There are a lot more things to life than you think, for me it's just writing Fimfiction, as well as failing to grammatically correct things.
Nightglimmer thought she was like any other ordinary pegasusi, she wanted to fly with the best and the bold. The Wonderbolts
But one problem stood in the way...the past, and the nightmares that lurked within it.
Editing by: Brickbrock24
Art by: Nightglimmer22 (me)
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The story's looking pretty good so far.
However, the punctuation situation is a bit iffy.
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Sorry about that I'm not the best at grammar (as you can tell)
I also don't have any editor to help me
it just me, myself , and I
Hmm, well, the chapter is good... but it could use some editing. And the bit where she was remembering what her father told her, that needs to be put into a transition, it kinda just jumps and its confusing.
But good work so far.
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*epic facepalm*
Hehehehehe, oh that made me laugh harder then it should have.
You kinda misspelled my name at the top...
It's Brickbrock24, not Brickblock24
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Oh...
Awkward
Sorry I'll change it.
To me Nightglimmer sounds like it should be two words. Was that a mistake?
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No it was not a mistake,
I choose for it to be spelled like that but thank you for the concern.