“Bring every last one of them to our doorstep, then drag them to hell with us!” That was the plan. We know nothing of peace. Equestria knows nothing of war. With the monsters we brought to their kingdom, we must now both adapt or become extinct.
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Well I am back. After beating Chrono Trigger and completing the outline for my novel, I feel a little read and relax is in order. Well read, review, and relax. Let's get started shall we?
Good opening so far. I like the reference to Luna's cape of bats. Luna has always been more intriguing to me then her sister. Something about the night has always allured me than the morning. I guess maybe because in the morning I have to get up for work, and I want to sleep in lol.
You know? I noticed that none of the MLP villains have ever been killed. Well save for Sombra, or if you follow the comics than disregard the Sombra comment. But most of the time the villains don't die. They are either depowered or imprisoned. I guess killing off baddies wouldn't do for a show about friendship and understanding. I guess seeing something like this is a little new for Raiden. I guess in idyllic lands like Equestria things are picture perfect. I admit sometimes I wish Equestria would be a tad darker. I mean everything can't be perfect.
So they have gotten to the palace. I gotta say, I've always found that Equestrian buildings are always larger on the inside than they are on the outside. I guess that could be cartoon physics but I dunno. Overall it was a nice description of the palace. Very show accurate. And so we end with the introductions. Wow. I find my reviews are getting a bit shorter with each one. But I guess that depends on the length of the chapters. And this one was short.
But it was as good as the rest. So don't doubt that. Well I guess the full introductions to Canterlot will happen in the next chapter. I am eager to see how that plays out.
awww Raiden's a bit of a cinnamon roll <3
I really like this sharing of different ways between the cultures. And I feel this establishes some really important things later
Awwww ;_;
Ohhh what an interesting moral decision here. Very intriguing yet simple in its execution. complications will arise later, no doubt...
That's adorable <3
I love how sweet and charming you make your character interactions. You have a great way with dialogue combined with character action descriptions :)
I feel like this is almost a parallel to how some bronies feel about the pony characters and their near-perfect lives. Extremely happy to see it, but some may be angry at not being able to achieve that themselves.
Awww, but I'm glad you brought this up, because it is realistic that luna deals with so much crud after what she's been through.
Very nice rest chapter for the characters. Good to see them enjoying the time together. I like seeing characters happy and you do well with description :)
Canterlot in a nutshell....
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