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Dang, so on top of everything else. Some crazy queen is going to try and take Richard for herself.
neat!
Damn, mans just wanna live in peace with his mate. Now, there's some random Zebra Queen going after him. I just want them to have a happy ending, but knowing you Zam...
Some people just want to watch the world burn...and sometimes the world needs a good burning...
Nothing personnel, kid
.... ugh, who was Sophia again? Sorry, but it feels like you're throwing too many threats out now, and now a mustache twirling villain seems to have literally come out of nowhere. Tension has broken for me, because now its just ridiculous.
”This is getting out of hand. Now there are two of them.” Meaning crazy monarchs in this case, who are after our protagonist...
Now to wait for more.
Update! The day is saved ♡
I liked the romantic moments in this story, but the constant hate sink characters like Twilight, Celestia, this Sophia, and now whoever this queen is just ruin it. I've followed this story for a while but I think I'm done with it. The cute romantic moments can't make up the balance of all the bad anymore.
Its the nice moments that make us love the story.
A Queen that just killed two of her best and wasted valuable ressources and send another to a doomed mission. No information are better that faulted ones but still this Queen is extreamly incompetent.
Manipulation of love? Cadance might be quite pissed learning about it...
9 days pregnancy... But how long until the child is adult? More importantly hpw long is it overall lifespan?!
I was hoping to see Twilight screw up majorly in this chapter... now some crazy queen is after him? He’s gotta have some kinda pheromones that attract crazy.
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Hes father warned of the Zebras and there lies...
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Indeed. But only because we get really nice cuddles
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Zebrica is quite a distance away. I guess they / her arrive at the end of a conflict with Twilight Sparkle.
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Apperently the story word knows only to burn and waterholes to stop burning long enough to remember how not burning 'feels like'.
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Using magic leftovers from a spell? Extreamly useful vs magic users. Since Richard has good close combat stats he should be at least a treat of a small level the way he is... For now.
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Richards father warned of Zebras and there ways.
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The situation is constantly out of hand. It only coming in the following flavors:
- currently on fire
- recovery from the burns
- prepare to burn stronger than before
Its get tiring fast... I hope for more wholesome and lore filled moments.
8 days left... Perfect time to spend em with Luna and the bewest Hive members.
Perhaps mend there relationship with Cadance? She is the olny half decent pony ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
Perhaps Luna becomes Richard & Chrysalis Godmother ♡♡♡♡♡
Whats the child name? Perhaps something to troll pony or especially Celestia ¯\_ _/¯
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Richard dick is there sugar and salt. There holy grail.
Everypony desires it. Want to ride it beyond the sunset and perhaps taje it home pet and cuddle it wile naming it George...
https://youtu.be/jPdHaNr0OAY
In other news i think:
Experienced Changeling King
vs
Changeling King in the making
Deservs a good soundtrack:
About that... If Changelings can feed from one another, i doubt Chrysalis every would have needed to come to Canterlot to ask for help... How do the former Guards keep up there love levels?
That was a nice treat!
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It's almost like the Zebra's were mentioned last chapter or something
What, did you think I'd just mention them and then not include them in some way?
How very odd. Regardless if this is the final straw then I bid you adieu!
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Fair.
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Imagine the number eight, with the top half being Pearl and the bottom being Fleetfoot.
Their love is the rest, constantly flowing around and around, meeting them and then going back around again.
Chrissy invaded Canterlot because she lost her way. Spreading love like so was thought to be impossible because until she met Richard, it was all she knew.
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The child will grow from baby to toddler (3 or 4 years old) in the space of about a year. From there it will grow as slowly as any other Human would.
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She doesn't want him for his dick
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Yet...
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Good to know. Thanks. Sooo Since Richard is a Changeling King is his lifespan equal to Chrysalis ones? Is that centuries or millenia?
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So basicly as long everyone has a partner everything is fine? Odd... They expend magic transforming or not? But as long your lore would explain magic Ambient recharge or stuff im fine ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
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Indeed a nice treat with quite the bitter aftertaste.
Wonder what the former Pony couple did in the mean time and more important what Luna is doing. Wile Celestia makes her nervous... They are sister now
Personaly i vote for a Luna only chapter bonding with Celestia. Perhaps sneak attack her with a tickel attack on the wings and a Raspberry to the belly
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Centuries, and remember that Chrissy is already a couple of centuries old.
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Than Luna has quite so time to fix Celestia and enjoy Richard and Chrysalis company
The plot thickens
Was wondering when the zebras would be moving. It really is too bad they're yet another misguided party.
Not a loss of control, huh? Well he better get better grips then, the current ones are way too slippery!
More drones, eh? Did Fleetfoot do something? 🤔 She did, didn't she?
Man, the plot thickens ever so well (while another plot gets filled, heh )
Seriously tho, great Chapter!
shit this is a awesome story.
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I wouldn't say they're misguided. In fact I'd go so far as to say they know exactly what they're doing, why they're doing it, and how they're going to do it.
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So did Cozy Glow. 😘
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Who?
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A particular megalomaniacal filly who tried to take over the world. It would have worked too if it weren't for those meddlesome kids!
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Ah, a new character. I haven't watched the show since mid season 3
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Yeah, there are some good and bad things. But we'll not give out any more spoilers. 😘
WHAT IN THE GODDAMN FUCK
Wew... Just finished both this story and its prequel. First off, this version of Twilight is a goddamned psychopath. How did she make any friends, and why aren't her friends there to reel her in? I am... hoping that she will come out of these delusions eventually, but I am a little biased in that Twilight's character holds a special place in my heart, and seeing her like this... hurts a little.
That said, I enjoy a sympathetic human-paired Chrysalis and I look forward to more.
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The Mane Six doesn't exist in this universe, Twilight literally only has Celestia, Shining and Cadance.
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Wait... So how did the whole Nightmare Moon thing and the Summer Sun Celebration work out? I think I'm missing some context.
Well, that's not ominous at all.
At some point all these evil masterminds after Richard will collide and start infighting.
Okay, I am quite confused... so this is marked as a sequel to Don't Judge, but... it's actually a rewrite? As someone who just finished the first one and came here being told that it's a sequel I am very confused. So the whole second act of the last story didn't happen? I don't mind rewrites, but at least mark it as such.
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You just don’t want you me to have a happy ending…
Love the story so far!