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Jehovah's Witnesses to the rescue!
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It was honestly hard to stop laughing at that joke
that is a difficult life crisis. that potion didnt help much either
Who was that ringing the bell, I wonder; Is it a certain lavender Unicorn coming to see if she can split Richard and Chrissy up? or is it our favourite solar princess coming to try and build a better relationship with Richard? I guess we'll have to stay tuned and find out. Personally, I hope it'll be something like Celestia dropping by for a visit (much to Chrissy's and Richard's chagrin) as I'd like to see what crazy plans she's got in store for gaining Richard's affections... so long as she doesn't go all yandere on us yet
Yeah, keep up the good work and I'm looking forward to more
That doorbell could be Twilight, Celestia or the guards but I'm thinking of that waitress, her smile and no negative comments from Chrissy, says she's really supportive of inter-species relationships, and I'd probably like to see more of her
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They can't hold a candle to the true doorbell-ringing saviors!
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This chapter felt a bit too important to be considered filler
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Really, hmm.
7295511 Nah dude, then Chrissy would've noticed, Twilight doesn't know her true nature, she can't fake a smile and lie while her inner rage lights her up like a beacon. But she did poison the drink, the waitress was so enthused when the restaurant recently "received" a shipment from the castle, it'd be foolish to poison the lot and hope one reaches Richard and Chrysalis, so prepare a laced one and pass it off to the waitress who's none the wiser.
I feel it would be beneficial to a) put the POV in the title as you did for "Negotiation Preparation -Celestia" and "Negotiation Preparation -Twilight" and b) did not change POV in the middle of chapters as you have in the past. I don't really want to bring up the badfic bingo sheet (I just did anyway) but announced POV changes are generally poor form in my opinion.
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Thank you for your advice, but although it is 'poor form' I find it suits my style just fine.
An added note for 'Twilight is OOC' whiners. Twilight is utterly loyal to Celestia. To the point that she's gone along with at least two of her rather poor ideas to solve major crises without any objections. It's even been shown in show, that if Twilight even THINKS Celestia will be disappointed in her, her common sense and even morals go out the window (Lesson Zero anyone?). This has NOT been corrected in show either, as the No Second Prances showed from her attitude in trying to seperate Starlight and Trixie because she didn't want Trixie around Celestia (despite the fact that Starlight, her own student, was guilty of stuff far worse than Trixie ever was.)
That said, yes Twilight and Celestia are heavily flanderized in these stories, but it's not out of the question to think that, given what she's like in canon, that if Celestia were anything like she is in these stories, that Twilight would be similarly knocked down the alignment chart as well.
In fact I shudder to think what Sunset Shimmer's like in this 'verse...assuming Twilight didn't kill her for rebelling against Celestia...
Hmm, I think a small purple Unicorns plan worked far better than she thought...
7295599 Yeah, people usually call non-canon stuff filler, and this looks pretty canon.
hum a interesting chapter I love it.
I don't have much ta say, other then Twilight be scary, her poison and still working
So I'm gonna leave this, the world need more
cookies
Super easy Penutbutter cookies
1 cup penutbutter
1 cup white surger
1 egg
Preheat oven ta 350 Fahrenheit
Put the formed cookies in for 12 minutes
1 cup=240 milliliters
350 fah= 177 cel
What will the sex be like?
7295658 I find it far too depressing that that is far too true
Can I give a like to the Author's Note?
7295652 I don't mind how you change povs in the slightest
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Like away
AUTHORS NOTE
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Do you meant the Lunar Witnesses?:
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I believe that this series shows that the don't stick your d*ck in crazy concept is useless. Because no d*ck has been sticked and these crazy b*tches still be crazy.
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A bit odd... But interesting.
Shit be whack, yo.
What’s up with the virgin shield?
Twilight Sparkle Element of obsession
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Helps some character to stay sane...