About to enjoy herself with a muffin, the peace is shattered as Derpy and several ponies notice a hole suddenly appearing in the sky above Ponyville. With no idea of what's going on, they watch as something seems to be happening beyond the hole.
Just then, something begins to fall...
Takes place during the final act of Equestria Girls: Friendship Games.
that was a fantastic first chapter! it was great to see derpy save her human shelf it really shows that depy is a hero in many ways!! great an d fun story will be waiting for more. bravo to you!!
6611393 Thank you I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I have one more chapter planned that turns back the time and focuses on another familiar pony during this event. I'm not sure I'll be making more chapters after that since this was originally meant to be a One-Shot.
I'd eat it.
This deserves a like!
Keep writing!
6615038 Thank you. I will
I like this! More please!
Eat it.
You know you must.
An interdimensional muffin.
Just imagine the flavor...
6620847 It's OUT OF THIS WORLD!
Hmm. It could use some technical polish, but the base idea is fantastic. I'm always up for a Derpidox. I look forward to seeing what else you do with this.
6621926 Yeah... It is written a bit clumsy
Maybe I'll fix it up a bit and add some more content when posting the next part?