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Dude.. fuck you and your damn good writing...
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And here I thought you couldn't make me hate the royals more.
I'm glad you've proven oh so terribly wrong.
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If you do make dark alternate endings, can you do one where Chrissy dies and Richard goes full dark side on the pones? I want him to just cut lose, and yeet their entire species off this mortal coil.
Yep, i'm certain the Luna of this story must die, and the Celestia of this story must suffer the Royal Sisters of this story deserve misery and death. Then when they are an inch from death they learn the meaning of pain, betrayal, and the consequences of their actions and finally learns what it means to feel guilty for their actions and accepts death as their ultimate punishment. I'm 100% siding with Richard and Chryssy I want them to be the ultimate victors of this story
Yep. That's it. I want 'em dead. I want her and her sister dead. (Great stuff as always)
Actually, the way modern ponies act, I'd say it'd be best to raze Equestria to the earth and then salt the ground so that nothing would ever rise again.,
My question is is cadence and twilight are going to suffer because I hope not if anything they’re victims in the story because they got are being corrupted by Celestia and Luna attacked two couples that done pretty much nothing wrong to them
DEATH TO THE FALSE PRINCESSES... LONG LIVE THE QUEEN, LONG LIVE THE KING
Daaaayumn, that is The Grimm brothers uncensored level of dark, nice.
Wow... Death is almost too kind for those two sicko princesses. Maybe excecution by boiling or by ”the boats” before going burning with all the other ponies (present in the memory throne room) in worst side of afterlife... Or just erase them from existence and memory...
Perhaps their sadism has toned down some, and maybe there's a statute of limitations, but they definitely need to atone for their willful genocide... Being young is no excuse
This…was even worse then what I thought had happened. I now have a head canon about the story. Maybe their problems with reproduction is Karma wanting to punish them for their past crimes. After all, those two did so many horrible things, that the only thing that could equal the pain they caused, would be watching as their species die off. With them being unable to stop it, if not for Twilight summoning Richard. But of course, Karma wasn't gonna take that lying down, and as both a counter AND to rub salt in the wound, Karma brought him and Chrysalis together, and he feel in love with a Changeling. And together, they will bring retribution to the sisters, like Karma had intended. What do you all think about my head canon about the Karma wanting to punish the sisters?
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I would perhaps, possibly, maybe...ask that you look at what Naerx screamed as she watched Luna's vile act.
This universe has only corrupted Equestria population.
One sick Equestria.
It seems her wish was granted.
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I will not spoil the ending by saying anything. But I will say this for all to read.
There is only ONE ending.
Interesting.
Well to end rule of Celstia and Luna could be done in multiple ways. I wonder which one will Chrissy and Richardo choose
I want blood, I want heads to roll and to hell to break lose. I’m pretty sure everyone wants war at this point.
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That is understatement.
I'm glad that i am not a brony. Cuz i think true fans wouldn't get these mad from this good fanfic.
Wow, that was great. I mean, the actions were terrible but the scene was so well-written that I'm actually feeling sorrow and anger. Well done, mate.
Nice
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Indeed, though it seems to have been delayed by divine red tape of some sort.
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No, death is too kind of a punishment. If anything, they need to become living batteries or have their organs power up complicated machinery all the while they're aware of what's happening to them.
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For Celestia sure that sounds fitting but Luna dying would torture Celestia more. Though i like where your head is at
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Thank you.
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Can't see it mate
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That sounds like some I Have No Mouth, and I Must Scream shit, right there...
3spoopy5me m90
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That was on purpose.
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Nice.
Well, then... I wonder what'd Twilight say if she found out.
I hope that one queen and king pair are enough to restart the species. After the two sisters are dead and buried, of course.
This got a whole lot darker than I expected, yet I still waiting for what happened next and how they gonna solve their near-impossible task. Breaking the norm of the sisters being all benevolent is refreshing. It pains me to see luna like this, but this is one of many multiverses that exists there's no continuity of good guy only random chances of good and bad. Can't wait for more of this, your work intrigues me greatly.
I loved this chapter so much. I got a Doctor-y vibe from Naerx. Specifically a darker Doctor. +1 from me all the way.
Wow... just wow...
I want to say make them suffer, to burn for eternity. But really, I think the only real solution to this is killing them outright. This is the worst kind of injustice, and Celestia and Luna both need to die for it. Beheading, impaling, whatever it is, no suffering, just death. Then let Equestria deal with itself.
I've been thinking, and a thing that kind of throws me off is Celestia's complacency here. Luna, I can understand because she showed similar cruelty when demanding Chrysalis's surrender. Celestia though seems to be a complete turn of personality. She expresses empathy and concern for Richard despite him being a foreigner, giving him freedom and privileges that she didn't have to grant, despite the fact he was her race's best hope because it was the right thing to do. Yet here she looks at her sister's rape scene as a form of justice. Why? Where is that sense of right and wrong that she currently has? Either she's changed a lot or we're missing something here.
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It was over a thousand years ago. People change in that time.
It doesn't excuse what she did, but it is what it is. With age comes experience.
In any case, she had a very personal reason for her loathing of Naerx. You'll learn about it as the story continues.
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It doesn't excuse what she did by any means, but enabling something like that is monstrous by any age's standards, no matter the crime. Says a lot that I've already given up on Luna, though, that bitch needs to go no questions asked.
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One good dicking is enough for Chrissy to give birth to hundreds of Changelings.
So yeah, they be alright
Honestly, this iteration of Celestia and Luna need to die. As for how, the best way I can see is Twilight and Cadence showing up at the castle under pretense of a casual visit, and Twilight assassinating them while Cadence just watches, stone faced. Like, assassinating them slowly and dramatically so the sisters have plenty of time to plead and beg for Cadence to stop Twilight, and getting nowhere. Killed by their faithful student and first friend, respectively, while their adopted niece looks on, deaf to their cries. Truly poetic. I don't care how we get there, that would just be so satisfying.
Looks like things are picking up. That's good. A bit of action to get the juices flowing again after so long.
Poor Cady is too pure for Celestia's court.
Seems like Luna hasn't changed too much over the years - "He could lose a limb or two and still be functional" - oh gawd. Maybe that's because while Celestia had the time to change, she spent 1000 years on the Moon. Gonna be a hard work to reintegrate into the modern society.
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Bang on mate
I've been meaning to ask this but how do the rest of EoH feel about this?
Even for an AU this seems far too harsh of a characterisation.
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To each their own bud.
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Sure I just don't know if AU is an excuse to do anything with a character.
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Alternate universe, alternate people.