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Full stop missing?
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Limestone: We love to play dodge ball. But we don't have any balls. We have a lot of boulders though.
This was cute. Maud is very fun. The jokes are great. Thanks!
Ah. I should've figured the bone hadn't set yet. It's only been, what, a few days?
I see Pinkie wasn't the only extrovert to come off of this farm.
I have no idea why Trixie smelling like cheese amuses me, but it does.
In theory, this is a good place for Tarnish to learn some magical control. There's barely anypony around and at least one who's immune to his magic. The ley lines... well, they could help or hurt, depending on how powerful he is and whether he knows how to do anything with them. Twilight would be of help there.
Also, between speaking with the town doctor and talking about showing Tarnish her cave, Maud may be setting ponies up for a misunderstanding regarding how far her relationship with Tarnish has progressed. We'll have to see.
Also:
Capitalization needed.
Was that actually pinkie?
Awesome chapter, once again dude, this was great! Loved the interactions, hehehe, Limestone's like her sister?
Or... is she somehow... worse D:
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... I bet Maud is good at that game *coughrefertoMaudPieepisodecough*
Maud's a nice mare. She wouldn't show her cave to just anypony!
All joking aside?
This whole story has mostly consisted of Tarnish running into abusive, horrible Ponies (and other creatures, though the Diamond Dog bitch was basically sweet) who have hurt him and used him every way possible. Tarnish is naive and trouble-prone. He could use somepony like Maud, who is good, honorable and extremely HONEST and RELIABLE.
As a matter of fact, so far she's saved his life, fed him, set his leg, bared her soul to him, paid for professional medical care, and generally been very protective and kind toward him. If I were Tarnish, I'd be at least half in love with the mare by this point.
And unless this is a horribly dark version of the Pie Family, they're bound to be nicer to him than -- well, than a lot of the folk he's run into before he met Maud.
Shouldn't this be Cloudy? Or are we going into a MLP/FFVII Crossover?
PFFT! HAHAHAHAHHAHAHA!!! That could be so misinterpreted. I do like Limestone, Maud was right. And oh boy, i want to see how this desends, it always gets worse before it gets better.
Dear god limestones just like pinkie that's so out of character isn't she supposed to be the angry one
6924126 Looks like this was written before the ep where we really got to meet the rest of the Pie family.
Given that, I'm surprised they got Marble right.
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Also got the relationships wrong, Marble is Pinkie's Twin and Limestone is older IIRC.
6828792 Just reading this ... is she telling her parents that she showed him her private cave?
7180770 the expression the doc had when he heard that lol.
a bit creepy.yet somehow hot... im going go drown myself in an underground lake now.
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Of Course they don't have any balls. They are fillies/Mares. I would be surprised if they did.
I love that line so much.
CONTEXT!!!!
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trixie smells like cheese.
i love it