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More stories about Night Light and Twilight Velvet? Yes please!

Super cute and sexy little one-shot you have here, there's really not enough fics about these two considering it's one of the few canon couples in the show. I happen to be writing a sexy story about these two myself, so I'll definitely recommend this one to my own followers. I'm glad you wrote it.

Might not be a story to share with your mother though. :twilightblush:

--CG

2556382 I'm sure the author's mother would be proud to know their child write good pony smut on the internet.

I mean who doesn't?

It was sweet and sexy, but Twilight's letter stole my heart. Especially the "I can't kiss you to make it better, so I'll kiss the letter instead" bit. :x

Pretty good! You should defiantly write more fics like these. :twilightsmile:

The problem is...Shining had just came home and accidentally walked outside the door when they were at it and heard everything. Everything!

:anyway, I am faving this just because the sweet part at the begining.

Goddamnit, I freakin' love Twilight Velvet.

Bowchickabowow, this was a nice read. Love the sentiment behind the story. :ajsmug:

This ship makes too much sense. It's so logical when compared to some of the other ships that end up in the featured box, it's practically a crack pairing.

How comes we still don´t have any avatars of them in the tag list? Seriously now.
Loved it, it was so lovely, sexy and funny like that sneeze during the dirty talk~ <3

Can't say I've ever read this kind of fic with Shining's and Twilight's parents in it before, but you did good. :twilightsmile::raritystarry::pinkiehappy::rainbowwild::yay::derpytongue2::eeyup:

2556382>>2556386 "I'm so proud of you, son, what with all your stories about cartoon ponies doing it." Somehow, I can't picture it. Anyway, thanks for the positive comments!

2556421 Right in the feels.

2556458 I should "defiantly" write them? So I should write them in a defiant manner? (The correct spelling is "definitely.") That aside, have you checked out any of my other works? If you like sweet, sappy, and sexy, you'll find quite a few more in my little library of fics. Thanks!

2556838 ...and then, years later, when Cadence was sick, the memories came flooding back, and he defied her illness for a night of unbridled passion. I'm glad you liked the beginning; hopefully you enjoyed the rest of it as well.

2557157 She needs more stories about her, especially her and Night Light.

2557525>>2557700 Thanks much!

2557708 It was a shot in the dark, but I think I made it work somehow.

2558116 That's EXACTLY what I thought about the avatars! Seriously! Matilda the donkey gets her own avatar, but not Twilight Sparkle and Shining Armor's freaking parents? What the heck? Anyway, thanks for the positive comments; I'm glad you enjoyed the various aspects of this little story.

2558380 There need to be more that feature them. 'Nuff said. Thanks!

2558417 All too true. What say you, Twilight?
:twilightangry2:- Appalling grammar aside, my face speaks louder than words ever could!!

Uh, and there we have it. :moustache::scootangel:

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True dat, i mean how many fics does Matilda the donkey have compared to Twilight Velvet and Night Light? I´m pretty sure we´ve seen more fics with those two in playing an important role than with Matilda or even Iron Will. Though i like Iron Will so we should keep his avatar. And make more Shy ship chapters with him.^g^

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Really? That's too bad. I think mine would probably smile, shrug, and ask me if I was happy with how they turned out.

2558415 Hehe, that was auto-correct. :twilightsmile:

And yes, I "definitely" will. :rainbowlaugh:

Consarn it JujubeLand! :ajsmug:
You beat me to the punch, as I am planning or releasing a fic for mother's day as well with Velvet and Night-light! I love this pairing and there is waaaay not enough of it.
Honestly, the story was a tad cuter than what I normally go for in my pony smut, but I enjoyed it nonetheless. The main thing is you took two characters that honestly have no character defining traits in the show and made them your own. Good work, you get a thumbs up.

I will have to change the title to my story though... who'da thunk for Mother's Day there would be a bunch of stories with that title lying around. :trollestia:

I don't normally read Erotic Fiction, but when I do, I find the author has written the characters believably and really shows how much they love each other. Excellent work.

2559215 Well dad gum, pardner! Ah hope y'all 're gonna write a dern tootin' good fic 'bout them two lovin' ponies! :ajsmug:

Thanks for the comments! I love it when someone pays me compliments about things in the story that I tried to accomplish. Makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside...

Also, still love the Rariy + Gifts Ungiven pic.

2559274 Thanks! Have you read any of my other works? I know you said you don't normally read Erotic Fiction, but I feel that if you enjoyed this particular piece, you may like those as well. Whether you do or not, I do thank you for the positive comments.

2559756
I do not believe I have, but if you put the same amount of effort into them I probably would enjoy them.
I think I'll go do that now. :pinkiehappy:

Comment posted by Nolimitsux deleted May 11th, 2013

Implying everyone has a mother.:trixieshiftright: Still, great one shot.

Ah yes, celebrating mother's day with a fic in which mom gets laid. :pinkiehappy: Woot!

2561942 Everyone does, whether circumstances have caused the pronouns to become past tense or not.

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I saw your name and was about to bitch at you for not having posted the second chapter of Act Two, but then I went to look at the story and it turns out that FIMFICTION IS A BLOODY %%^%& %)&^e$% THAT *&*&%^&)%^&^_*(%^&%%$#%&*)^%^&^& PROBING and it DID NOT inform me of the update two months ago. Going to read it now.

This was just so sweet. Definitely refreshing, considering that most of what I was expecting for Mother's Day from the clopfiction crowd is going to be incest. :ajsmug:

Now that I'm done fapping, I REALLY should work on that Mrs. Cake drawing I was going to make for my mom for mother's day.

2562178 Damn skippy, son. Moms need lovin' too. Hear that, all you dads? Get to work!

2563228 Well said.

2563560 Go and read it already! I hope it's good.

2563989 Thanks! Writing sweet stories is what I do, and I'm glad you liked it. As for the other writers, well...they'll do what they'll do, but I've never been a fan of incest.

And a Mrs. Cake drawing? I'd love to see it when it's complete.

2564503 Experience is the bestest teacher.

Yay a new story from you!:yay: Now I have an excuse to stare at your awesomely silly avatar again!:derpytongue2:
All jokes aside, I loved this story(as per usual), although I don't think anyone who's sick would be so willing to get laid.:pinkiesick: But, hey, what do I know?

On a final note, first time I clicked this story to read it, my computer gave me some gateway error crap. I swear, I was about to go all :pinkiecrazy: on its proverbial backside. STOOPID COMPUTAH!:flutterrage:

2565053 Awesome Fluttershy is awesome.

Glad you liked the story! The way I see it, Velvet's willing to accept any sort of pick-me-up, especially if it's from the stallion she loves. The fact that he's still eager to make love with her despite her sickness would probably turn her on as well.

I've had the gateway error a few times myself. If it's not a server issue on the website, it usually goes away after a few more tries.

2564503
Oh, yeah, sorry about the irrelevant comment bro

2565321 No big. Hope you enjoyed the other story (and this one, if you read it)!

2565324
THAT'S what I forgot to do! Holy shit man, sorry about that. I just read the other story and went to bed.

Hot! Very romantic! :heart: thumbs up! :moustache:

2565328 :rainbowlaugh: Well I hope you like it!

2565651 Thanks man!

Aww... that was so sweet :twilightsmile:

2603175 Thanks! Feel free to fave and thumbs-up it if you like, and if you liked it, check out my other stories as well!

This was a rather nice romantic clop. Lots of feels, and erections. Very nice.

2709577 That's what I think every time I sit down to write a story: "All right, how can I acquire the maximum number of both feels and erections?" Thanks for the comment!

Two months late in my Read Later list. Glad I finally did. :pinkiehappy:

2838051 Happy you enjoyed it. Thanks!

3135010 Thanks! Glad you liked it.

Short yet very sweet (and smexy too. :trollestia:). BTW, mother's day is coming up on Sunday this week, are you planing to write another Night Light x Twilight Velvet clopfic soon? :yay: :fluttershysad:

That was sweet. My wife is actually sick for real right now, and this story made me smile.:pinkiesmile:

Though, of course, if he's susceptible at all, next week it will be him being tended by her. That's just one of the things that one accepts in a marriage -- sharing diseases. :pinkiesick:

2556382 Oh wow, I just came across this story again and saw your comment. Foreshadowing of greatness in the comments of another great story, eh? :rainbowlaugh:

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