of necromancy power but I guess he’s a dragon now