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Run little pony! Run!
I'd like them to run into a benevolent changeling hive (not Chrysalis) at some point.
Volcanoes are no joke...
...what??
For the record, I think this chapter was well done.
I like how this is. It isn't dark like you said it had been coming out as, but it's definitely conveying a good sense of immediate, mortal danger.
This... is fine. Good, even. Significantly less dark than I expected... while it's awful, it's not played up for mopeyness and such.
The running scene with Maud is particularly evocative, too, and shows how far you've come since something like the fight against the shadow wolves, which was a big climax before... but told in a way where it kinda felt like I was watching someone describing the event, especially the plummeting at the beginning.
This was a really good little chapter. :) super exciting.
Wow! Very evocative! Fantastic creation of atmosphere, fear and danger.
Now that song's stuck in my head... Thanks.
VOLCANO BITCH!
RUN SUCKA RUN! Beat the heat!
An awesome chapter well done dude!
Being that guy, I was listening to this while reading.
To me it fit.
Keep it up dude!
This chapter was beautifully dfone, really shows the feeling of fleeing your home.
Volcanoes! Pyroclastic clouds! Running away drama!
Just switch out the humans with ponys and the clip reflects the chapter. Alot.
Love a good volcano chapter or story.
I think it was well done, I like the perspective shifts between Maud and Tarnish.
I once saw footage from the St. Helens eruption... the individual was caught by the ash cloud (fortunately not a pyroclastic flow). He was sure he wouldn't survive, but decided to film his 'last moments'. This turned into around an hour of film as he walked out of said cloud.
This chapter brought back that memory... and the memory of living in Portland at the time... thanks.
No, really. Thanks.
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I was just a few miles away from Mt Saint Helens when it blew. We fled to Spokane Washington. Everything was covered in ash. I was... I think six? The birds all died. Thousands of dead birds and little animals and everything was covered in ash. I thought it was snowing. It was one of the most terrifying moments of my life.
And the sound, oh goddess the sound.
It's not often I'm in the mood to randomly suggest explosions for a story, yet have that urge already covered in the chapter I just read.
Yay for things that go boom!
I enjoyed that. Really conveyed that terrified sense of immediate peril. I've been wondering when the volcano would blow. Can't wait to see how bad it gets before they make it to safety
Do not rewrite..... continue please!
Considering how much difficulty you had writing this chapter, I think its really good. You get that good sense of panic from an explosive eruption, and we get to see more of Maud's endurance. Then you add just a touch of heartwarming at the end with Tarnish trying to take care of Maud before he continues their retreat.
Unless they get found by a scouting party soon, their biggest issue is going to be water. They've only got 1 canteen of it and Maud is already severely dehydrated from the escape.
I can see now how you thought something darker than this might be the work of Black Plot Bunnies.
All in all, I think it's a damn fine portrayal of what happens in the wake of a new Volcano.
Having lived in the shadow of Mt. St. Hellen's all my life I can really see what you were doing there.
Literally right when I finally catch up with the story, you post this chapter... Sweet! By the way great job, man, I've been really enjoying this story so far
Keep up the good work m8
Keep it.
6557010 Thought about it a bit overnight and realized a few things. Namely their water situation would be fine since Tarnished can condense water at will. At the end, Tarnished has no trouble picking up Maud and carrying her on his back. Either he's still under the effect of adrenaline or he's gotten a lot stronger since the last time he tried carrying Maud around in his magic.
However, in terms of consequences:
-Maud's wagon, that has been with them from the start? gone
-the red riverbed rock Tarnished gave Maud? gone
-the fossil Tarnished gave Maud? gone
-a deadly, magic radiating volcano that's not too far from Ponyville. That's clearly not going to cause problems.
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Tarnish is at his strongest when surrounded by deadly, hostile magic.
He's also been getting stronger, as evidence by him helping to push the wagon uphill.
I was wondering if anybody would remember the treasures being lost.
Holy s@$&... Wow, I did not expect that.
Damn.
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I left behind many clues in the past few chapters.
6560200 I can't pick up foreshadowing to save my life lol. I always think something else will happen, then bam! Surprise!
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These were mentioned several times.
It is a subtle mention, but I left behind a trail of clues.
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All of them are real. Extensive searching in a dictionary. This is why sometimes there is a delay in a chapter. I'm doing something special. Which is a fancy word for stupid.
They'd better hope they don't run afoul of any pyroclastic lightning. That stuff is deadly as all hell. Like, volcanoes are bad enough, pyroclastic flows are bad enough, but add in the lightning? Oh, boy.
A well done chapter, as per usual! Keep up the good work!
Wow... Ya... I can only imagine the chaos you have planned for the future of this story as a result of this...
The title was the first sign. It got the damn song stuck in my head too. And to think, you put that song in the comments a while ago.
But they lost everything. That is like a Pompeii or St. Helens suprise there, it conveyed real emotion.
All i can say about #102 is WOW!
This is not good for Maud and Tarnish but they are in luck because they survived the birth a new vulcano which probably classified as a Plinic eruption which is the worst kind of eruption there is. I also assume this was a VEI of 6 like Vesuvius when it buried the town of Pompeii.
Intense.
Holy shit!
this chapter is amazing.