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I look forward to seeing Tarnish's spell.
I think tarnish's spell will have something to do with nullifying or reversing magical abilities. I guess we'll see!
Hehehe special husband hugs...
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Totally innocent!
6343947 totally... I think Muad's father is going to be making some more pies to fill the vacuum.
With his cutie mark what it is and the his powers are........me thinks his "spell" is gonna be akin to a wabbajack.
Awesome chapter!
Sepcia Spells? Hmm... that's interesting.
Nice job!
6365936 That sounds fun :rainbowiss:
Hehehe, loved that staff.
Ok I know that the Chaceverse is different than this, but does the special spell thing carry over and if it does then what would Buckys spell be?
That's an interesting thing. Ive always acknowleged some talent use in a unicorn, but not a full spell.
6715246 probably something to do with alcohol. Or shagging. Or family. Or making people defecate explosively.
I want to point something out that's been bothering me with this story.
“If you say so, I’ll take your word for it.”
What you're doing here, you do a lot - you're saying the same thing twice. Both phrases express the exact same thing: an incredulity on the part of the speaker. If you'd tacked on "whatever you say, suuuuUUUUuuuuure, uh-huh" and more you would still just be saying one thing.
It's a bad habit that pops up quite a bit in this story. The reader doesn't need things restated over and over again because if they didn't understand they can just go back and reread. By writing it twice you're basically saying you don't think they can understand unless you force them into a type of rereading.
It's repetitive, overstating, unnecessary, needlessly verbose. (See? It's a bit annoying too.)
But I do want to point out that I am making this critical statement after having read almost 70 chapters. It's pretty fair to say that I've been enjoying myself as I've been reading this, I'm just looking to make it so the next thing I read from you is even more enjoyable.
Huh, I was darkly speculating about entropy curses earlier, but now I wonder if that's really gonna be it.
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Whenever a character says something like that or says something grammatically incorrect I just think of it as a part of their speech pattern ( especially if they do so repeatedly ). So long as it's actually a part of dialogue I don't pay attention to it as an issue.
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He has one. It's the one that lets him instantly make beer from its constituent parts.
I was listening to "Penny Lane" by the Beatles when I read Pinny explain her name. I had to look at the ceiling and contemplate life for a bit.
I'd say he's channeling his inner rubber duckie.