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GabladeRunner


Hello people of the Internet! I'm GabladeRunner, and much like you all, I consider myself a Brony. I wrote a lot of Pokemon fanfic on my dA page, and figured it's about time I tried this.

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Rainbow Dash has been living a secret life, leaving Ponyville in the middle of the night to meet up with her lover, Gilda. However, the secrecy of their relationship must come to an end, at some point. How will the Rainbow's friends react to Gilda's return. How will Rainbow reveal her true self with Gilda? The world may never know...

Alright guys, this is my first story, just to let you all know. Another quick note is that I haven't sent this through an editor yet either. So, feel free to give me your constructive criticism, and maybe some tips for the future, as I am pretty new out here. While typing this up, I'm not even sure how to submit a story, let alone edit this later for chapters, just to give you a hint as to my level of experience. Anything that you've got, though, I'm all ears! Thanks for reading!

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 11 )

I'm finding it surprisingly hot.

Why can't their be more GilDash stories?

You Huntern05 here~ :D

Awesome start on this man, it was great! :D

Well well well, heheheh, nice way to end this one chapter *wink wink nudge nudge* But seriously though, awesome!

GilDash? hmm. never heard of that ship.

Keep it up man! :D

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Word!

This looks really promising. No "Complete"-Tag? Awesome!!! :rainbowkiss:
I was afraid this would only be a oneshot.
Can't wait for the next chapter!

As always, another awesome chapter well done :)

Well well well, Rainbow I'd ask but I already know ya secret~ ^3^ I'm telling Twilight and Pinkie~ *laughs manically*

Freaking Pinkie, she needs to take her medication... like legit. XP

No mistakes whatsoever and an awesome job well done once more, keep it up man! :D

This is getting juicier by the second.

Pinkie's imaginary friend is named Charlotte...and she's sassy.

I'm down with this.

I got to admit I like this story, the pairing, the pacing, the detail.

You're doing very well but this just seems so out of character for both Twilight and Pinkie Pie, why not just ask Dash like three grown adults? Seriously? I would not be surprised if she never wanted to be friends with anything of them again and it's not something I can see Fluttershy, Applejack or Rarity even doing...I would suggest a different route, other then that everything is good.

And a good idea thrown into the shitter

You can’t hide from us anymore, Rainbow Dash. Secrets are sins. May Celestia be my witness, I will make sure you be honest with your friends, no matter the consequences.

Says the pony behind the Mare Do Well fiasco. Also! Secrets are sins?! Geeze, Twilight! That's being pretty harsh, don't you think?

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