The war is almost over, one against bilions. All hope is lost, or not...
The Princes would visit once a week to check up on my progress, and was pleased to find that my soul was returning to the light again.
‘’A dozed of apples please’’ I replied with a smile. Applejack place the dozen of apples on the counter, ‘’that will be four bits’’.
Drugs!?
you need someone to spell check man. but overall great story
670889I felt my grammar police soul being stabbed over and over reading this... but the story is nice.
I feel like this story for what it is has been rushed, the whole story could have been much better then its current form if it was fleshed out more..
I tried to ignore the grammar mistakes but I cant. later.
The Princes would visit once a week to check up on my progress, and was pleased to find that my soul was returning to the light again.
‘’A dozed of apples please’’ I replied with a smile. Applejack place the dozen of apples on the counter, ‘’that will be four bits’’.
Drugs!?
you need someone to spell check man. but overall great story
670889
I felt my grammar police soul being stabbed over and over reading this... but the story is nice.
I feel like this story for what it is has been rushed, the whole story could have been much better then its current form if it was fleshed out more..
I tried to ignore the grammar mistakes but I cant. later.