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Gilda has a talk with Rainbow Dash after she is sought out following the party that seemed to have destroyed any chances of renewing their friendship. How far will Rainbow's determination to get back her friend take her?
Inspired by Breaking Bonds by AcousticBrony and PrinceWhatever!
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This is a little oneshot I made in my spare time at school!
nya!! love it!!
I am giving a thumbs up primarily because you wrote a story where Gilda and Rainbow Dash become friends again WITHOUT blaming or trashing Pinkie.
1161418 I never really thought it was Pinkie's fault considering none of the pranks were hers anyways. I always felt Rainbow left somewhere around the the time Fluttershy did which kinda ruined the friendship indirectly.
1161371 thanks :D
this was better than I thought it would be. and I already thought it was going to be pretty awesome, considering the song it's based off.
1168100 I'm glad you liked it! I just finished the rough draft on another story so expect some more soon!
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awesome! heh... snoipeh...
I like the idea behind this story, but it could really use some editing to smooth out the grammatical errors. There are quite a few that were distracting me as I read, particularly ones where the meaning of the sentence is different than what (I'm pretty sure) you intended, such as Gilda saying RD chose her over Fluttershy. In the context of the story, that should be the other way around.
I'd be willing to edit this and PM the edited story to you if you'd like.
Also, I think it would be interesting to see what happens after the events of this story, such as Gilda moving to Ponyville, finding a place to stay, and forging friendships with the others.
1175227 i am SO sorry for the grammar issues! I wrote this on paper and my iPod during school because I'm grounded from my iPad and computer.
If you'd like to PM me an edited version I would appreciate it!
this is amazing.
There need to be more!
1240315 im considering a sequel once I post my next story!
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Almost 100 Weeks... where is that Sequel?
Seriously though, this was really cute and if you should find it in your heart to continue it, I bet you would make a lot of readers happy
4771187 I'm mainly focusing on other projects right now but a sequel is always in the running for my next story! Once I finish The Star of Luna's Night I'll look into this story again
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That would be lovely!
I'll try to find the time to read some of your other stories in the meantime