“Bring every last one of them to our doorstep, then drag them to hell with us!” That was the plan. We know nothing of peace. Equestria knows nothing of war. With the monsters we brought to their kingdom, we must now both adapt or become extinct.
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7238205 Doh! Thanks lol
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That is terrifying, but an excellent way to offset the overpowered nature of being immortal, at least storywise. It is a crazy concept. I LOVE IT.
Someone needs to get Raiden a T-shirt that says "100% Badass" cause to have a leader willing to do this is amazing and crazy at the same time. The fact that he crosses his arms and waits patiently is even more incredible.
These paragraphs here are some of the best descriptions you've EVER written in this entire story full of great descriptions. The quickness of the wording. The pacing. The word choice, like how it shrinks down as he dies...it's all perfect!
GOSHDANGIT that SUCKS what an A-hole Garge! The soldiers watching rightfully freak out at this. Though it makes sense the Garge wouldn't just let him get back up so easily
It's getting more and more insane as the battle goes on. The fact that the pain and death becomes more and more common just adds to the lunacy of it all
THAT is a very dedicated soldier right there. It's like I'm watching some horrific divine battle...
Every bit of death is just...it's just poetry at this point. To see it happen, move on...it subverts the human desire to prevent it. utterly wonderful descriptions
That's so heartbreaking to hear that one is so broken by his fighting that he cries as he continues the battle, while others mutilate corpses to get their anger out. The one thing I thought about this immortal battle was that now every soldier who survives will have a terrifying story to share with the ponies...
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Oh that's...that's an intriguing question. no reason they couldn't learn over time like any other soldier...
Ah, more tactical displays! I like these
YEAH...right? I was a bit worried at first cause of King Hurrand and all...
WHOA. In one moment, you have shown how amazing Versa is in combat. And now that helps me understand what her unit can do as well. THIS IS AWESOME. it was a bit hard to follow her technique, but I got the basic idea :)
Another moment summarizing the carnage and how close they are all to defeat. It's good to have these spread out amongst the battle chapters so readers can always get an update on the current stakes.
OH CRUD. The deaths are so quick they become a problem. That's something many battle writers don't take into account. i'm glad you did.
HECK YEAH. Princess Luna of Taraska
Final wind! A grand opening to attack! I completely forgot about Cadance's Crystal heart in all of this.
Sadly, couldn't risk leaving them just standing there after Zaran's cruel tactics
I bet the Wonderbolts were getting revenge for what the Og Nag did to their buddies.
Zaran is so big and huge...yet so petty. What a wonderful contrast :D
THIS
WAS
AN
INSANE
CHAPTER
AND
iT
WAS
AMAZING
No turning back now.
They all do.
Smoke? Sombra?