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While I would dislike for the fact it is beastiality, I knew what I was getting into. . . But for what you tried to do, good job.
Not my cup of tea, but its not all that badly written. I'll give it a thumbs up on the latter part. Good job.
good job. i feel dirty
A good premise, but the writing needs a little work. The intro was good for a 2nd person fic, the approach was novel, and fluttershy's reactions seemed genuine; but the actual 'action' was rather stiff. If I can describe, it was like you were trying to narrate what was happening to a blind person. Your just going through the motions A does this, then B happens. I'd suggest focusing more on what's going on through Anon's head; ESPECIALLY since this is second or first person. Don't just say it felt fantastic. The warmth of the canine's length, the surrealness of the situation, the taste, use your senses.
I'd also mix up the reactions a little. A lot of it felt like variations of moans and gasps. Show some of the non audio reactions! This is, again, especially important for non third person if you want the viewer to substitute themselves with the character.
Good effort, and definitely a premise I'd like to see more of! Have a watch.
Well that was quite...polarizing.
I thought doge and Anon were gonna DP Flutters but nah, realized I misread the warnings
. Not my cup of tea. At least you're not being bashed for it and some enjoyed it, which is good.
I'm not good at English I use google translator
Will there be a sequel?
Will there be a version of the comic?
Can someone translate this into Polish?
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There is no sequel, and I do not plan on making one. There is a prequel, without Anon: Fluttershy's Fetish
I do not plan on doing a comic, and I do not know anyone who would.
I do not know Polish but I hope you find someone who does to translate for you.