(This story takes place after Crowley's story, basically because you are the person, and mainly because since you have no name on there, it can be whoever you want it to be. :] )
After Thunder makes the worst mistake possible, his relationship with Lotus ends. But, 3 days after his mistake, he and Lightning Flash (Rookie) decide to take a vacation to Prance, on the newly created Equestrian (Version) Liner, Titanic.
And, ironically, he ends up meeting Lotus once more. As he tries to make things right, the ship meets disaster. Will he tell her how he's felt, or will he go down trying?
Chapters (2)
I see a lots of things happening in the future I like it keep going.
680885 No, it's not odd, and I certaintly did not place them there on purpose. Hehe, don't be silly.
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680899 Yes, such as:
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And:
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And even:
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Shit, I spoiled teh storeh.
Ok being a Info Nazi here, it was R.M.S Titanic, Not S.S.Titanic.
S.S stands for Service Ship, like in a war. R.M.S stands for Royal Mail Ship, which she was.
And she was not a cruse ship, she was an Ocean Liner made to transport people and mail across the oceans.
other then that it seems fine.
3882813 It's been a year since anyone has commented on this story.
I'm glad you like it and all. I will change that error.
Also, this version of Titanic differs from the real one.
Okay, so far, this story is... okay. I won't like it, but neither will I dislike it.. yet. I'll favourite this story, so that I may read more chapters as they come out. But, be warned, I will be looking for historical accuracies in this story. I know you said it wasn't exact, but the parts that are meant to be accurate, I want to see them dead-accurate. No deviation. I've spent the majority of my life looking into the Titanic event, and I know most of what there is to know about the disaster. I have key websites and even the passenger manifest a bookmark away. I will be double and triple checking your facts, and I want to see them right. Mostly, I want to see them correct, to see just how much you understand the disaster. To see if you can truely put yourself in the shoes of those on board that night. To know if you can feel the horror, the uncertainty and the panic that the people on the ship must have felt.
P.S. Sorry if I sound intimidating at all, but I get real passionate about Titanic. This is why I've not written a Titanic fanfic yet. I was hoping no-one would. But since you have, please don't dissapoint.
4845327 I admit. This story is complete shit. I don't like it either. I might consider actually redoing this story, but on a different website.