Chrysalis is the Dark Knight, forgotten and abandoned by all, or it is what she had thought. Sitting alone in the cave, sobbing her eyes out, over all she had just lost.
A black heart, covered by an equally black skin, hard as rock. A lonely heart with none, and nothing left to yearn for.
Yet, there is something in the end of this tunnel, The hoof reaching out, pulling her up, out of the depth of despair she thought had already claimed her for good. Oh, for the pain that irony sliced out.
Chapters (3)
Not sure how to think about it right now, because I can´t say what Pinkie is thinking of herself right there. I guess the moment I know exactly which kind of Pinkie this is supposed to be, is the moment I know if I really like it, or not.
6704378 What she is thinking of herself? Friend, first and foremost.
Not sure how much it helps, but the mane is curly, and she has not committed any murder.
Hope you prefer the clever and planning Pinkie over the random air-head.
From my current records, I guess I can understand your worries there.
6704945 Well she sounds like something I I don´t see too often, so I really like to give her a chance.
I would like to have a new chapter please.
7664613 If you are still interested, I have half a chapter for the story.
I just don't know exactly what to do with it at this point.
8100931 Well I guess I would read it, but I can't promise you how fast I am at the moment, or if I can give you new ideas, it mostly happens spontaneous.
Well you have to give it to me in a Pm or Pn (however it is called again), since I don't have those programms the authors often seems to have if they want to give me their story piece.
I hope most of your stories are oe-shots, because it looks like you start more stories than you can handle and then something like this happens, where you don't know what to do anymore.
Yes I say it because I probably really liked this story (I don't remember much right now) and because I know another author with good ideas, but he seems only to be able to give another chapter in one or two years, because he started to many.
8101356 I take it.
I think it is PM here. You don't need a program to read a gdoc, but I may have to check the settings for you to read it.
I do have a few oneshots too, while some are fairly short. Granted, I have taken on a few more than I manage to keep going right now. If you or anyone else is interested, I could accept help with this.
Guess I am not quite as alone as I thought. It is quite the chalenge to handle multiple stories, when you have far too many ideas for your own good like I seems to have.
8104617 Well I understand a part of wanting to get every good idea written down, but maybe you just take notes for your ideas to get it out of your head and actually continue them later, that is one way to do it I guess.
I like this chapter, but I have a little problem to figure out the situation again. I mostly remember stuff about stories even if a chapter takes a long while to appear, but I'm bad with the little details like that sometimes.
I gave you an upvote since this is already the third chapter now. I don't understand everything anymore, but I liked the way it was written.
Was this the storie where Pinkie wanted to help Chrysalis to be their somewhat mean friends?