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sniper125


Part-time writer; Full-time lover

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YES
YES
YES

HAHAHAHAHAHA
:rainbowkiss:

And then they all bucked. The end.

And years later, foals were running around giving headaches to the zebra and the stallion as they continued to jump from here to there.

Not enough Zecora clop

>>foxbrony777 You silly filly :rainbowlaugh:

Adorably cheesy and adorably cloptastic.


Frankly, that's enough to call this a fic, and not "just another clopfic".

Being a fan of Crowley's stuff, it seems you have a good grip on the idea of story along with the passion and romance that goes into a GOOD clopfic, much like Crowley's.

I recommend continuing to develop your storytelling skills. With a bit more practice, you can make some GREAT stories, accompanied by that nice little side dish of clop. I can feel it, bud!:raritywink:

599113
Yay! I made a reader happy! For the record the story was written with the idea of being a little cheesy but I think I went a little overboard :twilightblush: Thanks so much for the supportive review and I hope you enjoy any others I write! :twilightsmile: though it isnt a clopfic (yet) you might want to have a read with my two series as they show a more in depth look at what I can do although The Musical Giant is kind of old... Thanks again!

Wow, I didn't take zecora to be a filly-fooler. But it was an amazing story!!:pinkiegasp::pinkiehappy::rainbowwild::raritywink::twilightsheepish:

600386 but Krooked is an adult... :rainbowlaugh: I always saw Zecora as slightly older than the other characters so her dialogue was made to sound like that. I can see why you thought that but he is fill grown.:twilightsmile:

Okey, but anyway it is such a nice story. It shows us that you shouldn't judge people by sight but by their heart.:ajsmug::twilightsheepish::twilightsmile:

600858 Why thank you! I might do another more in depth story of another character but I'm not surenwhich one yet...:twilightsheepish:

Zay

Holy buck, great job. I laughed at some of Zecora's lines. XD Great.

604533 god I am loving this positive feedback! I'm working on another story as I type this so be ready for another story soon!:pinkiehappy:

i won't judge what characters you use for your next story but just make it as good as this one:ajsmug::pinkiehappy::twilightsheepish::twilightsmile:

604974 you Gog it partner :ajsmug:

Are you by any chance refering to the actual well known dj/producer Krooked (as in Camo & Krooked). If you are, someone please tell him, just for his reaction:rainbowkiss:

606512 Actually my original intention was too use my friend's nickname which is Krooked Bass.:twilightsheepish: But then it hit me there was a DJ named Krooked as well :pinkiegasp:

THE RATINGS ARE NOW EVEN!!

611779 :rainbowhuh: I noes get it are you refering to thumbs?

Hay here is a read through of this story enjoy all you bronys :pinkiehappy:
Youtube Read Through

705974

You have made my day :D

705974

Also is it alright if I use your image as my new cover? I just love it! If I can could you send it to me? Thanks!:twilightsmile:

708696 sure I'll find a photo bucket site and make it downloadable unless u want me to send it a different way but if that's ok I'll send it to you tomorrow k :pinkiehappy:

715583

WOOH I love it!

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