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Mudraynebow
Look into my eyes... It's where my demons hide... Don't get too close, it's dark inside...
Mudraynebow
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Just something I wrote awhile ago. Thought I'd just post it now for the heck of it
6034682 it's... Interesting? Maybe it's cuz I was expecting a clopfic or something like that, I just read featured and popular n stuff.. Didn't expect... This...
Have a like, lord knows you may need it once it racks up views. Most arent into this. Neither am I, but it's creative.
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Thanks, I guess. It was just something I wrote rather randomly. I wasn't even planning to post this, but then I just decided to, and see what happened. And yeah, this is no clopfic, but I can see why some people could mistake it for one at first sight which is why I put the grimdark warning atop the description.
i.imgur.com/w39wpuV.gif
The hell just-
That....That twisted sideways in a backwards manner....Real fast.
Good work non the less even if it was a 3AM creation
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Thanks!
I was kind of expecting more of a chained up in the basement kind of thing and as I read on, I expected him to have been turned to stone.
Interesting idea......but I don't think it was executed all that well. I had a hunch about what was going to happen, but that ending came just WAY TOO FAST. The story could've been helped with more emotional description and detail about the whole situation.
Again, the ending could have been drawn out far more than it was, and that abruptness really did the story a disservice.
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I guess if you want, I could edit this. This is simply a work of my tired mind... I wasn't going to post this at all originally
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That probably would have been for the best. There's no reason an author should publish a story without it being ready for viewing.
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You don't understand... This was never really meant to be viewed, if that makes any sense... It was just some weird story I wrote when I was tired and not thinking straight
I only skimmed it... but where's the grimdark I was promised?
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Hint of necrophilia.
I'm curious; what did Adam say to deserve a knife to the chest?
6058603 ah.
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Well it's sure better then the "D.H." you write. More subtle and sexier. I think you could continue this story with soft-necro theme and maybe a little romance, gore, plus murder. Its nice that its necro part is more focused on Twilight love for Adam then on just brainless slaughter and gore. With this kind of story you could be a nice alternative for >>headless_rainbow stories.
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Well, I'm glad you like it, but you really think it's worth continuing?
6156366 I will be blunt with you, i LOVE good necrophilia stories. Headless_rainbow writes the closes ones to the ideal dark-necro stories as i could find on this site but all of them are the same, he starts it small then in 3th chapter the murderer is killing the princesses and destroying the world. If you gonna continue it as a "mystery murder" with corpse fucking and maybe a bit of psycho twist to this it could be a good story . There is not a SINGLE story on this site with a Pony killing for the pleasure of fucking the one she/he loves or just to satisfy they urges to FUCK a cold one. If you do find one its almost 100% trollfick with some "he fucked her dead assholl but then he stopped... The End" kind of a story. Your writing skills are on a good level to write a real story with at last a bit of a sense behind it and i see you are not afraid of "going for it" with the dark sick stuff. If it would be a continuation of this one or a new one, thats what you need to decide. :)
I will send you my old short script i was working one with one writer, you may got some inspiration form that. :P
But the decision is of course yours.