“Bring every last one of them to our doorstep, then drag them to hell with us!” That was the plan. We know nothing of peace. Equestria knows nothing of war. With the monsters we brought to their kingdom, we must now both adapt or become extinct.
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I can see that image is really important to Raiden. It makes a lot of sense since he had to garner a reputation to survive in the military.
He really does have nightmares about this stuff, it seems. But being forgotten is a great fear to someone who's fought to save so much. He just wants someone to save him in their memories.
I love this image of the dog general and how it's clearly an EXTREME exaggeration, because know he's getting silly with his self pity.
Awwwww Luna is the boop Queen
I felt shivers at how cute she was in this scene. Luna makes so many things better <3
The fact that he almost cries in front of Luna says a lot about the depth of his fear. Being useless is far more scary to Raiden than dying, as was shown when he was on the battlefield.
The exaggeration here is what makes it comedically sad.
That one line says a lot. "Stop forcing things on me!" As soon as he said that, I thought about what Starswirl had did. Loss of autonomy is what bugs Raiden here. He's been pushed around so much that even when Luna levitates him to help, it's a clear violation that really hurts him deep inside.
change "eachothers" to "each others"
Awww their affection for one another is so endearing and tear-inducing ;-;
This is a very important step in understanding someone who's been through abuse and had their free will violated.
Oh sneaky and clever Luna. At first when I read this, I thought it probably wouldn't go well, which is part of the next line where Raiden thinks it could backfire. But later i saw so many ponies appreciating Raiden and could see that maybe Luna wanted him to ask them questions. :P
Change "he" to "her"
Security never seemed to be a concern for Canterlot. I understand Raiden's concern with it, especially after what he's dealt with at Taraska Castle, which is the first time I remember it being named by the way.
"Defendable" seems like it might be a correct term, but I am unsure. I am sure, however that you could put "defensible" instead and it would be correct. :P
I also love how they've fortified Ponyville :P
Change "EVeryone" to "Everyone"
Hehe I love the awkwardness of this scene with a GIANT human to some little ponies trying to be friendly when he's not used to it.
Ah, he's so brave for a little pony!
I feel like Raiden just gained Paragon Points with that entire group just by being inspiring. :)
And at that moment, they realized they basically had the equivalent of a warrior god in their presence XD
WHOA RAIDEN CHILL THE BUCK DOWN. But I get it. He needs to be weary of having to defend himself whenever something seems amiss. And here the ponies are definitely acting spooked.
I just realized something...Raiden is on the verge of freaking out with the colts in the same way they freaked out with his soldiers when they attacked them in Ponyville! That's ironic. :P
YAY! They have names! Names which make sense as brothers :P
Aww I like the term "goodcolts" instead of "goodguys" :P
I'm glad you actually went back into a flashback real quick to show what happened after this. It was a cool moment that deserved being relived. :)
Just enjoying the reminder of this fun and quirky moment :P
Oh I remember her! I think she was the one he tried to rescue when his soldiers were setting up a line and he was stuck deciding whether to rescue her or reinforce the line with spears and then Lucretia jumped to her rescue. Let's see if I'm right...
All very important questions. Raiden has always proven to be an incredibly aware and intelligent leader who isn't afraid to question. I think his abuse in the military is what has led him to question so much, to be honest. Imagine how little he would question if he was honored for everything he did as well as everyone around him.
A very good question. Raiden has been through. I think he can recover though, considering how much he has grown to care about these ponies and love Luna. <3 <3
This is really good! I so desperately wanted to read more of it, but I understand what we discussed about chapter 28 and 29. :D I look forward to the next part. Take your time!
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Yay! Thanks! :D
With all of the bullshit that you’re going through, probably not.
Kinda reminds me of a guy I served with back in ‘08. Toughest motherfucker I ever knew, took two shots and keep going when we got hit by an ambush. But he sees a girl he likes? Guy would freeze and light up like a Christmas tree.