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1.) Cop out on the death of Chrissy.
2.) They ain't agreeing to giving seed.
At least they better not or all these chapters have been for nothing.
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parlave oum or the spirit of it seems to be pretty chill and reasonable compared to everyone else. It kinda apologized for its actions while at the same time explaining why things happened. At the end even bringing chrysalis back to life which means there's a good chance it will consider the baby as being alive.
Something just occurred to me, if the princesses can't use their magic, then who's gonna move the sun and moon? Because the dome is only required to keep the ones inside it alive, anything happening outside it is irrelevant. So the outside could be burning to a crisp or freezing to death, and they'd be unable to stop it. Not to mention the panic that'll spread.
Found a contradiction here.
Other than that, I didn't notice anything glaring. So Luna is the one who called parlave oum? I wonder what sort of tricks she has up her sleeve for Celestia.
The truth field was a nice touch. Both for and against all parties.
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Twilight is outside of the dome and it has been shown that she can move (if poorly) both the sun and moon. Granted that was with the other princesses power under her control. It is possible they left a portion of their power with her if talks took longer than a few hours.
5000 words of what are effectively drunken levels of pissing on each other, I love it
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Add the dome to the list of things that need to die screaming before this is over.
No. No please, ya don't understand.
Stop.
STOP
Stop toying with my emotions and get on with it!!
Damn I wanted more of them shitting on the princesses lol. Also, who should have think that the princess of love sucks at making love? 🤣
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What they should be asking Celestia is if they were keeping him here against his will and have had knowledge of how to get him back to earth the entire time.
Whether Celestia actually intends to honor any deal made here if it doesn't go her way. Any number of questions she would have given bold-faced lies to in the past. Put her on the spot.
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Eyaaa that's the meme right there, brother man!
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Yes get on with it!
[Chorus of people] GET ON WITH IT!
(Old man from Scene 32) Eeyes, get on with it!
(Lol sorry for the Monty Python reference)
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Chrissy's metaphorical dick is bigger than a skyscraper, we get it... can get on with this 'peace' talk farce already.
You’re sadistic for leaving us on such a cliffhanger...... I LOVE IT! Lol
Damn, I love the banter going on, feel bad for Shining just a bit
Can't wait to see the meat of this conversation!
Next time on dragon ball z!
Less of a cliff hanger and more fun. I feel like it's short for some reason. Anyway I'll see you in the next one.
Okay so this new luna used the spell and she has pure heart? We know old luna didn't have 1 nor did Richard's sister because her childhood? (What it means to have a pure heart and how easily are they tainted?) So just who is this new luna? If it actually is memories of her sister mended with old luna then she could have 1 because he would have remembered her sister as having a pure heart?
so who is controlling the moon and sun while they are in the dome? who is running the country? they act like they have all the cards on the life of the unborn, but if Richard and Chrysalis wanted they could just keep them in the dome indefinitely and let their country burn.
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If that were the cause, then why did they need to give Twilight a device to do so? Remember how she broke it trying to figure it out? Also Twilight couldn't have had time to practice, since her poor control over the sun and moon would cause a panic. And even if she was the one to move the sun and moon, what would stop her from accidentally braking the device (because if they didn't need to use the device, they would have simply given Twilight the magic, and not have bothered with the device).
Sorry if I'm repeating myself, I tend to do that.
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God wouldn't allow it.
These Cliffhangers are actually ruin the story every time you do it it's starting to get old and not interesting I'm sorry but it has to be said.
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Then stop reading
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How do you figure?
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I like the idea...
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Never
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I would do it... Maybe cruel but its a 1 day old embryo. Getting Celestia image destroyed is worth it...
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Noooooo this is more important...
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Its... Odd... I agree...
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Yep. They cant have a Child anyday and a 1 day Embryo is not worth bowing to Sunslut...
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Dont seem to be absolut
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Yeah... Really drags one down
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Time to grill Celestia. She - cant - lie! Literally ones in a lifetime opportunity!!!
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Also, I'm not too sure how the ending is a cliffhanger. There's no death, no back breaking twist.
It's just leading into part four
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Eh, it's not so bad, in context of the story as a whole they're good dividers between chapters.
Besides you get used to cliffhangers after a while. I've learned to suck it up.
It's not like there aren't a thousand other stories you could read while you wait for the next chapter.
Keep your spirits up lad, you've got what it takes.
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Mhmm!
Interesting question. I could answer it now...but I won't!
*Insert evil laugh meme*
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It's alright buddy!
Since he loves them so much, I'll give it a month until part four. Really leave him salivating in anticipation
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And miss out on her witty banter?
Never!
Wait, so her death was a mindfuck? Again? Damn, Richard's brain is going to melt at some point.
Also Chrissy's on fire! So many burns, delicious!
Ignore the irritated comments, Zam. They're just impatient for the next part.
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Wouldn't allow what, exactly? The questions to be asked? Her to disobey any deals made under the dome? Once the dome/negotiations conclude, does it have any power after the fact? Old magic may have drawn them there, but that does not mean the old magic continues after the fact.
6 Questions to form / change this entire conversation.
1. - Celestia, did you intend eradicate the Changeling race?
2. - Celestia, did you intended to steal Richard in the future?
3. - Celestia, did you intent to manipulate Cadance and other with lies and half truth to follow YOUR plans for Equis?
4. - Are you willing to kill to get what you want in the present and future?
5. - Will you leave non Ponys alone forever if we help you save your race...?
6. - Have you planes for us ones the Dome is no longer enforced us to truth to force Richard preservation of your race no matter the cost for him?
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I would love to see what people think the answer to these are
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Ones Chrysalis is dead Celestia wins by default. Richard is useful as long he is alive. Reducing his mind to a todler dont make his seed less potent...
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More of a exception than the general rule
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Good point. How are you btw? Long time no chat How is your story updates coming along?
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Titel: Troll master archived
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More like drowning at this point
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Sound great
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Literally what the conclusion is from currently standing worldbuilding points.
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The Embryo is at risk the longer "negotiations" go on, yes... However it would also be at risk if Celestia has no intent of honoring any deals made in the dome. Some things MUST be asked before things can proceed with any hope of them being honored.
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Indeed. If Celestia plans the eradication of Changeling kind by direct or indirect actions than Richards and Chrysalis can just keep em there for decades. They would be doomed anyway so lets take Equestria with them!
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Ah, but that's the sheer power of old magic.
It doesn't let you go back on the deal you make.
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good answers friend! I already have someone for a sacrifice, do you like my lord?
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Add that to the next chapter perhaps?
Anyway its unrealistic that Celestia will leave Richard alone. Even if hes not needed to save ponykind, he is the potencial father of a race that will dispice Celestia for good reasons... Celestia rule is in danger. He knows of her true nature in the past! Ones hes no longer of use to him he needs to be disposed.
1 thing could break Celestias back. 1 singel agreement
Celestia for Richard help to save ponykind you will never ever be allowed to tell,write or in any other meants like a Proxy tell a lie.
No politeness, no politic or any other manipulation by telling a lie.
Try it be a Nation ruler or even a citizen of a village like that. Its Impossible to be rude and honest 100% of the time without becoming Inevitable become a unwelcome individual!
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humm, yes yes.
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You might want to reread what I wrote. I never said Chrysalis was dead.
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You already know that she can. She said as much waaaaay back when Chrissy knocked her out.
Let's see if I can find it...one sec...
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Word of God or not, I still have my doubts. This series has given us a Celestia who is exceedingly manipulative, deceitful, and willing to do anything to get what she wants. Maybe the "old magic" will make her honor the wording of a deal, but not the spirit. Or maybe she'll find some other way around it. You've given us ample reason TO doubt, old magic or not. You like throwing wrenches into things or other surprises. So I very much doubt any deal made here will be as iron clad as it first seems.