awwwwwwwwwwwwww

D'awww ending.
But the chapter seems extremly rushed. There are a huge amount of grammer and spelling errors that take away from the story

Honestly this entire thing felt slightly rushed to me, I felt no d'awwwww or sadness. I sat here for and hour and read all of this in one go, I feel disappointed I should have felt at least some emotion because of the death/love. NOPE

I HATE big mac, taking MY fluttershy. Good ending.

Definitely one of my all time favorites. I especially love how it ended but i have to ask, will there be a sequel, or is this really the end?

here's mah read derp
i am sooooooooooo tired right now. goodnight
http://youtu.be/pVXurMbLj6w

i hate to say this because i am not a hater. 99 percent of the story was great but the ending... was a bit weak.

HAHAHAHAH BIAATCHY PRINCESS LOOOOOSSES

My heart exploded from D'aaaaaaaw when i read this.

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yeah, I'm with you there. It would have been much better if he would have taken his time with it... the idea behind it was good, the only problems were some spelling errors and the rushed pace of the story.

Gay shipping of any type rages me. Moving from this. Plz Hate me.