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neat, so wild magic meets lightning storm....
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I'm glad I'm not alone in thinking that was an extremely abrupt scene change that wasn't very well explained right at the beginning and only got worse.
Such a relief. Or something resembling relief, anyway.
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Life takes odd turns. I try to capture that sometimes. Random stuff happens and we can't figure out why. Good fiction should reflect real life.
Two times 'the', or a word missing.
Another fun Pie fact:
The first hot pocket like devices, called pocket pies, were engineered to fit in a miner's pocket so he had a relatively warm meal later in his shift. Said pies were filled with potatoes, carrots, stew like gravy and various minced meats. Less common were fruit flavored varrieties.
So rocks and pies really do go together!
I feel like tarnish as drunk as I am I can sympathize how he feels which makes it really trippy reading this chapter while inebriated, sometimes magic is intoxicating.
For me it was just cider and Jaeger bombs
XD
Give Pinkie and Cheese enough time together and you might have little sandwiches to go with your pies too.
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Pinkie's romantic interest has not yet been revealed.
Well now, you had my interest, now you have my attention.
Yay! I caught up! This has been fun to read and see how they develop. Thanks!
I feel like the NOD harvester from C&C 3 while reading this chapter:
"WE must have MORE!"
This whole family has one hell of a dirty sense of humor. I love it.
This was a funny chapter, hehehe.
Awesome job, once again.
Hmmm, this will go somewhere. Welp, I'm done for today. G'night.
LOUD NOISES!
I must admit that I thought Cloudy was trying to make some kind of food pun out of Teapot Pie.
I was a little sad that she didn't.
6928261 oh it was food aright *snicker* its just a matter of how its baked it lol
foalfactorys need food too!
da ba dee da ba deye