8th grade has just rolled in for Button Mash and already it has been like every school year, almost everyone thinks he is a huge nerdy weirdo and he still doesn't have a cutie mark, not like he cares or anything. Luckily for him he does have friends in the Cutie Mark Crusaders, whom he trusts enough to tell them anything...well, almost anything. He has a secret that he has kept successfully hidden from the outside world for years. For better or for worse he is forced to make his secret come to light when his best friend Sweetie Belle convinces him to sign up for a Ponyville talent show.
I can't wait to see more of this.
6327799 Thanks m8!
6327799 mlg prof. oak
Love it so far! ^^
I'm sure that's supposed to be 'I'm not lost anymore'
Other than that, a really solid start. I look forward to seeing more...
...though if Rarity was so worried, why didn't she go look for her or, if she didn't want to leave in case she came back, send Pinkie or something? Oh yeah, nevermind...
6329626 Ah, thanks for pointing that out. I'll see of I can't edit that
6329482 thanks m80
Wow! I see another great ButtonBelle story coming my way!
6331784 Thanks Bruh
Button should be playing some Xpone or Neighstation
6333034 Nah man. PC Master Race
6333078 How can I make a pun out of PC? Gabe Ponwell?
6333097 Neighwell maybe?
K so first off, over 100 views:raritystarry: 13 likes I can't believe that my first fic has gotten this much support any way, unfortunately I will most likely not get much time for the next 12 days to get anything done But fret not! I will do what I can! but after I get back I will try to get updates as frequently as possible!
6331966 :D
it's great so far, keep going with the great work (is it just me or we're gonna have a "forever alone" in that history? just saing though )
Pretty sure Button's cutie mark would be a video game controller.. But whatevs, Great story so far! though, why the 3000 words in the first chapter then suddenly 1700 words on the second chapter?
6349047 I'm on a trip right now so I was writing most of this chapter on my phone so expect the next chapter to be about the same lenght, but once I get back to me casa I'll be able to stand writing longer chapters and don't worry, I have something special in mind for button
Great chapter!
Does this mean Button plays the violin???
6419748 Maaaaaaaybeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Nice, that was a fun chapter. Checking the next one.
Gaah!!! I want the new chapter! Damn cliffhanger!
6419820 Of course he does.
Ah, this is great so far! A slight grammar issue and some pacing needs to be slowed, but definitely quality writing for a first.
Still going nice! Previous error were tweaked, and now without the flaws, it's just solid writing. Bravo my friend, bravo.
6419820 even if he does, that wouldn't be significant enough to be such a plotpoint like it's trying to be. I propose this: what he was playing was a song for an old crush, and if Sweetie knew it was him, she'd probably have him play it for her, feelings would mix and fight for dominance, #internalconflict, yeah. That would be cool.
6543797 Thanks for the input. Don't worry, the violin thing isn't just gonna be the whole, "Ohhh...I'm too scared to play the violin because then Sweetie Belle won't like me Waaaahhh boo hoo!!!" I'm definitely gonna try and make it deeper than that. Not sure exactly how I'm gonna have it play out yet but I have a general idea of what I want it to be.
6546033 Oh Kay, just checking.
PLZ more, it was getting adorable
6601986 Sorry Working on it. Writers block is a douche
6603291 k
When is the next chapter coming out?!?!? i cant wait!! :)
6752183 As soon as I get a minute and get over my writer's block. Hopefully you won't have to wait too long.
Thx
So whens the next chapter coming out?
7057123 Honestly, it's long overdue. God damn writer's block is kicking my ass. Thanks for the watch btw.
So.... this story is dead?