Dawn Skipper is an ancient Unicorn Holiday. Rarity casually suggests the Cutie Mark Crusaders and all her friends take part in the holiday together. All but Applejack are happy to participate. Applejack believes the holiday encourages Unicorn elitism, and she is offended Rarity even suggest she take part. Rarity takes Applejack to the Castle of The Two Sisters to see an ancient relic. Will Applejack accept Rarity's version of history, or will her stubborn pride get the better of her?
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....okay, concept is nice, but you need to grammar check this.
6685266 Oh...but editing is so tiresome. I do it a bit, but I need to go over works several times to catch most of the mistakes.
I'd get friends to help, but I don't want to waste it on Fanfic. If you could point out a few glaring errors, I would appreciate it.
It's an interesting take on pony holidays, but the dialogue seems pretty forced and rapid at times.
6686679 I hear what you are saying, but a lot of the characters had dialogue in this story, and I wanted to keep the word count down.
For being in the FlutterDash folder, this story is certainly short on the pairing.
6687473 I tried to put it in the secondary pairing folder, but I could not. Did you like Twilight Sparkle's impatience?
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Actually, I meant the fact that it was in the group when there was little show of it. Exactly what of Twilight's impatience did you mean?
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Is Twilight's impatience. She yelled at Rainbow Dash because she is sick of RD not telling Fluttershy that she loves her. Fluttershy then tells Twilight she is happy to wait more, and Twilight calms down.
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I was wondering what that was about. Still, Fluttershy and Twilight's talk made it sound like they were already dating.
....sweetest birdsong? Wow Fluttershy, you really have it bad.
Also, I wish Rarity the greatest of luck in getting covered in a stallion's love lava.