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Fucking cliffhangers; for god's sake don't end with shit like that! Arrrrgh!
These constant cliffhangers and surprises and red herrings are getting old.
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I think that Celestia knew what would happen so that Richard would be weakened into accepting whatever she has to say in order to save his love. That's just downright cruel right there.
(Triggered)
Good chapter friendo
These cliffhangers. I never asked for this.
Well....son of a cussing cussword!
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Holy shit, I can't wait to read what happens next!
For fucks sake!
Why can't they just be happy? Fuck you Zam
(I love you really, but please don't let this be the end!)
Well I did not see that coming! Always love to see a character have to face the consequences of their actions, my immersion is pleased!!
I actually like the cliffhangers it keeps you on your feet and waiting for the next story so that way you won’t lose interest in them I mean look at sword art online
screw chrysalis, is the baby alive. I need to know what gender it is.
By screw chrysalis going to assume its like a fake out death.
two point of interest is that the ponies don't seem to know about the birthing problem or the ancient magic used to find Richard and Chrysalis.
The first point could mean that Celestia was full of shit about the population thing and the other means that she was somehow able to cover up a culling of the innocents used to power her ancient magic somehow.
Called it.
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?
I keep expecting these chapters to ask me if I speak French.
I suspect the purpose of the guard is something I considered last chapter: that just because nobody can pull any shit while the spell's on doesn't mean that they can't pull any shit after everything's over. I also have to question how a spell that's supposed to protect the affected from harm can even function if the spell is inherently dangerous to the target. Given that this spell is supposed to have a life of its own and complete dedication to its assigned task, that seems like it would cause a failure in the casting. Like telling a computer to do multiplication until it hits 100 but starting it at 0. Not that I believe for even a moment that Chrysalis is dead, mind you.
Well I can tell that part 3 is going to be swell
Well, if she really has died, then Celestia might have lost the only thing she could use to make Richard help her. He might just sit and wait for the end in that dome while Celestia is forced to watch the only hope for her ponies waste away.
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More then likely she’s hiding it from the population to hide a mass panic. Imagine if you found out you were a generation or two away from extinction. More then likely she’s making sure it stays a secret by any means nessessary, otherwise the time she has to save those idiots would shrink drastically. This is a race that panics at the sight of a bunny stampede mind you, how would they handle extinction?
I do hope it’s brought up what exactly she used to power that spell. It might just demonstrate why her kind might not deserve to live on beyond a few archaeological findings. Besides that I like the idea of her being left to watch is everything she’s built crumbles around her.
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That would be a horrible irony for Celestia, she had hoped using such a dangerous spell could force Richard to save her kind. Only for the spell to take away the only leverage that she has. Now trapped forever, with her ponies none the wiser about their approaching doom. Give me hopes that it eventually runs out of energy, but only when she’s realized it’s too late.
Oh shit
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I'm not sure what you're talking about. I just meant that a spell, especially an intelligent one, given the directives of drawing people in and keeping them alive once inside shouldn't have been able to affect someone that wouldn't survive being drawn in. The spell should have suffered the magical equivalent of a fatal exception error either when they cast it or when she entered the dome. Though I suppose the latter could be how the next chapter starts.
One’s Richard and one is Celestia: Take a stab at who’s who in this video.
Interesting change in events.
Now we see if it is time for a scorched earth, after all, If Richard has no reason to live, why live at all.
Deny the ponies their salvation.
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I want to assume new luna is going to interfere to help Richard since she's technically his sister Emily in luna's body however that mysterious being has me worried.
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Yes, the love of her life (who is the father of her soon to be child) is panicking, and is about to come face to face with their greatest enemy, and she's faking it. She literally threw up twice and had her horn and wings dissolved without changeling fire. Not to mention that, something bad happening to Chrysalis is astronomically dangerous for the baby. So saying screw Chrysalis is not different then saying screw the baby.
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in hindsight I realize a few hours later after I had gotten some sleep I realized how heartless that was given the scene with that mare and her children that followed beforehand.
In all seriousness, hoping its just a hibernation like near death state to conserve energy long enough for cadance to have her wtf have I done moment since she really didn't want to do this and come around in the end to side with Non luna. Currently Richard's without his powers facing off against three alicorns, shining armor, and the royal guard. Luna, I'm not counting cause Emily and the night guard are secretly on his side or assuming so.
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The love of her life.
I don't know why, but I really love that phrase. I'ma use that at some point, thanks
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You'll see
You're ok me cruel writer. Damn near every chapter ends with you blue balling us like it's your damn kink. Now I have to wait at least 3 weeks for a new character. And I can't wait that long. I NEEED to see how this goes. And I knew you added that guard part just to pad out this chapter and leave us at this cliff hanger. You evil evil bastard. Anyway I'll be waiting to read the next chapter religiously
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This proves that violence is the question and the answer is yes
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Wait, what 3 alicorns? Celestia, Cadance, and if Luna is on his side then that's only 2.
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assuming twilight with the element of magic is on the same tier as an alicorn, Cadance and Celestia.
It totally wasn't me thinking twilight was an alicorn in this story and had to re-read parts of the first story to check. *innocent whistling*
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Bruh.
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The Elements of Harmony do not exist in this AU.
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okay, I'm going to go re-read the first story. I only vaguely remember
twilight summoned him to equestria,
princess bullshit that causes him to leave,
he meets chrysalis posing as a unicorn, they start getting close,
twilight shows up to be a threat to the romance,
Chrysalis reveal herself and Richard is okay with it,
they start getting close until a meeting with Celestia goes sideways,
Cadance and Chrysalis have a nice chat with Cadance learning Chrysalis can actually fall in love with someone,
an epic escape scene occurs where luna gets her ass handed to her,
somewhere I think Celestia tried something similar to brain washing to make Richard think she was his mom and they shared some type of bond.
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Now you're mixing it with a different story.
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I think he means the dead second act where Celestia was Richards mother in this story.
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Ooooh!
I skipped that since I only got to this story recently, so I never bothered reading the "non canon" chapters.
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Don't bother, they're awful
I have no idea what I was thinking when I wrote them, nothing clever obviously
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If Celestia can't revert him, she'll kill Chrysalis and force his slavery.
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Well Richard could do good old. Death before slavery and use will power to stand tall and never surrender and do exterminatus on ponies
Where is part 3
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Coming soon. It's my birthday today though, so not today
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Well happy birthday and thanks for all that you do
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Dont feed the troll streak
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Wait long enough and they chance color...
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Just another Monday for Sunbutt. Wait for the next one and we get a 'public use for all' next week
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Yes you can
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Actualy that sound possible
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Would blow the point of the story...
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This Equestria seem to deserv to fate to nothing...
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PRICELESS
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No Twicorn, no elements but 100% Sunbutt lunatic
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Meh... It had potencial...
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How old you get? How your not to old to finish the story... Us using Necromancing on your ass could get strange...