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PhoelynFabulous


Hi, I'm PhoelynFabulous (How about you?... Get it?... Nvm) and I am a crazy little brony (pegasister) writer who thinks that she can write a lot more she actually can.

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Twilight's friends have all passed away, and the only friends left from when she first moved to Ponyville are Spike, Celestia, Luna, and Cadence. Watch as Twilight writes about her life after the death of her friends in The Immortality Diaries.

(Extra tags: Princesses, Changelings, Starlight Glimmer)

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 24 )

:moustache: Rarity's gone?

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Remember all the characters feelings. . .

A little rushed don't cha think?

6421719 Well, it's not finished, and that is technically the prologue.

6421770 even a prolog needs a little Meat don't cha think?:fluttercry::raritycry::pinkiegasp::rainbowderp::ajbemused:

i like it and please write more

I'm surprised Spike wasn't there for the end of the mane ponies

I'd love to have more of this story! :pinkiehappy: it literally made me cry, so you did well!

6422179 Wow, that's the first time I made someone cry with something sad in one of my stories :pinkiegasp: It's okay, don't cry :fluttercry:

6422189 I usually cry when I read sad stories so you did nothing wrong!

6422215 Ok! Just wanna make sure :pinkiehappy:

it was good but a little short. by the way this is my first comment ever (on this website)


6426045 Congratulations on your first comment! This is only the first chapter, and the second should be up by tomorrow, but Tuesdays are always busy for me :pinkiesmile:

Comment posted by PhoelynFabulous deleted Sep 19th, 2015

only issue. with all of them dying within a year is very contrived. better to spread it out through years.

calling it. Chrysalis
oh nice touch with her mark changing.

6483239 I shall not tell. But I like it when people guess :pinkiesmile:

Also, thanks!

You made me cry before I was even half way done with the chapter :raritycry:

wow, I just tried to look at the picture and the weirdest thing happened, it said it contained prohibited friendship content. Why doesn't my computer like friendship?

Liked this chapter hope to read more soon as well as Metamorphosis.

7456931 Dontworrytherewillbemorepls. :twilightsmile:

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kkthanksfortheinformationpls.

Yikes! Starlight has to be related to a giraffe or something...

7459611 I recently fixed my long-neck drawing problem. Any future illustrations will be better. HOWEVER, I was not about to redraw that, considering that it took like four hours to draw.

Sorry!

i was tearing up before i got to the end of the chapter. :fluttercry:

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