• Published 13th Jun 2015
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DEMOCRACY OR DIE, The Displacement of Prime! - DJ A String



You know the drill. Guy goes to convention, gets an item, gets sent to Equestria. But how will this guy act when he becomes a huge robot that essentially has infinite nukes?

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"NOT BLUE ENOUGH!":rainbowlaugh:

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Quite likeing it, I just hope this is the only mention on the shitty ship.

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Yes.
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Who's shipping anybody? She be open season.

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I'm sorry, I don't understand english well.
Can rephrase that?

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No one is shipping anyone. She's not in a definitive relationship.
It's more like they're.... 'fuck buddies' as GameJunkie would put it.

Wow, Twilight is kind of flirty in this universe. I like it.

im not sure why but that last line made me laugh so much that it hurt a little

So you guys are gonna try and make audio stories for this on youtube? Awesome. But how are ya to copy primes "yelling" voice? You'll probably need an English and other accent.

“SHUT IT YOU MOTHER BUCKER!” Rainbow yelled at the hole. “And it’s more ‘friends with benefits’!” Rainbow emphasized, and yelped when suddenly Twilight spanked her flank.

:facehoof: You just had to go there, didn't you.

Is it just me, or is Celestia going kind of... Nightmare ish.

MORE! I NEED MORE!

D48

Well, this is looking like it is going to be getting very interesting very soon.

6448211 I agree with this sentient life form!!

Comment posted by Radioactive Dragon deleted Sep 23rd, 2015

6446323 Anyone for James Morrison, I got a deep voice and smoke so I bet I could pass for a ghoul.

cant wait for the next chapter

When are you gonna finish the next chapter?:fluttercry:

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We be working on it. And yes, we. If ya don't remember, I have a co-author for this. Sadly, he's been busy lately with getting a job and such. I'm pretty sure he's fine now, so if you want to go message my co-author GameJunkie, feel free to remind him that this exists. XD

7147777 he says to stop going on procrastinatory game benders.:rainbowwild:

6446198 that is a lot of

write more

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:pinkiecrazy: NEED MORE CHAPTERS!!! :pinkiecrazy:

Damn I really like this story. Hope it gets continued at some point!

what, this was the last chapter? WHAT! NOOO MORE I NEED MORE!!!!!
Also Celestia is an Overseer, calling it now.

More please

RIP To this story watch the video

MORE STORY REQUIRED! FAILURE TO COMPLY WILL BE CONSIDERED COMMUNIST!!! COMPLY!!

More please

8103482 AUTHOR IS UNRESPONSIVE, PERMISSION TO LABEL AUTHOR AS COMMUNIST SCUM TO BE ELIMINATED!?!?

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Running into a orbital strike would be worse in my opinion...

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Oh. Yea, in that case I gotta agree.

come on! post the next chapter already i have waited far to long,either post the next chapter or tell is its canceled!

Is this fallout 3 Liberty Prime, or is this the new and improved fallout 4 Liberty Prime?
The difference being that fallout 3's Liberty Prime is just larger than a normal human, while fallout 4's Liberty Prime is massively huge.

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I mean, 3's is also massively huge. You can attribute size problems to older tech and more limitations.

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Sorry, ignore what I said, I was thinking of the fallout 3 liberty prime companion mod, sorry for the misunderstanding.

“But you’re already blue.” Rainbow commented.
“NOT BLUE ENOUGH!”

Not blue enough is just great

Would you please continue?

Disturbing and amusing.

This looks really interesting

Hey. You seem to ignore comments here, if you're not gonna finish the story, press the cancel button, thanks. If you are, inform us of when the next chapter is, if not, follow the previous instructions. If I don't have a response within the next two weeks, I'll pm you.

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I do not come on this site much, and I would love to continue this. The person I was co-authoring with does not answer my questions about this story.

Frankly, I do not like your tone, sir. You are not an admin on this site, nor are you my employer. Yes I understand I have not been saying anything regarding the story, nor have I been replying to comments, but that does not mean you can come and make demands of me. I've been apprehensive on saying anything about this as one, I do not want to disappoint people, and two, I do not have more news to write about it at this time. I've also been stuck trying to stabilize my own life after leaving college and being stuck without a job for several months.

Personally, I would not like to cancel this story, but the thought has crossed my mind a few times. This is partially due to the lack of response I've been getting from my co-author and partially from comments like your own.

I'm going to kindly ask that you do not bother the co-author, as I do not want him getting upset with me over this. I'm also going to ask that you do not address me in such a way again because, as stated earlier, you're not an admin nor my boss. Sorry if this is not the news you were hoping to get or if I come off as a bit of an asshole, but your tone really rubbed me the wrong way.

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Well of course my tone's going to rub you the wrong way, I got tired of waiting for a response, I'm not going to be polite. Being polite in this regard never works. I see a story I like, I follow it as its developed, as chapters come out, then it just, stops. It stops, and never continues, I see the authors of such stories online, all the time, I ask, I question, about how the story is going, if it'll ever be continued, and I am ignored, more often than not. Being polite, rarely works, so rather than that, I'm going to be unapologetically blunt. Not trying to be an asshole here, but at this point I'm fed up with crap like this. You have a life, I get that, but it doesn't take a thousand years to post a quick blog explaining you still wanna wait for the co-author, even if at this point it seems a lost cause, and better to tough it out on your own or find a new one.

I mean I did wait a few years, after all. Also, I know what its like to have a co-author simply never respond after vanishing. Do what I did, if you can and simply continue without them. I had to do much the same, because my own co-author for one of my stories simply went offline one day, and never came back. You can dislike my tone all you like, and you are right I'm not an admin, I'm not your boss. But what I am, is a person sick of seeing good fallout fics wither and die, with no explanation or word from those whom wrote them. You responded, so I give you that credit where its due. But I'd rather not wait another 7 years for an update on whats goin on, or another chapter.

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