In this story Twilight, being an Alicorn, lives a long time but not forever. So, she makes a deal with Discord. She will live forever as long as her zenith doesn't come. If you don't know I'm referring to the ultimate happiest point in ones life, that would be the zenith. She has outlived all of her friends and even her lover. Twilight feels as though she needs to live on in order to protect others. The reason why is not shown in this short story. The story is slightly morbid and sad, so don't let it ruin your mood! Take a peek and find out what happens. *Note* Discord is Discord and has Discord powers for the purposes of Discord in the story.
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Discord you beautiful evil bastard you made her happy then you probably killed her off you would cheat and this story author is the best you gotta do more
I love this story. you did a good job, and took my suggestion with Flash. This will go places, probably.
it's a nice story wish it was longer with lots of details.
6743027 Thank you!
6743071 I hope so as well. And thanks again bro
6743538 Only nice things said so far.
6743191 Do you mean more details in this one or a longer in depth story? Because I may fix this one up a bit, but I might create a larger story based on this one.
6743548 both
Hm, interesting. Definitely what this story is. It has a bunch of grammar goofs, but I still found it enjoyable to read.
But, actually, I think I found a bit of a plothole here...
If Celestia is dead, how is the sun still rising? In fact, how are any celestial bodies going to do so now that the ones controlling them have now passed?