“Bring every last one of them to our doorstep, then drag them to hell with us!” That was the plan. We know nothing of peace. Equestria knows nothing of war. With the monsters we brought to their kingdom, we must now both adapt or become extinct.
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7228454 So you're thinking it would be better as if he was remembering it, and it was told as it was happening, instead of a choppy dream sequence? I considered doing that, but I'd have to include a long thing of details and at the time I just wanted the chapter over with.
Oh..oh dear
Okay, so my first reaction was "oh great, how cruel can they be?" but then I thought... "Wait...where did they get foals from? And why don't they ask Stormchaser what she saw? She might have some enlightening info. one of my first thoughts after the initial horror was "What if they're changelings?" But then you're left to try to find out how to prove that without accidentally killing a foal if they were not changelings. This is an INCREDIBLY clever plot on Zaran's part (though it is horrible)
I FOOKING CALLED IT :p
Oh...oh dear...That's brilliant!
OH SHOOT! That was CLOSE. If Lucretia had been any slower, she'd be toast.
Gosh dang Lucretia is so clever. Attacks the one that doesn't know protocol.
And even MORE brilliant idea. Man, I love Lucretia's intelligence. She's SO AWESOME!
I am angry because this is so incredibly clever as a tactic.
WHOA
That's a heck of a way to end a chapter...
The fact that cadance sighs makes me worry...
YOU'RE SO GOOD AT THIS /)(^3^)(\
What catch is that?
And this story got waaaaay more confusing than I thought - WHAT IN THE BUCK IS HAPPENING RIGHT NOW!?