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Good news: The idea was pretty nice. I must say, you had me right from the cover art.
Bad news: First of all, there were quite a bit of grammatical errors. Also, I think some scenes could have used more descriptions, because some of them go to the clop rather quickly. Try putting more emphasis on the male's love of Pinkie's musk, as it seems - to me, at least - that he enjoys it more than anything.
A human with the futa mane six is what I would like to see more of.
I loved this! Musk play is one of my favorite things! There seriously needs to be more clopfics involving it!
7206333 Just out of curiosity: what physically impossible fetish might that be?
7206357 Oh. Yeah, that could be tough to accomplish, even for Pinkie.
7206476 Thank you so much. I was honestly getting worried with all the dislikes this was getting, but it seems to have evened out a little by now.
This is an excellent story. Even though I don't really read much futa stories, this one caught my attention. And to be honest, I'm glad I decided to read it. As for making a series with the mane 6, I know exactly how hard that can be. There are times when I've struggled. But in the end, the stories were fun to make.
Have a like and a fave. You've definitely earned them.
7206895 Thanks. Really the problem with making this a series is that I really wouldn't want to write the same story 6 times with different characters. I'm not sure how different I can make it.
I'm Impressed, keep up the good work.
7206958 You could change up their roles in bed and have the human's personality vary in each one.
7207123 To be honest, this is almost a shameless self insert story. I'm not sure I'd want the male character be anything but the sub. My initial idea was to have each story focus on different fetishes. I.e. this mostly focuses on musk play, Applejack could be bondage focus, while Rainbow Dash could be body worship. I might still do that, but I'm not sure. I'm not going to do it for a while though, if I am.
7207181 Would Flutters be a gentle and sweet dom?
7207444 Maybe. Probably, Very likely.
I love this! I would like you to make a series, but if you can't that's quite all right, seeing as writing clop can be difficult for me at times when I run out of ideas. This is the first futa on male I've read that's in second person view and I have to say, I may become obsessed with this type of story now thanks to you, which is a good thing because I do need a good thing to read everynow and then. Keep up the good work!
Oh fucking lord this fic. BJ scene's barely even started and I have to stop reading this for my own health. I can't take any more. I can't walk anywhere near straight and I've already cum at least like 4 times . ;n;
7207181 If this is a self insert fic, are you me? This is already contending for my favorite fic. (Current holder: http://pastebin.com/9X99Exjz) Please, I beg of you for my sanity, make more. If not the rest of the Mane Six, can this get a Pinkamena second chapter or so?
I'd easily give this story 50 thumbs if I could.
7208971 Thank you
Like I said in an earlier comment, I might make this a series. But not yet at least. Right now, I want to work on something a little different. And as for Pinkamena... I'm not sure how well I can write her. I personally like the happy, bubbly Pinkie more than her slightly psychotic alter ego.
7209102 Heh, well Pinkamena doesn't really have to be utterly psychotic heh. She can just be cold/meaner. Since your normal Pinkie was already this dominant. I was interested what you'd write Pinkamena like. :-!
Obviously I'm just curious and in no way biased. D:
Don't look at mah profile pic! >.>
7209102 I mean, I'm hopeful, chapter is named "Chapter 1" after all ;3
7211872 I'm sorry but I don't think I'm going to do a chapter with Pinkamena. It's named Chapter 1 just because I couldn't come up with a subtitle. Never say never though. I don't want to make any promises, and, like I said, I'm going to be working on something different for now. You know what, as I was writing this comment, the concept for a Pinkamena chapter came in to my head. So, maybe some time in the future.
7211937 Heh, I was really just being silly as something came to mind, but gee, that's great news if you aren't just messing with me. xD
Hope you have fun writing the other stories though. It can get rough >~>
7212250 I'm not messing with you, I actually did think of a Pinkamena continuation. And I'm sorry I misinterpreted your silliness. Communication is hard for me sometimes, and I don't always pick up on stuff like sarcasm or flirting for example. But yeah, I've already started on a new story. No Pinkie or Pinkamena involved though, unfortunately.
7212271 Well, you've definitely gotten back at it faster than I have, and the ";3" was meant to be a sign I wasn't too serious, but no worries.
Is the next story like this or something completely different? .3.
7212742 It's going to be very different. Another subby 2nd person perspective, but with Equestria Girls, Applejack
, and no futa unfortunately. I don't know if I want to say what it's about exactly, but I promise it'll be very fetishy. Whether or not you enjoy said fetishes, I can't say. It's probably going to take a pretty long time to write though, so don't hold your breath.
7212781 D:
Writing does take forever :c
I wrote one story and I'm like "nope, never again"
7212984 Especially with attention problems. "Well, I wrote two sentences, better check Facebook. Who knows what could have happened in the ten minutes it took me to write 20 words?"
7213018 Heh, even with my ADHD, I never had that problem. I was more just. "Well shit, what can I improve?" or "Hmm, wait, that doesn't make any sense. Time to redo this."
Almost half-negative ? I wonder why.
*2nd person story*
Ah... I see.
7215658 Is that really the reason for it? I know some people don't like 2nd person but really, that much? My first clopfic was 2nd person too, and that way better received, even though the fetishes in it were way freakier. Honestly, I feel like I got me some bad popularity because of my MaudxTwilight rapefic, but I hope I'm wrong.
7215690 From what I know, there's an overall ''disdain'' for 2nd Person stories, pretty much anywhere on the Internet.
For people to 'love' one, with little to no opposition, especially if a large number of people find it in a short amount of time, it has to be Epic-level storytelling or something like that... Let's just say that, from what I saw, it's a rare occurrence.
(Side-note : Rape or ''rape'' stories are a very... niche... kind of stories. So, they either live or die quickly or quietly, by themselves.)
7215825 Well, one problem with 2nd person stories is that it basically has to more or less coincide with how you'd actually feel about the situation or else it just feels off.
good job! I love this clopfic more than anything
7207181 Please do that if you can those two alone sound amazing.
First of all, thank you for keeping Pinkie happy and bubbly in the story. It leaves it reading as though she does these things for the human's benefit as well as her own. She wants to make people happy, and if that means essentially turning them into a living condom, then so be it!
The world needs more happy doms.
DAMN. So many of my kinks in one story. MASTERPIECE. People are too unaccepting of futa stories, they can be so much fun.
One of these days I might actually finish this story without blowing my load halfway through...
One day...
Awesome
Unedited picture link in PM?
7215690
Can you make a futa on female version of this story please