• Member Since 19th Apr, 2013
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callyoops2


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Good use of grammar, correct punctuation, a couple spelling mistakes, but overall not bad. I'm not sure it warrants an 'M' rating, though.

6198814
Thanks for the advice. I'll keep a better eye out next time.
Btw, I really liked big on the beach and pent up. You did a great job on those. My only complaint would be that they didn't get big enough.

Of course, that's ALWAYS my complaint. :pinkiecrazy:


6198816
The reason it has an M rating is simply because this is a fetish story. It really only has that as it's purpose. Sure there's no explicit content, but we all know why it's here. Thanks for the kind words though.

Meh. It was good.

6198954
Don't worry too much about the size comment. You could make them the size of a blimp and I'd probably still think they could stand to get bigger.

Though if you do make a fic where they get much bigger than your previous stories I certainly wouldn't complain. :pinkiehappy:

I know that feel about the backlog. Just be careful! I did a oneshot hyper cumflation fic and it turned into a multichapter hyper pregnancy fic before I knew it!

Could be worse.

CAKE OR DEATH!!!

always a fan of your stuff glad to see so much new from yah

6198954 You stole the cake for your own devices. I'm calling you out, cake thief.

>you should get sk.e more.
-Not sure what kind of error this is, but there's clearly one there ? ''sk.e'' ?

7246087
That's supposed to be some.
I'm sorry. These fics don't get the same love my non-clopfics do. I've got a couple on the backburner to finish when I don't feel like shite, and I need to go through and fix these.

Hopefully it didn't detract too much from your enjoyment, and if it did, I apologize.

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