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damn the feels man
Time and time again I find myself disappointed that I can't thumb's up individual chapters. Bravo Zamairiac. Brilliant.
New chapter let's go
Private ?
Dang, just dang.
Also you made a typo with that second part.
Plans in the shaping, gonna be interesting to see what loophole Celestia will ask twilight to find in their contract for her to abuse
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Dang, fixed!
.... huh. Well. That's a thing. Came kinda outta nowhere, didn't it? I feel like I would normally be annoyed at a combination deus ex machina and cliffhanger like that, but things are already so twisty that I'm just shrugging internally.
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I was about to comment on that as well.
i really kinda hope that when Richard starts making his hybrid ponies that they are born with changeling features, really fuck with Celestia
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The twists shall never stop!
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Ah but she CAN'T ask her. She cannot seek outside help for interference.
Doesn't mean to say that Purple Spangle won't do something though.
This chapter was worth waiting. Magnificent
As twisted this Equestria is i guess only Changeling are to be trusted. They tried to stay neutral after all...
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Eh, I still say Twilight herself is the loophole. She wasn't part of any agreements made in the dome, so her actions technically don't count against Celestia so long as she doesn't give her any direct commands from now on. It wouldn't surprise me if the guard who attacked them was just fodder so they could test it.
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Damn, you raise a good point, Celestia will probably have made arrangements in advance and planned with twilight beforehand
Zebra are genius in the area of potions... Perhaps the Pony population decrease is Zebra made? It would be quite Ironic that Celestia make her race so hated that making em infertile over centuries. Perhaps sending out Assasins, not to kill but to feed em potions.
Ahhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!
Love it
More politics! more intrigue! More plot points! Yeeeeee
I'm not crying, I'm crying!
...goddammit!
Honestly? That didn't feel like a cliffhanger ending to me. If the reading of the letter had been interrupted before it's conclusion, that would've been more of a cliffhanger. Or if something dramatic happened in the last paragraph or few sentences of the chapter, that would've been more of a cliffhanger.
A letter, unexpected though it may be, being read through to conclusion? Not a cliffhanger in my book. And I'm fine with that. You do enough cliffhangers anyhow.
Celestia, the Sun Princess, getting burned for touching him? I liked that. I'm betting she'll never be able to touch him again, because everything she does harms him. He will be forever beyond her reach. And isn't that just a karmic kick in the proverbial balls for her.
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She cannot seek outside interference NOW. That doesn't mean she didn't start some before the Old Magic began.
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You know you want it
Does this story end here or will it have another sequel?
sorry let me rephrase it will it continue or will it be another sequel?
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This is the final story, but it doesn't end here bud.
This chappy is the first of the final arc!
oh boy. That letter is a chekov's gun if I've ever seen one. From what I can see, Luna/Emily is going to be VERY important in these coming chapters, and given Celestia's actions, she's likely to unknowingly or unintentionally keep breaking the terms of the deal. I have a strange feeling that there's going to be some complications regarding Richard's compatibility with ponykind, or perhaps some complication with the usual method of gathering his material for usage. Along with that, we've got some zebra shit coming in all likelyhood. I have a feeling that the magic that erased Richard's father from history was not complete, and some zebras know of him, and intend on doing something. what specifically I don't know, but that's how things are starting to feel. Honestly the hastily made deal probably has a lot of holes, and Twilight is DEFINITELY going to be involved in trying to fuck with the newly revised plans that Celestia and Luna/Emily have come up with. I think Celestia is finally going to snap at Twilight once she does something dangerous enough that it risks the entire future of ponykind.
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or maybe that they're not just changeling-like, but full on true breeding hybrids with an instinctual connection to the Richard/Chrissy hivemind.
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Honestly I'd love that as a rating tool because being able to rate the story as a whole AND chapters individually would be great for both readers who want to provide feedback in a more granular manner, and great for authors who want chapter by chapter feedback even if readers don't leave a comment with their own critique. It really should be a thing.
This is freaky. I was just thinking about the story a few hours ago, wondering if it might be going dormant again.
Now that's interesting. And more than a little convenient. I hope there's something more to it than sheer coincidence.
Oh wow...
But of richards father had kids with Queen kara and if the throne passed to them doesnt that mean that he has nephews cant he trust them?
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Ohhhhh, I kinda want Twilight to mess everything up. Have Celestia learn that maybe she should have addressed her obviously unhealthy obsession with her... maybe get her on some meds. It seems with out her friends to balance her out Twilight is very... unstable.
While I would love Twilight to mess up everything, I would also love to see Celestia’s antics to come back and bite her in the flank. Unintentionally dooming her ponies, or at least the Alicorn line, to extinction. Perhaps someone really isn’t meant to rule so long, eventually even the best intentioned leaders start to see others as game pieces. Still I have questions about using Richards seed... if they are just going to impregnate a bunch of mares with it... couldn’t that lead to inbreeding down the line? What good is survival is all ponies look like that hill-folks kid locked up in the cellar?
Them feels man, great chapter! Can't wait for the new arc!
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They use his seeds potential, of which a normal stallion has almost none. They don't actually take his seed and multiply it, they just syphon its potential for an infertility cure.
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And here I was hoping Celestia would inadvertently create a bunch of Sloths.
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I know this is probably tasteless, but I'm saying it anyway:
Looks like Richard remembered to apply his thot begone.
its almost a family reunion, just need his mom in some shape or form to show up.
other than that this is a pretty good chapter to wrap up this arc while leaving the question of how twilight is going to fuck shit up for later.
BLUE BALLING CLIFFHANGERS!!!!! GGAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH!!!
Drat the dreaded cliffhanger. I loved this chapter and I believe the cliffhanger is appropriate. I look forward to your next chapter
Twilight gonna think Richard and chrysalis did something to her "dear mentor" when Celestia cannot tell her about what they discussed
The gods are good today
The dome is gone, we can finally relax. Or not.
Please believe me when I say that I love this story, but you need to ease off on the cliffhangers. We just went through a multi-chapter arc where every chapter ended on a cliffhanger, and now that *arc* ends on a cliffhanger.
To quote someone smarter than me: 'Not every chapter can be the Red Wedding.'
The story needs time to catch its breath and let the characters absorb and deal with the insanity they went through, not be *immediately* catapulted into the next climax. It's like a roller coaster that just keeps falling. There's no buildup or anticipation, just AAAAAAAAAAAAAH forever. As a reader, no matter how good each chapter is individually, constant climax and cliffhangers are exhausting.
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I was joking about the cliffhanger thing. Doesn't feel like I left it on one to me
Looks like someone didn’t like the dome
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No idea what you're talking about mate 😒
My mind is blown. Excellent work.
Well done!
I’m curious about the ‘don’t trust a zebra’ message. Though I half expect that the zebra leader that talked to them chapters ago is actually related to Richard. Though probably still untrustworthy.
Finally closed that question!
Zebras, eh? That's unfortunate.
While Greenhorn will be commended for his hustle, a nice dressing-down for his rash behaviour is in order.
Richard needs to train in calm. He can't keep losing himself to his anger...
Keep going! ;)
........ it’s Zecora, isn’t it?
Also, “plans” you say? Intriguing.