The war is almost over, one against bilions. All hope is lost, or not...
I don't know.... he seems to get over the fact that he has just woke up in another world, is no longer human, and is still heavily injured...
nice idea, but it seems to flow waaaay to fast. I feel like I am skimming and not getting all of the details.
671122 well when your fighting darkness and you lose all you loved ones you kinda wont get that feeling of being surprised dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_RageFace.png
you need a pre reader, and spell check. html 5 update has built in spell check
I see a Garry stu in the midst. I'm guessing he has special abilities as well? I don't really like these kinds of stories, still, the writing is good so thumbs for you!
I don't know.... he seems to get over the fact that he has just woke up in another world, is no longer human, and is still heavily injured...
nice idea, but it seems to flow waaaay to fast. I feel like I am skimming and not getting all of the details.
671122 well when your fighting darkness and you lose all you loved ones you kinda wont get that feeling of being surprised dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_RageFace.png
you need a pre reader, and spell check. html 5 update has built in spell check
I see a Garry stu in the midst. I'm guessing he has special abilities as well? I don't really like these kinds of stories, still, the writing is good so thumbs for you!