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This Twilight is so absolutely out of character that it makes me wonder why she was included at all in the story and not a different character. Because it's not Twilight Sparkle, student of Friendship here. I don't recognize her.
God dammit Twilight!!!
Oh my, this is getting interesting but I don't think Celestia will be very pleased with you Twilight; she wants Richard, not a broken husk of Richard which is what will happen if she splits Richard and Chrissy up that way if their relationship really is as strong as portrayed.
Anyways, I hope we get to see a few of Celestia's PoV chapters where we see what she's planning to do to get Richard's affections, it'd be entertaining for me to see Celestia actually succeeding in creating a relationship between her and Richard but she ends up getting friend-zoned, imagine how annoyed she'd be
... Fucking Twilight...
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Twilight DOES tend to blow things out of proportion though if you remember episodes like Lesson Zero; it's possible that this is just another one of those cases but she's taking it a bit too far.
Why is Twilight such a sociopath?
No, don't answer. It's a rhetorical question.
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The supposed future of all of ponykind is on the line, and she is attacking an already unhappy Savior for personal reasons.
No, Twilight at her worst would not do this. She never intended the out of control situation in Lesson Zero, and supposedly learned her lesson already. This is far beyond that, and goes against the morality of all her role models already.
What would Cadance do if she found out?
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If it were me, my excuse would be the AU tag.
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You have a point but that was because the whole town went out of control so it was clear something went wrong, all that's happened in this story is that Richard has gotten very angry with her and Celestia for manipulating him (which she thought was more of a tantrum, it seems). I'm not denying that this Twilight IS out of character, I do believe that she wouldn't have resorted to poisoning or anything that extreme; I was just trying to say that with her tendency to blow things out of proportion, her current behaviour isn't too far out o character, especially if she thinks her actions are justified for whatever reason.
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I hereby direct you to read the AN on this chapter. Click here please.
Just to clarify for everyone. I know Twilight is a OOC, and I don't really care too much about it.
The AU tag is there for a reason
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Wrong story mate
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I'm sorry, but I just love how you said that you don't like Twilight and then you used a Twilight emoticon
It will be funny when twilight tries to actively stop Richard and Chrissy from having sex.
Why do I feel like twilights gonna get a taste of that gun firsthand when they eventually try to physically take her from him?
Twilight....I hope you get dunked on. Dunk on so hard.
Nice chapter m8, for a moment I thought Richard was fucked in more ways than one.
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Thank you for the link, but realize I didn't read the original story, and there is no warning in this one about that (even though the beginning chapter of this story was written in such a way as to not require reading of the original, it didn't include that kind of note about Twilight's handling).
I'm impressed with Richard here. That he managed to keep a gun secret from Princess Books is a feat in of itself (though it's just a guess, I doubt he'd have been allowed to keep it if the royals knew about it and what it is for).
Also,
It's so hilarious that you think you or Celestia fit the description, Purple Dumb.
"Alright you sociopathic book whorse, this is my BOOMSTICK!"
That's gonna be a fun chapter
Thank god the idiots are only stooping to use shit tactics like this, if they ever decided to toss niceties out the window, they'd kidnap him, lock him into the deepest, most secure facility and milk him for what he's worth. The only real thing stopping them, is the author.
And the potential torrent of rage in the comments
Speaking of which, has anyone used that as a story plot? Where humans are abducted due to their surprising effectiveness as sperm donors and surrogates to restore a horribly declining Equestria/Other Species Nations. It'd be hella dark from the premise, without even starting.
You aint fooling anybody with who the poisoner was. Either twilight or sunset. I vote sunset
The poison wasn't meant to harm her but to make her and Richard hate each other but it backfire because she's a changling not a pony. Twilight is crazy...this is her going all "notice me senpai"
Oh yes, i do so love when you write about females in your fics going feral, the way they go all crazy obsessive, it's just great.
Going to be pretty amusing if the perp turns out to be someone else than Twilight and people will feel like idiots
Still, nice to see that things have gone kinda-sorta back to normal.
Now just to do some investigation into the problem at hand.
i still bank on it not being Twi - if she knew about Chrysalis, she'd tell Celestia. And it would be pretty easy to expunge a wanted criminal.
No, something else is at play here.
... or i'm just looking too deeply into it and it really is Twi.
You keep me guessing. Good job!
7284145 Twicunt seems pretty much asexual in this story so far. All she cares about is getting a hold of more books to learn more spells. She's basically just a power hungry cunt.
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For who though? Celestia, Richard or Knowledge?
I do hope you don't plan on letting Twilight get away with that stunt.
and now comes the awkward question of "why is it bad if you bite me?"
I CALLED IT! HAH!
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Oh please, Twilight's obviously hot for Celestia here. The only reason she doesn't pursue her herself is that she worships Celestia to the point that it would be blasphemous for her to stick her brown nose up Sunbutt's other hole, instead the one she usually uses.
I honestly don't know why everyone is dancing around saying its Twilight. Its kinda bloody obvious. Its like trying to hide the fact the Emperor is the villain in Star Wars. We all kinda know.
Either way, excellently put together.
I think celestia is the one how poisoned Richard or chrysalis it is getting very interesting to read keep up a good work update soon
7283876 ' Bursts in '. Richard stop what your doing
Chrysalis : What the hell are you doing! ' Slashes her.'
7284766 something is telling me that she will get away with it......until some sort of mid-story point arrive
7285554 Probably. That seems to be how it goes usually.
I am going to start calling Twilight Harley Quinn before to much longer it is defiantly time for a smack down.
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It's kind of fitting, considering that they share a Voice Actor.
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vary good I was wondering if anypony would get the reference.
Twilight, we know it was you. So I have only one thing to say. . . . . . I'M GOING TO BREAK MY MECHANICAL FOOT OFF IN YOUR ASS!!!!
When a new chapter of Zamariac's stories come out:
Twilight's plans are like my pancreas; neither of them work.
Twilight I am going to break my foot off in your ass and then use you as a football
Twilight's flank is not big enough to hold the number of feet that wish to be firmly and painfully placed there. That was a low blow be even her standards. Silver lining: She is now the proud owner of my foot which much like Piccolo has said to Frieza, is going between her lungs and colon.
shitshitfuCKFUCKFUCKSHITSHITFUCKSHITFUCKINGSHITFUCK
Past that: Oh, well that's okay, then.
End: God fucking damn it, Twilight. You need to go get Celestia's cock out of your ass.
7288337 i really don't think its twilight or celestia in this instance, if it was why would zam have hidden their name?
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You did see the Alt Universe tag right? If you'd read the prequel then I wouldn't have to explain that I made Twilight as bashable as I could think to do. Thus making her a nutcase with a black and white regard to the world suits her just fine for me.
But as you've pointed out, there's nothing giving reason for her being as she is, so I shall put something in the description for later.
Also, Celestia in the universe hasn't actually had much experience in the flirting department, thus her need to get Cadance's tips and make a plan with her overly-faithful student.
TLDR:- Twilight's a nutcase, Celestia's clueless in romance, and this is how my story will portray them. Deal with it. Good day
Twilight's going to try direct manipulation, isn't she?
that BITCH! TWILIGHT IM COMING FOR YOU!
I remember a time before I started reading this sh*t (delisiuos poison) when Twilight was that adorkable librarian that liked making friends. But now all I see is a crazy b*tch with the Darth Vader Imperial March playing in the background anytime she's on "screen". Why do you write such good characters!? Also yay Chrissy is back!
Also I believe the term that b*tch has been used more times in your comment section than it has in it's entire existence of being a phrase.