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DAMN!
Holy...
I did not see that one coming!
Noooooooo, I wanted Richard to murder the princesses!
Zam: hurhur dome go gong!
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Holy...
I didn't see that one coming!
Amazing plot twist!
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To each their own bud.
Well this has been an emotional roller coaster…wonder what the dome thinks of all this
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It doesn't care so long as you follow the rules.
Okay i really hope Richard doesnt agree to help them simply because his "sister" is asking for help.
Personally i really dont like the whole Emily part of story but thats just me otherwise its pretty good
Reposted as i was stupid with phone and deleted previous comment
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And again, to each their own bud.
so Emily never died Awesome!!!!!!!!!
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Well, technically she did...and didn't.
Gotta love my overly convoluted plot twists.
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Still I’m glad she’s somewhat back she deserved a better life than what you put her through no offense
Holy shit!
Princess this, Chrissy that.
Blah blah.
I'm just going to point out this little sentence here.
Now just imagine for a moment that you're Emily. You've got a body again although with a few little extra parts as well as the personality of Luna before the war turned her all Nightmare Moony.
You've created a dome that makes people tell the truth and has forced two parties who despise the other to come to a deal. One of which happens to be your brother. The same brother who saved you from your foster dad who raped you/molested you day after day, the same brother who as she put it, was like an Angel picking her up out of hell.
Now this same brother who you clearly love more than life itself looks at you with hate. His girlfriend also hates you and mocks you, and you have no choice but to grin and bear it until you can tell them the truth.
Emily had to sit there and take it all from Richard, argued with her sister who she also loves in order to make the dome fair for both parties, and even told her otherwise dominant sister to shut the fuck up.
And she even cracked a joke or two. Emily is a fucking boss man, and she deserves all the brotherly love Richard needs to give her once this damn dome shit is over.
Well played Zam, well played.
Luna/emily getting shit done
Emiluna is the best sis either of them could ask for and I'd hide a body for her if she needed me to do so.
By far one of the most reasonable characters I've seen you write so far, and I'm all here for it.
I'd still rather Celestia die an incredibly painful death after having she raped and murdered for, taken away from her and ground into dust.
Damn fine chapter. Finest negotiation chapter yet. Luna is a boss. The future of Equestria Celestia and Twilight are proved to be unable to fill that part. Finaly we get into productive stuff.
- Only truth
- One Question per Individual (or sides 'Changelings vs. EQUESTRIA
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No, because her soul is new, fresh and innocent.
You and your beautiful cliffhangers!! I swear to God I am on the edge of my seat every time you right this is truly amazing......
I'm still personally for Celestia's death. Also waiting for the shitstorm to start when she's forced to admit she never intended to send him home.
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I understood half of that sentence
Compromise is the word of the day, Honestly I'm glad Luna/Emily stepped in, both Richard and Celestia were being way too stubborn for either of their own good.
Lol stay snuggly
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Everyone talks about killing Celestia, but honestly the worst punishment for what she’s done would be to do nothing. Celestia is nothing without her subjects, allow them to slowly vanish from the world, and everything she’s ever done for “the greater good” of ponykind, means nothing. Without ponies, she’s left to only be defined by her horrible actions, besides Neo-Luna would likely be fine without her royal title. If she was still old-Luna then I would be worried what she would do without subjects.
Still if a deal has to be made, I would hope it would involve at least a restraining order measured in miles from Twilight. That mare is everything Celestia is and worse, honestly she needs meds. Even with the Dome I don’t trust Celestia to keep her end of the deal, just because Richard can knock up a few ponies doesn’t mean the offspring are viable long term. They could be sterile, or a whole host of other issues. If that happens then I’m scared of how sunflank will react. Maybe they need a third party to handle the research/treatment, as she’s given him every reason to distrust her and her ponies.
I'm honestly impressed how Luna went from needs to die in a fire to heroine like this. Though technically she isn't completely "Luna", it's still much more than I expected.
GAH, more fucking blue balls!
That was a fun chapter
Called it a merge probably the best outcome you chose fiits perfectly
Damn, was not expecting that! I didn’t read this for a bit to save up some chapters, and I think that was a good choice.
Sadist confirmed.
Great chapter, loving Luna's character since they merged, I find it quite fascinating!
It would be interesting to me, if there was a cure for infertility made by ponies without Richard. Maybe Shining knocked up Cadance with Flurry, and surprise! Shining can be a cure for dying race! Or maybe there was a scientific breakthrough (lead by Twilight or without her [suck it Twigly, you are not the only smart pony here!])
Firstly Celestia is like: "Yeah, we need Richard, so ok, changelings can be in MY country (obey Celestia meme), we won't discriminate them, fair right, blah, blah, blah.
And after knowing about cure Celestia would be like: "Why should I have these filthy bugs in my country? We don't need them!"
Luna: "But we have an agreement with them!"
Celestia: "You are more sister of Richard rather than me!"
Surprise Daybreaker?
Icing on a cake:
Cadance secretly/openly opose changelings and want them out now that they have cure;
Shining secratly/subconsciously desire changelings in his country.
Holy shit, so my prediction about luna was mostly correct!
.. really good chapter by the way, I love where things are headed currently
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I love those moments when a writer can't be stopped by their own will and just dump everything they want onto a chapter. But then you just have to go and cut this amazing shit off like a man scared in a port-a-john. How dare you good sir. Anyway I'll be here for the next one
I still don't trust Tia to not immediately start looking for a way to backstab Richard and Chrysalis the moment the dome is gone, especially now that she knows about Emily. I doubt she'll be able to do it directly, since it would be rather stupid for the old magic to not enforce some sort of binding magic to keep parties from immediately breaking deals the second the dome was gone. But she's experienced enough to probably think of a way.
For starters, it's rather noticeable that Twilight wasn't made part of this meeting...
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Curious that
The whole LunaLy (Emina? Emiluna?) Scene was so heartrending
Damn, that’s one hefty power play
The table hasn't just been turned, it's been inverted, refinished, and decorated with an entirely new candelabra!
Now that most of the cards are on the field, let's resolve the battle!
Keep going! ;)
Okay, no joke, when Luna revealed herself as Emily and started reminiscing with Richard, I was tearing up. Well done, mate.
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Details man, details!
Make me proud
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Oh-ho-ho, you want details? I'll give you details. *Takes deep breath*
Firstly, there was:
"B-Bec-cause…" she ground out, tears beginning the stream down her face from the effort. "I…a-am…from t-there…"
That had me doing a double take. Then when Luna was talking about the Chinese food, I was hooked.
Luna smiled and looked at Celestia. "My name is Luna," she intoned softly, before slowly turning her gaze back to me. "But a very large part of my soul…was once called Emily."
Holy hit, that was brilliant! I just had to keep reading.
"Everything I was became overwhelmed by a darkness I couldn't hope to control," she continued sadly, looking at her sister. "It tore me into so many pieces there was barely anything left of me but memories. After that…after that I became a monster, a rapist, a murderer. I couldn't stop myself, I didn't want to stop myself. And you enabled me Tia, you never stopped me, you never tried to see if something was wrong with me. Maybe it was better for the war and you preferred me violent, an easily controlled weapon to aim at your enemies. I truly don't know."
That was great on two fronts, since it was not only Luna admitting to her past sins and faults but also further revealed Celestia's true colors as a manipulator and poor sibling. Then at the same time, you have Celestia tearing up at the revelation, which actually made me feel kind of sorry for her since Luna's the only one that she's shown even remotely having any sort of feelings of love towards.
When Luna/Emily was relating the story of how she and Richard met, that's when I started tearing up. Maybe I'm a softie but it really hit me in the Feels. "I was never religious," she said quietly, biting back tears. "Praying never stopped him no matter how much I did it. But you were my angel. You came down to the hell I was trapped in and pulled me out into something so much better. You became everything to me. And even though I…did what I did, you still are everything to me. Even if I'm more than just Emily now, that has never and will never change."
*Clapping* That was beautiful. It then gets better when Luna/Emily is trying to get Richard to look past the pony flesh and visage of one of his tormentors to see her. Very touching stuff. She then talks about how she's both Richard's and Celestia's sister and wants to try to work things out between them. Plus it was satisfying to see Luna stand up to Celestia. I almost cheered when she told Sunbutt to shut the fuck up. All in all, a very well-written and emotional chapter. I tip my imaginary hat to you, sir.
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You've made Daddy Zam very proud today my son
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*Shrugs* I give credit where credit is due. But you're welcome.
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Not many do a full on review, it makes me very happy when someone does.