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Nightglimmer22


There are a lot more things to life than you think, for me it's just writing Fimfiction, as well as failing to grammatically correct things.

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Several short stories of your favorite ships!


Art by: Stellar Night22

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 17 )

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!:pinkiesad2::heart: Sooooooooooooo Cute!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm dead

Very nice cover art you drew up there! :twilightsmile:

That was wonderful! I loved the way you wrote the romantic scenes.:twilightsmile: KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!:pinkiehappy:

who the fudge would dislike this?! I love it! It's so well-written, not to mention adorable! :pinkiesad2:

It's a good story in general. I like the concept and ideas but the points that stand out to me are spacing between paragraphs and length. Try and have a bit more space between your paragraphs so it'll be easier to read for your readers. As I said earlier, it's a good story but try to maybe have it longer. Over 1000 per chapter, as you have 500 each, maybe turn it into a one-shot. I know people get annoyed with length because I had that with my story. Any who, have an up vote!

Your admin,
Misty Moonshine,

Have a nice day!

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Hey thank you, I'm glad you liked the story.
Your right with the length and I thought of just having it as short stories or something like that but never got around to do it.
Thanks again.

I don't understand why you would put this in the downvoted with no comment,
Tell you what, I think this is the most well-written story I've ever read, it's so amazing!

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Oh really?
Thank you so much. I'm glad to hear it. :twilightsmile:

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