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7261039 You know, I can understand the desperation that the Princesses feel. I mean they have a responsibility to secure their races future. But they just go about it in the most asinine ways... And though Celestia and Twilights Morality has taken a one way ticket to visit Darkness; his good pal, I find it hard to believe Chrissy and Richard would condemn an entire race of beings to extinction over something as petty as a grudge, both have shown that deep down they are good 'People'.
I love it a perfect chapter.
Go Chrissy!
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For a supposedly dying race confronted with their apparently only lifeline, they sure don't seem to afraid of treating said lifeline like shit to the point where they eventually won't even get the bare minimum of cooperation they need from him to survive. They might be good people, but given that they're already forcing his compliance, and then treat him progressively worse from there, it makes it awfully hard to blame Richard and Chrissy if they do leave the ponies to their fate because their leaders were jackasses.
Maybe Luna will turn out to be the voice of sanity and either tear the other three new ones (three, because Cadance is implied to be involved in Celestia and Twilight's plans) and get them to get their act together before it's too late, or she'll go behind their backs to fix things in spite of them...and then let it leak out that Celestia and her girls almost doomed them all to extinction because Celestia was horny.
Pow! Right in the kisser.
GO Chrissy! beat the massive arse
Oh Yeah! Dame that ending was Hot!
7261766 Though imagine the possible tribunals if he ever returned to earth and brought along 'Chrissy', though another question comes to mind. 'Do changelings go into heat or are they year round except for cold months?'
Also Celestia and the other royals plus Twilight likely have their own fears of finding his home, opening a portal where there are BILLIONS of his species there. with a roughly 50% ratio for each gender depending on regions or culture, though the same could be said for humanity having fears about magical godly ponies who could disrupt their very existence as well.
That makes me think of two other fics where either royal sister 'moved' Earth's celestial bodies of moon or sun causing untold damage/'The end is nigh fuckers!' reactions from people. Though this story likely won't go in that direction right? Also couldn't 'Chrissy' attempt her own research from stealing Twilight's own to make a possible method? Though multiple issues pop up that Twilight has likely put down onto paper on the level of difficulty or impossibility to recreate the same conditional events from a dimension that could or could not be on the same time frame as his own... I seem to be thinking too much due to this enjoyable three part upload.
Oh dear god, if Celestia got off from Richie's indifference and hate, to the point of stinking up the place with musk.
Imagine how'd she feel when a mare with similar disposition, just beat the ever living shit out of her. She might as well stop looking to be player 2 but player 3
It seems Celestia's little stunt backfired quite stupendously. Can't wait till they find out how close Richardand Chrissy are
that was smooth!
Chrysalis Style--- FALCON PUNCH!!!
you really like yuno, don't you zamairiac.
7261766 well...
From Richards POV, ponies are more or less ut manipulative bastards, who slights him at possibly in every conceivable way there is.
With the one 'pony' that he loves, actually ain't a pony at all, but in fact another species entirely.
Now he more or less have aquired a 'us against them' mentality.
And this maks him ask......
''Why should I help them''
I'm confident Tia didn't do anything the Chrissy because she had the greatest orgasam of her life after that assault.
Gods I can just hear Richard the next time celestia tries anything
"Damn you, And damn all your little ponies to extinction. If you're supposed to be their representative and leader, then you can lead them all straight to hell"
Cannot Wait To see what celestia does, it sounds kinky
I sign onto my fimfiction account this morning expecting to find one chapter, and I get three. You are amazing, and you deserve a cookie
Today was a good day.
Seems Celestia is turning into Darkness from Konosuba lol. Im guessing that because pretty much everyone treats her like the goddess she(might) be, having someone actually be dominant and assertive towards her seems to turn her on. Quite funny. Just like the original story, I like this one quite a lot, although I almost felt that Twilight was flanderized(as in, she was written in such a way where her basic personality traits were exaggerated and other nuances of her character were negated or ignored); granted, that may have been the point, as I think you might have mentioned before.
All in all though, its nice to see you back. So many of my favorite FiMfic authors have either dropped out silently or officially left, so it's nice to see one(yourself) back, at least for a little while.
this story is super good just amazing I would almost say go back to the first story and totally remove the hole second act.
at this point in time it is not needed.
and on a nether note this story is sitting in the top ten and looking good.
7263398 I think in light of the current circumstances, one being the encroaching extinction of her species, another is that the being she 'accidentally' summoned has Zeus' balls and that her mentor is actively holding him hostage in their dimension (ie: "If Celestia's okay with it, so am I"). Then she'd circumvent friendship and another sapient being's happiness.
Even during her chapter, she admitted having no feelings of attraction for Richard, taking their relationship as an act to stall the human with the golden snitches from leaving the country, as well as an academic's opportunity to learn about another specie's culture as a feint for showing interest.
Considering it's pre-ascended Twilight, lacking the necessary lessons and experiences that led to it, I can see her taking such courses of action. I fear that if she continues, the damage in her current mindset may even prevent the Twilight of this dimension from ascending.
That was certainly a swift handling of the situation. Celestia will never get the hint.
And as I predicted, it was glorious!
Are we gonna see the other Elements, Cadance and Luna in this story?
Chrysalis really needs to tell Richard about Celestia's crush. Then the two can spend the rest of the story fucking with Celestia's feelings.
She likes baaad boys he likes baaaaaaad girls~
They both like having sex and rocking their woooorlds~
They do seem to get off on each others' rage and aggression, guess Richie hasn't quite given up on his old 'gangsta days middle finger to the man' personality now does it?
On a side note, I can't help but think that at the end of this story Celestia's gonna end up as Richie and Chrissy's bitch-pet. Seems like she's attracted to Richard's hostility towards her more than anything else, regardless of whether she actually does love him or not, and considering what kind of character her iteration in this story is I don't think it would be much of a stretch for her to agree on being a slut-slave to the both of them. If anything, she'd probably find it even more arousing watching the guy she adores so much get banged by another mare while she's tied up with a dildo in her ass helplessly watching on.
As for Twilight... Well, she's crazy with a capital sociopath this time around, and frankly it wouldn't really surprise me if she ended up raping ole' Rich based on some insane theory only tangically related to bringing him and Celestia together and saving their race in one of the following chapters. She's just so analytical and creepy that-... Wait...
Oh my god Twilight's a robot!! It makes perfect sense in hindsight!
But anyway disregarding the Twi-botinator, I can see how desperate leaders would be if their kind was on the verge of extinction. And considering that they didn't simply just imprison Richard and turn him into a semen spigot the first time he refused even when they held all the cards and were actually capable of doing so, well... I mean I get why Richard hates them so much but considering how ruthless leaders and government officials can be I think he got off pretty light with just some blackmail and a city-wide lockdown in my opinion.
And to be honest, if it were me then yeah I'd probably take up their proposition, even if the species I was saving were a bunch of asshats. Mostly because I feel like I need to do something productive during my, ahem, stress-release sessions. And partly because, I mean, how often can you say you stopped a great calamity by banging in into submission?
7270747 HERE,HERE .........please let the next chapter come out soon
Yup, that's exactly how she's written in this story. There are a few things I could say, but I'm pretty sure Twilight only exists in this story to be bashed, so... meh.
That smile from Celestia makes me think she is either planning on how to quietly kill off her rival, or she just added a mare to her fantasies. Though I was kind of hoping it would be Richard who bashed her for kissing him.
7274662 Which is kinda weird... I mean, the last part is a given, and the first one can be handwaved, but it's strange that the elements don't seem to exist.
yeah, that happened. 100% unproductive meeting for what was essentially a death threat to come. get well soon, deranged mares!
That was the most glorious verbal assault, I totally approve.
What can I say... OWNED!
Though that may complicate things for our two lovebirds.
omg he made her cum in less than a minute.
wow you really manage to make Celestia look sick and Twilight like a full time slave.
I would give you this ice pack Twilight but I don't think that even temperatures below absolute zero would cool off that burn you just received.
(Just so you know I like Star Wars) if I have the powers of the force I would've use force choke both Celestia and twilight then after that use force lightning on them then use my light saber the cut off their horns and wings until they beg for death
And in that instance, Richard used one of the most powerful non-lethal, hypothetical weapons of all time: the verbal bitch-slap!
But... PORN!
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What about porn...
My raging boner hate you. By Chrysalis x Human heart loves it ♡
One of your best chapters Really good that this Twilight and this Celestias au version killed there relations so deeply that there isnt going to grow anything.
Amazing start.
* Aming a swaoff to my side without looking and fire, only it blow 25% of my face at least.*
If you get the meaning, that what their plan happened. Now, to heal my head.
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I don’t know if I should feel bad for you or laughing my ass off at how much you’ve been cock blocked so far
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I don't think it is the actual thing that is the issue but the flippant refusal that they are in the wrong at least in the moral side of things while yes they do mention that what they're doing is wrong from the context it comes off like they believe they are doing better and that he should just shut up and deal with it obviously that isn't said necessarily but I feel it's a between the lines situation, now obviously this was many years back so you've probably forgotten it by this point but I still wanted to give my insight. Tho unasked. It also forces them into a situation where he's for all intents and purposes a slave realistically there's nothing that he can do short of killing himself or trying to escape with the country to escape her and it's fortunate she's chosen not to be nearly as militant and amoral as she could..
Example charming or erasing his mind and effectively magically drugging him into a sperm producing, stud