WarlockStormCaller
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ive been doing that alot...saly brain only says "Fuck you Gobeman"
“Has Anyone Really Been Far Even as Decided to Use Even Go Want to do Look More Like?”
6461382 dude because I can!!
is that the please of a stormcaller warlock?
Do u even have the thorn? Or the gijallarhorn or the bad juju in game?
6462163 what do u mean?
6462210 I'm see the video, and don't be rude when everybody ask you the question.
6462209 yes I have all year 1 exotics.
6462230 wat
6462266 you've being rude to me when i'm ask you the question.
6462272 I don't know what ur talking about?
6462274 taking about I'm ask you the question about the picture and you being so rude to me!!!!
No.
6462279 Trust me u haven't seen rude yet.
So be clam are u talking about the main pic. Cause I need you know what u asking.
6462292 no what
6462304 I'll give you an answer in the form of those who said it better.
This:
6462166
...And this:
6462218
6462300 yes the main pic on you front page.
6462310 HAHAHAHAHAHHA use ur words not theirs, but their (scratching back of the head) un right.
Well let's hope this "Everybody" will find a friend soon.
You seriously need an editor
.
6462318 Do u wish to be alone forever nobody to call your lover, wife, or husband.
6462321 I don't see how asking me a weird question will correct this obvious error, i pointed out
6462332
6462334 yup that was my reaction when i saw it
6462341 Because u don't get it do u?
6462346 deleting my comment won't make you feel better
here's a reminder :
you could correct it by "Nobody wants to be alone forever"
Yes, because comment deletion has never had any consequences.
None at all.
Sarcasm.
6462363 Sorry my cat jump on my desk I press delete by mistake.
6462370 Shocks ur still here cool.
6462346 Not sure if troll, or that you seriously need to understand what people are trying to tell you. To paraphrase them, they are telling you that you need an editor, and that your story is reeking with self-insert, Mary-Sue tropes. Your name has warlock in it, and that is the first mistake that I saw going into this. No, you never do that, that's just an absolute terrible idea. It makes the story an even more obvious self-insert story, because it is about a warlock.
What is really bothering me though, is that your not accepting their commentary. They are trying to tell you what is wrong, but you're not seeming to grasp what they are trying to say. If I was to sum up this entire stories comment section, it would be everyone is arguing with ignorance, and that ignorance is you. Unfortunately ignorance is bliss, and this has probably been a pointless rant.
6462386 yes I'm trolling because I'm bored, but putting the joking aside I do plan on making and I thank everyone for who has told me what's wrong. So yeah ur rant was pointless, but thank u letting me know that my guardians needs a name and try not Mary-Sue.
6462416 What about poor excuses ? sounds like a good name
I do thank the ones who had comment and I do plan rewrite the story, it had been rushed I'm sorry I was planning to make a lot readers happy of what I wrote. Again I'm sorry u people that I had fail most of you, but in the near future I hope you may like this story when it's rewritten.
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Wow that went from 0 to 100 and back to 0 before I could blink. That's not a good thing. Get an editor and learn how to pace things out.
I think the story has potential but.. your writing style needs to change and you also need an editor and pre reader.
I like it.
Way better. You improved it. I will remove my dislike and make it a like now. You still need work of course, Bt I beileive that you can make this a great story.
Like it just keep making it
Improved, but you need to check your grammar. I got a headache from this.
Stop using the word "warrior" over and over. It becomes tiring reading the same word again and again.
Yet another nail in the coffin for the crossover genre. Way to give people a shit impression of Destiny by the way.
6931899 we've got Payet