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JujubeLand


Behold! I bring you the written word! ...That is all.

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Huh. Interesting ship. I never thought of this paring... but it actually makes an inkling of sense. I like that.

I'll give you kudos, for a paring that makes sense but has never been done before and for being the only clop fic or hell porn in general that ever got me to laugh unless you count the porn parody SpiderBabe, I'll give you a hint on where the webbing comes from, it ain't her wrist.

As for this fic, this had 70% genuine emotion and this one of the few mature fics, that doesn't make feel dirty after reading it. It was relatively harmless. It was also well written, heartfelt and funny as hell.

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Peace Out.

It was pretty good. Pinks is one of the three mane six that I can forgive for being shipped with males, and this pairing, as NG said, actually makes sense :twilightsmile:

706761 Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it.
707055 Lol, yeah...with Pinkie Pie, you can't help but have humorous moments. I appreciate the positive comments.
707105 I'm surprised more people haven't caught on to this pairing, but I suppose it's understandable considering how minor of a character Joe is. Thanks for the read.

@JujubeLand

Hmm intrigueing, but I I'm completely in love with your choice of relationship, I mean Pinks and Donut Joe. How did I never notice that before!:pinkiegasp: their like the bestest couple in all of equestria! Oops sorry, got a bit distracted there. Outstanding job sir/ma'm, you have just earned yourself a watch, and honestly I would enjoy seeing more of this relationship, with a little less clop, if you catch my drift. No hard feelings:twilightblush:!

707153 very good, but i think you would have amazing success with a non cloppy version of thsi story, it was a really good plot (and i mean plot, not pony ass) up till it got cloppy, and i genuenly felt happy for pinke and joe having a foal

707439 I understand where you're coming from. What I was going for in the "clop" sections was to actually enhance their relationship, showing that even when they're doing things a little...unusual, their love and care still shine through.
707406 Heh, thanks for that. The more I thought about it, the more the two of them as a couple just made sense. I'm glad you thought I portrayed it well. And to settle the matter once and for all, it's "sir." :eeyup:

707530 still....a clean version written in this style (and especially the "ive got a bun in my oven bit", that was funny) would be very good, and it would make you a very popular writer :scootangel:

very romantic and i find thats were a lot of fics fall short it was a good read...faved it:pinkiehappy:

this was wonderfully done good sir
please take my star and thumb as tribute to the writing gods that have blessed you with the skill to create such a wonderfully tasty fic

708169 I agree...far too many clops are just about the physical actions, neglecting the intimacy and closeness the characters should feel if you really want the reader to be emotionally involved. Thanks for the read and fave.
708185 Can always count on a few positive words from you, GI...always appreciated. :yay:

708274 you know that i always say good things about you?
:pinkiegasp:
am i being counter stalked?

708301 No, I'm just observant.

Wait...stalked? :rainbowderp:

708316 just dont look out your window.... :pinkiecrazy:

“WE'RE HAVING A FOAL!”
At that point my mind blanked out. I could not think straight. I know she'd make a good mom, with how cares for Pound and Pumpkin Cake. But, with how she bounces off the walls and goes temporarily insane. I cant imagine how the little guy/gal would act. Good job, loved the story. :pinkiehappy:

717569 Thanks for the read; I hope you were able to process the rest of it after Pinkie's joyous exclamation, given the state of your brain. :derpyderp1::derpyderp2:

707055

I agree to the fullest!

Aww, that is so romantic. Thumbs up!

For as...peculiar as this was, that was actually very sweet. I do genuinely believe that, with a little time, Pinkie would actually make a very good mother. She was just new to the whole thing with the Cake twins and probably just panicked since she didn't know what to do.
Also, someone should make a band called "Fellating the Eclair". That part kind of made me laugh. Among other things...
Anyway, good job. There's not enough proper romantic clop out there.

758873 Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed the story and got a few laughs out of it as well. And yes, I think Pinkie would be a good mother, especially after she learned her lesson with Pound and Pumpkin.

Never before have i had a such a violent orgasm. Thank you sir, for all those amazing feels.

Zay

It took me way too long to get around to reading this, but I enjoyed it thoroughly. The confectionery kink was a good touch, I must say.:rainbowlaugh: Sweet sentiments.

Looking forward to reading more from you, mate. Great read, none to my surprise.

846281 Heh heh...sweet sentiments...because there were donuts...I see what you did there. Anyhoo, thanks again for the positive comments. Be sure to check out my new one when you get a chance!

This is really cool: not only is there a solid plot (no pun intended :p ) that links episodes, but there's a strong passion between the natural couple and good writing. Your stories are simply awesome :rainbowkiss:

Again this is not my preferred pairing as I feel more accustomed to her and Discord being together, but as your other submissions have shown you write it well enough to love them no matter what!!! :pinkiehappy::heart:

It was a great story, I enjoyed reading the shipping between the two of them.

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